FF:Tujhse Naraz Nahin Zindagi NOTE+UPDATE pg89 11/11/13 NO PMS - Page 35

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Posted: 13 years ago
intersting promo shru
jaldi update karo
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Posted: 13 years ago
Promo aa gaya


ab next part kab aayega


Waiting


tu janti hain ...mujhe is story ka addiction ho gya hain😆
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Exited for next part...interesting promo...
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Posted: 12 years ago
So excited for next part :) update soon
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Originally posted by: tani23

Promo aa gaya



ab next part kab aayega


Waiting


tu janti hain ...mujhe is story ka addiction ho gya hain😆


Haha🤣 I know tujhe kitna addiction hai isliye teri ger mojudgi mai I'm updating this... I'm sure vaps ate hai bahut khush hogi...😉
missing you purvu🤗
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**PART 12**

Rathore drove roughly commanded his cell voice call to call Arjun...

'Arjun meet me in an hour conference room' Rathore roared

Before Arjun could respond Rathore hung up.. Shayad Rathore gusse mai hai.. thought Arjun.Rathore:Btw Juno ko koi kuch nahi batayega..

Riya: Kis baremai Sir..

Rathore: Riya, vahi sab jo restaurant mai hua tha..

Aarey bata do chupana kyuu hai...Riya questioned curiously

Bhai bol do she requested again... 'Fine' Rathore replied dont tell me I didn't warn u...

Bhai ye purana Juno nahi hai said Riya as she smiled back at Rathore.

Ri bhaiya sahi keh rahe hai... 'Shreee' she stressed

Both Rathore and Shree couldn't help but smile at her..

**Meanwhile Restaurant Lee**

Boss: Kya hua bittu?? Itna ajeeb sa chera kyu bana raha hai?

Bittu: Boss, woh wohh' wohh item ne aaj shaam ko ane se mana kar diya

Boss: Usse pata bhi hai voh kisse mana kar rahi hai?

Bittu: Nahi boss' mai jake baat karu kya usse?

Boss: Pehle ye toh bata tujhe kaise pata ye gaa sakti hai?

Bittu shy's his actions encircling his hands says: Boss is item ko maine kuch mahine pehle mall mai gaate hue suna tha..

Boss: kya baat hai teri memory power badh gayi hai kya?

Bittu: Boss, uss time pe unhone apka maan pasand gana gaya tha. Isliye mujhe yaad hai.

Boss: Konsa?

Bittu: 'Hmmm' Hume tumse pyaar kitna..ye hum nahi jantee'

Boss: slapped him black and blue

Bittu: kya hua Boss? Naraz kyu hog aye aap.. maine kuch galat kaha kya?

Boss: pehle mara kyunki itna besura gaya tune, dusra kyunki tune mujhe pehle nahi bataya!!!

*Back at the ETF headquarters

Half an hour had passed by since Rathore had made the call to Arjun he's still not here. ohh god he said out loud frustratingly

Shree: kya hua sir

Rathore: Nothing tumne vaha ka phone lines tapp kiye??

Shree: Sir thoda mushkil tha Lekin kaam hogaya..

Rathore: good abh Tum Restuarant Holiday Inn ka bhi kar do..

Yes sir.. said Shree and started working on tapping the phone lines. On the other hand, Riya while studying the case file intensely fell asleep due to tiredness..

Arjun and Chotu arrived just before the clock struck 1:00 pm.

Shree: Yaar Chotu bhuk lagi hai kya tujhe

Chotu: Haan yaar bahot jyada..

Shree: Matlab Hitler ne tujhe kacha nahi khaya kya..

Chotu: Kya yaar Shree tu bhi na kyu mood kharab kara raha hai??..

Chotu: aarey Ri kaha pehle hai..

Shree: aarey Haan maine toh usse itne time se dekha hi nahi shayad chup gayi hongi hitler ke darr se

Chotu: Haan bechari... Shree laughed at Chotu's. reaction

Tum dono vaha hi baate karte rahoge ya conference room Maine darshan doge??...roared Rathore

Chotu: Abhi inhe kya hogaya hai yaar..

