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Posted: 12 years ago
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hyyy giyzzz i m writing my first os i hope u like it
PRECAP:rk and madhu came in rk mension. and dips saw rk in bad mood and madhu too so she got very happy and thought herself that she is successful to sepret rishbala and going to sleep
[scene bedroom] rk slept on his couf and madhu thought herself that she loves him very much

NAYI SHURUAAT

next day
madhu wake up and saw rk is not in room she immedetly call bittuji and ask about rk . bittuji told her he is going for outdoor shooting for 2 days.
madhu got upset but then she think she will manage rk later first she should set in her mayaka and then she expressed to rk that how much she love him
precap: balraj's entry and he saw madhu's pic in rk mension

giyzzz i hope that u like it i will continue this topic soon plzzz do rply
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i dont think balraj will identify madhu dear
becoz for him all are dead
so he may feel this a girl named after madhubala
and ha os should be long dear not one para
and said os
pls try to give long ones
Edited by abisamratgunjan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start...continue dear...pm me when u start writing.

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