ansh ss :the rain ::))

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hai guys 😊 , i was a silent reader in this forum. I read all of ur stories about ansh. Thats r really fantastics. So i decided to write a ss about ansh. This is my first attempt to write a ss about them. U guys please forgeve me if u guys dont like this. And forgeve me for my grammer mistakes.

ANSH SS:THE RAIN
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Its a night after ansh wedding. Anandi came to there bedroom after the household works. She saw that in soffa, shiv is very busy with his laptop.
Anandi:-shiv, y dont sleep?
Shiv:-no dear,i have some more work. U go to bed and sleep.
Anandi(imitate that her self):-u go to bed and sleep
Shiv didnt hear that.
Shiv:-dear, u tell something?
Anandi:-no, what happend?
Shiv:-nothing
Anandi(herself):-u & ur job
She is going to their bed. Suddenly the rain is start outside.
Anandi:-wow, rain... 😛
She opened the door of terrace & run into the rain
Shiv:-anandi, where r u going?
But she didnt hear anything. She is very busy to enjoying the rain. She notice her. She is looking so happy. And hot too. She is all wet. Her saari is sticking to her slimbody releaving every curve of her body.
Shiv(himself):- shiv, concentrate ur works
He is trying to do his work. But automatically his eyes goes to anandis side.
Shiv(himself):- shiv, control ur self. But i think i cant. Bcoz its too late.
He closed his laptop and get up from soffa. He goes to terrace. Anandi didnt see him. Shiv goes to her behind & wraps his arms around her bare waist and pulls her even closer. She turn around & shocked to see that shiv is there.
Anandi:-shiv, ur work...
She cant complete her sentence bcoz her lips is locked with shivs. The kiss is going more passionate. Anandi hugs shiv tightely. Her one hand on his chest & other one is played in his hair. He slowly moved his lip in to his neck and kissed all over her neck. He puts her hair to the side & kisses the behind to her ear. Its making her giggle. She hide her face in his chest. He runs his hands all over her body. Anandi take her face in to his chest & kissed on his chest. Shiv is smiled. He moving more closer & whispered in her ears:,
Shiv:-i love u dear...i love u somuch...i cant leave without u.
Anandi:-i love u too shiv , u r my everything
He carried her in his arms & goes to their bedroom.

⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ END ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

U guys like it? Please comment my story. 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was very nice but My personal opinion is that I think u just rushed out with the script...thoda keenchte toh achaa lagtaa...actually I am greeedy for more of ANSH scenes as its not shown the way we want in the real show so its fun to read here through these scripts and the need to read them more and more will always b there...
A very goood attempt...DO continue writing more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice but write some long ones!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏 Lovely...but I agree with Sumeet. It would've been better of you'd make it longer and a little more details IMHO.

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