Shree: chal pata chalega tujhe bhi..

Everyone settled in the conference room... ye Riya kaha reh gayi doubted Rathore in tension with his hands resting on his hips!!!

Rathore: Shree check karo Riya kaha hai abh ye bhi batana padega kya...

Shree: sorry sir...chal Chotu

Rathore god ye ladki din pe din ger zimedar bante ja rahi hai...

Shree wakes Riya up and accompanies her with Chotu to conference room.

Riya: sorry sir voh mai ...

Rathore: cuts her sentence and says its ok Riya next time please pay attention she nods and Rathore continues.

Team ye case bahot hi complicated hai..Haan Rathore lekin Jo aksar dikhta hai vaisa hota nahi right..

Arjun: hume jyada kuch pata nahi chala kyunki voh manager chuti pe hai and owner out of town.

Rathore: jaha hum gaye the us Restuarunt mai ek ajeeb si ghatna hue...I mean it was seriously weird he said glaring at Riya and Arjun back and forth trying to capture their facial expressions..

Arjun: aisa kya hua Rathore..

Rathore hesitated at start..umm voh he said..

But Shree continued 'Vohh sir vaha ke manager ne Riya ko aaj raat ka show offer kiya'..Shree said it all in one breath.

Arjun's face literally had 'What the' expression with and his mouth 'O' shaped in shock..

What he questioned in curiosity..Rathore repeated Shree's words as he concentrated more on Arjun's face.

Arjun banged his fist on table as he stood up and stormed out of the room.. Rathore stormed out glaring hard at Riya.

Bhaiii she called out and walked behind..Rathore gripped Arjun's hand somehow from back and explained him the situation..

Arjun: Sam how dare he say that to her...

Rathore: I know Arjunn...

Arjun: Sam u should have informed me long back...

Rathore: Juno we are professionals remember..

Arjun: she was and is my bestfriend damnn it. Even though aaj kal uska behavior ajeeb hai towards me...But relation wont change right..

Rathore nodded very slowly..Listen wait here I'll be back.. ok replied Arjun as he paced around the office in frustration..

Shree Riya ko ghar chod ke aaoo drop her at my place and Riya just go home take rest and help ur bhabhi with small things around the house..I have told her not to stress u with too much of work today..

Okay bhai c u soon..

Rathore: Riya he called out from behind and continued as she turned around If not for Godsake, just for mine, your bhabhi's well even not for us just take care of yourself for Nikki and Nonnu's sake.

Riya's heart felt at peace as she heard her brother say that. 'Haan bhaiya I'll she replied sweetly. She hugged Rathore affectionally I love you bhai you're the best she muttered on his chest with streams of tears running down her eyes!


Rathore didn't notice the tears but he knew she felt good. Very good infact.

Brother-sisterly love was once again witnessed by Arjun who's thoughts kept on deepening. Arjun wondered about the strong affection, love, care that built around the two, in a mere gap of five years specially in his absence.

Riya left noticing the doubtness on Arjun's face that left her stunned as well.

Edited by funkylicious - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you Thank you Thank you all... for liking the PROMO and Chapter 11.Hre's the fresh new Chapter... I heartily apologize for the thoda chota upate but next time I'll make it longer one😉
Loved each and every comment I had yet received... please keep them coming... loving them all..🤗
Any suggestions, serious feedbacks, criticism everythings welcome openly...
Will be waiting for at least some suggestions😉
PS please ignore any mistakes, But do notify me if there is any major mistakes...
-Shru
Edited by funkylicious - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update shru dear👏
arjun is consern towards riya so sweet😊
abb riya ko itani tiredness kuyn hai
eagerly waiting far next update
continue soon😊


Edited by shrutisweety - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update...

Arjun's concern towards ria and his anger...ufff...Masha alah:)

Loved shree and chotu's convo...


Edited by prava55663 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

🤣🤣🤣

Nice Updation...
Loved it...


🤣🤣🤣

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