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This story is about two innocents girls and how their life got entangled with each other though both enjoy this hide and seek of destiny ,but sometime god has other plan which u can't even imagine...
khuda ki iyanat ne saase mila di...zindagi ki sazisho ne taqdeer ulzha di.
CHARACTERS:
MADHUR HANDA

madhur(madhu):She is innocent , naive, and obedient child of their parent and want to be fashion deshiner and not so friendly with anyone
GEET HANDA
Drashti Dhami

she is naughty yet innocent ,biggest prankster,she is a rebel,chatter box @500/minute nonstop...


MAAN SINGH KHURANA

Gurmeet as Maan

biggest business tycoon of world, he is rude , arrogant and hate female of human spieces

RIDHVIK KAPOOR
actor, superstar, casonova ,film industry owe kapoors
other characters:
Dev singh khurana: maan' brother
Savitri Khurana: maan's daadi
Padmini handa: geet' n madhur's mom
Prolouge
they both borned simultaneous and were jointed to each other through few nevres near their heart or say their nerve got entangled in such way that heart pumping blood for each other body but each day progressing medical science did manage to separate them at age of one but they were never...
PART 2:


so guy howz this please do comment...
i'll be waiting for ur comments n likes
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one
lookin fwd 2 it!!
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nice itro...
looking forward to it...
continue soon...
all the best...
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wow madhur and geet aik sath
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interesting...
cont soon and pm me...
sent the buddy invite...
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part 1

you know wat It was like some usual day for all over there and all those tooo workaholic people busy in there routine , u know what routine ,putting tons of make up which can b enough to repair all the roads all over india, light means total wastage of electricity, u know india mein kitni jagah electricity nai hai and when that crazy director move his labia to say same words" camera ,sound and action then somepuppet like people which u can called actors act and to add up some essence to it rarely moves their lips, no no they can't move it of their own they need dilougue writer for that too, huh i can't even breath there mum asking me to accompain her", "", geet said all in one go and then inhaled which according to her was taboo till she finishes

so what do uwann? madhur asked
"aaj tu chali ja" geet said making cute bechara face
"but mum wann u, to accompain her"
"please madhu only this"
"i know but i have an idea for it"
" NO WAy"
" u know na aaj match hai aur waise bhi tu janti hai mujhe real hero acche laggete"
"toh yeh saari plot tune criket match dekhne k liye set kiya"
"man ja na madhu plzzz"
"but tu janti hai it too tough to talk like u"
"i know u 'll manage it "
and warrior were ready after troubling their hair to every torture and finally they exchanged their hairstyle now it was time presenttheir inborn acting skill padmini was home and twins on...
madhur was non stop chatterbox though some time she was short of breath which didn't go unnoticed by padmini( maa ki ankho se kuch nai chhupta) and geet was sitting aloof as madhur was reserved but she was an silent observer, to teach them a lesson she was never short of an idea
"madhu , today RK starting his shoot so i dont u accompane me "padmini asked, out of blue, which made geet jump at her place, but handle the situation madhur was on mission to save geet
no mum why madhu , kal mein nahi jana chahti thi then also u took me now rk is coming so u asking madhu
"no geet beta aj toh tumhe live match dekhne jana hai na so u enjoy mr tendulkar ur real hero "
"but mumma"
" no but or if "
"maine keh diya toh keh diya, u r coming with me ", padmini ordered
"poor soul again landed on miserable land, wat poor soul sari galti teri haiisshe kehte hai apne par pe kuladi marna now iam held up with all lunatic... acting like PM no no , sorry for mistake like some terrorist attack them and all wanna rescue their life BABAJI...what i'll b doing here" geet said trying to put all her complain in one sentence unaware of pair eyesof following her each move who was no other than RK , heir of all names and fame of KAROORs THE NEXT SUPERSTAR and this movie was debut and his first day first shot and here cupid arrowpenetrated his heart and RK was not an exception who can escape the charm of epitome of beauty, lost in her serene beauty unawareof his mind order he walked to her , tapped her soft milky soldier iand she glared him back like stabbing him with million question before moulding it in word
"what???" geet asked all annoyed his tapping has only added fuel to it , getting no responce from him she poked him using single finger to minimize their body contact " MAINE POOCHA KUCH KAM THA" almost shouting which brought him back from abhi abhj ka love land and here she is sanding his dream girl his heart was stolen and no FIR can b registered...
"ish nacheez ko RK kehta" he bowed dramatically"
"accha toh aap hai woh cheez jiski wajah se mujhe mere real hero ka live match nahi dekh payi pata hia appko kitni mushkil se maine ticket arrange kiye the"
"but maine kya kiya ??"
"aap hi na nakli hero RK jiski wajah se mum mujhe yaha le k aayi"
"aapki mum ?? "
"haan aapki onscreen MOTHER INDIA" she said with teary eyes, these small bead in her jheel si ankhen was enough to drown to bottom with no return...
witnessing her daughter behavior she was between them to apply break before breakfails
"RK ji meet my daughter Madhur and madhur u must be knowing him THE RK"
" pleasure to meet to gorgeous"
without acknowledging his presense,one last time she glared him with big almond shape eyes and marched to farthest corner of hall
so howz this plz comment.
Edited by swarnakanak - 13 years ago
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can u add the update and page numbers and date int he title dear?
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superb bt confused who wants to see match n eho eent frm mum rk met geet or madhur?
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part 1
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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Originally posted by: saari

superb bt confused who wants to see match n eho eent frm mum rk met geet or madhur?

geet wanna see match

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