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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: spvd
can u add the update and page numbers and date int he title dear?

next time i'll keep this in mind

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latecomer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

part 2

Pindrop silence in their home,something seldom though madhur was not charter box like geet ,how can geet be so quite, thought madhur while darting their huge room where is she???

GEEET, GEEET kaha hai tu???shouted madhu to seek geet attention but could n't find her , fear of what happen to geet , madhur ran downstair her vision blurred n she didn't notice the big vase and collided she fall on sofa it was when madhu found geet sleeping on it and tv remote in her hand and at same time tendulkar completed his 100th century for a second she forgot to inhale n jus shouted, GEEET GEEET uth dekh he completed his 100th century

"WHAT!!! he hit his100th century , aur main budhu gode bach k so rahi thu", geet complained

"yeh sab us RK ki wajah se hua naa woh so called superstar aata aur na mum mujhe us boring jagah le jati aur naa mera match chhootta " geet continues her shikayat

"geet but yeh uska kam hai naa ,hua yeh ki mom caught us and she took u means geet with her not madhur,said madhur

"then also mum took me,how cruel ",geet said annoyingly

"stop it geet mum does it for ur betterment actually she want u to be actor " madhur revealed padmini secret.

"what, she can't force me i wanna be doctor jisme brain use hota not that nonsense occupation acting and tell me when u wanna be fashion designer mum don't had any problem wid u then why me?

" mum hate docters n u knew it but u always justify ur rebellious nature n u opting medical as ur profession "mentioned madhu

"but why madhu , doesn't they treat us infact they are god to save our precious life"

"whatever, i dunno now cheer up and u didnt updated fb and we have bed to sleep over not sofa "said madhur

"tu chal main aati hoon,geet said lazily and typed few word on fb trimphantt smile on her beautiful face and headed for their room

if u like it plz comment and press like button

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

part 2
nice part...
cont soon...

PS - edit the title...like this dear like the pm NEW FF "Entangled" part 2 / 8 june'12

Edited by spvd - 13 years ago

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sdlife19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

nice update...

liked geet here

thx for pm

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Challiya Bitch !! ;) !!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Short Update BUT Nice one 😉

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Amanda D'Souza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

@swarnakanak: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊

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Ash1991

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

amazing start...

do pm the next part...sent u request...

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latecomer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

part 3

Oblivious of geet absence in house madhur logged in to peep in fb and to get shock of her life her twin sibling had left mumbai to be in her native place and to conquer what was theirs, unaware of surrounding when first ray of sun hit her, geet opened her eye in a midst of hay of which some of them tickling her sense now and then, sleeping under the sky doesn't make much difference but for family and place she really belong s was forbiden and being a girl can't roam here n there of ur own but u need a protector to walk over but thanks to her looks which were screaming to be a handa and rano caught her at right time before anyone eye her and after a little intro it was all she knew and told geet her relation to place and about herself but to geet it was the matter of life and death their dignity and here in the mumbai when geet absence revealed through her fb status it was 2:00 day which was too late by then she must be in hoshiyarpur but the reaon behind her arrival to her birth place was known to her taiji and that to when geet asked rano to convince padmini to grand her permision to pursue her medical studies...

rano: geet tu yaha kyun aai hai aur padmini ne tujhe mana nai kiya

geet: u know what taiji mana karna toh unki hobby hai toh maine unse pucha hi nai aur yaha chali

rano: tujhe pata hai padmini ko kitni chinta ho rahi ho gi tumhari tumne use bataya bhi nai

geet: aap chinta mat karo maine fb pe status dal diya hai

rano: accha ye bata tu yaha ayi kyun hai aur tujhe yaha ka pata kisne diya

geet : u know what mom is cynic unhe sab mein bas khot hi nazor ata hai, accha tussi manu yeh daso ab unhe mere dr banne mein kya burai nazar aati hai

rano: geet , why dont u understant its not easy for her

geet what taiji main itni door se apke pas isliye aayi ki aap mom ko convince karoge aur app hai ki mujhe hi samhja rahe ho this is not fair.

it was when brij enter in havelibut before he could get any clue of geet presence she was no where ot be seen .

in mumbai , when padmini get acquainted with geet departure to hoshiyarpur ,thousand of volts passed through her , all she could do scream geet name so loud till she fainted.

i know the update is not good and its all the sideffect of sooo long gap but for next update i'll definately gonna write a lil better...