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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

Why am I late this time? I am to blame and now that I am here, going to ramble a bit. The mind is such an amazing creation of God, not being philosophical here, just voicing my thoughts. The way the mind works to meet goals which the very same mind envisions is difficult to understand at times and yet one cannot but marvel at it.

Another point that never ceases to amaze me is the play of power and money; the things it can do to a man, it beyond my capacity to word. The Shyam angle was a sucker punch, the old and new is what I mean.

I have to laud your effort here, it is interesting to know the thoughts of people who are a small part of the system but are the most impacted. They may not be a part of the scheme but are involved none the less.

I am going to read the story again and recommend it to my sister, who has no idea about the world of IF. She will surely like this.

PS ' my brother fills me in on all the news and I too reach out to the page 3 segment first, so Usha you are not alone. My way to escape from reality is how I explain my shallowness.



Kalyaani - Welcome back :-) We missed you here for past couple of updates.
I am sorry but I am missing the first part of your comment. I guess you are talking about Akash here? Would love it if you can explain a bit to me here..

I haven't read newspaper in close to four years and somehow not missing it either. I generally read churumuri blog and get bits and pieces of information. Even when I pick up a newspaper [its when I want to avoid an annoying aunt or a prying cousin], the articles there seem like propaganda they have signed up for rather than objectively printing a news. Newspapers are filled with perspectives and political affiliation rather than just reporting.

Thanks for commenting!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 22:

"How did you even find that manifesto? I thought it was destroyed when he died in prison," Arnav asked Akash, his calmness returning full fold.

"A constable from prison was bribed to make several copies of the handwritten notes and smuggle it out. Your father was not allowed to meet anyone nor was the other people in jail who were associated with your father. Every interaction he had with the outside world was very minutely monitored. When things got tense, his manifesto was destroyed by the jailer. But there were a handful of copies made. My father smuggled one out when he was released from the prison and that is the copy I have." Akash said. Noting Arnav's expression, he added. "I am sorry you never got to know the man." Arnav shook his head slightly.

"My mother was devastated after his death. She couldn't visit him as frequently as she wanted to and never took me to prison to meet him. The last time she met him was couple of months before his death. After few years, she rarely spoke about the man she was once married to let alone his polity." Arnav said.

"I am sorry to hear that." Akash said sincerely.

"May I see the book?" Arnav asked quietly. Khushi and Akash looked at him but the darkness hid his emotions very well. Akash didn't respond for moments but finally shrugged.

"Let's get inside," Akash replied standing up and walking towards the house. Khushi stopped Arnav when he started walking.

"Are you going to tell him Arnav?" Khushi asked maintaining an eye contact. "It may not be-"

"I have to see it Khushi, you know that," Arnav said not allowing her to complete her words and strode briskly towards the house. Khushi followed him with same pace wordlessly.

"Here you go," Akash said handing over a photocopied variant of the book. "The original is safe somewhere else." He said looking at Khushi's raised eyebrow.

Arnav quickly turned the pages of the book, scanning through it as if he was searching something. Khushi looked on patiently while Akash looked surprised.

"Is this it?" Arnav asked handing the book to Khushi who started flipping through it from the last pages.

"What do you mean?" Akash asked looking from Arnav to Khushi.

"Where is the rest of the book?" Khushi asked somberly.

Akash was taken aback. "I don't understand Khushi. This is the photocopy of the manifesto I received from my father." He said looking from Khushi to Arnav. "What are you implying?" He added when he saw the look exchanged between his prisoners.

"This manifesto is incomplete," Khushi said dropping the stack of papers on table and sitting down in unfeminine manner on nearest chair. "Shyam Manohar Jha was a passionate man and his views evolved over the course of years. His writing always stayed in the boundaries of rationality and the practical perception of politics and social dynamics of the 70s. The section of manifesto you have here depicts that," she said.

"He started devolving during emergency era. The calmness he prided himself with was gone and was not an advocate of passive resistance policy anymore; the policy which talks about great men and women to be recognized in the community and they have to be given powers to govern the nation. The manifesto laid down the rules for the optimized operations of a society and the things that need to be done first to achieve that. He made plans to take this manifesto to a political consultant he knew and who was close aide to then prime minister. The gareebi hatao slogan boosted his confidence and made him recognize the potential the government portrayed to have. However things took a violent turn and the changes shook him completely. Once he was in prison for his articles, he started working on the second section of this manifesto which dropped the passivity of his original proposal and embraced a much...radical political revolution strategy to bring changes in the country." Arnav explained sitting next to Khushi.

"When you say there are two sections of the book you mean that there are two variants of the ideology?" Akash asked.

"In a way but it's not entirely right. The first section spoke about ethics and morality and the cost of compromising the two as a controlled collateral damage during the act of changing oneself, the community, the society and the country. It didn't promote violence but however instructed that violence may become a byproduct and sometimes even an unavoidable step of the advocated agenda and a necessary means to instill a larger idea but keeping the implementation as passive as possible. The second section however forwent the ethics part of it and didn't stop at making violence an absolute step to first induce fear and then control, and an absolve to every problem which came in way. Whatever went out of prison was mostly what was written in prison after his belief in reforms were squashed – the second part of the manifesto. Your father got a copy of the first part of manifesto Akash." Khushi said.

Akash was silent and didn't lift his head, his eyes fixated on a random spot on the floor. No lights were lit in the room and the darkness in the room ironically reflected what each one of them was feeling.

"It doesn't change anything," Akash said after a prolonged silence.

"No, it doesn't." Arnav replied softly. "But if there are people out there who sincerely believe in the other part of the manifesto…" He didn't finish. He didn't need to explain the debacle it would entail. "But am glad that there aren't people who would actually read that violent rant of an imprisoned man and try to implement," Arnav sighed and rubbed this forehead.

The look Akash gave him, however, spoke volumes. "No…" Khushi was the first to cotton on. "There can't be!" She said standing up and staring down Akash. "It's insane!" She added for good measure but looking at Akash's expression, she knew they were wrong.

"My father sincerely believed in what Shyam Manohar Jha envisioned and was very happy when he was given the manifesto before his death. After getting released from prison, he rounded up his old friends – comrades, he used to call them, and presented this manifesto as a proposal. Many of them hailed from families which fought for independence and were politically inclined since childhood. And it did help his cause when few of these wealthy friends decided to…invest." Akash explained. Taking a sip of liquid from glass, he continued.

"There was tension in this part of the country after operation blue star. Politics had become a messy business and people had become suddenly weary about free speech and open debates in public. It was at this point of time when a group picked up the other part of manifesto and decided to implement it." Akash said. Arnav and Khushi looked at each other tiredly. Silence reigned for next several moments as each one of them were consumed by the bombardment of information.

"What I don't understand is why such importance is given to rants of a man?" Arnav asked flatly. "I mean there must have been many such lectures, books and newspaper articles so why him? What is it that makes the manifesto so…attractive?"

"It's the perspective I think. And the fact that a journalist who became famous after an iconic image of him in shackles depicted the blasphemy on journalism, died in prison because of what he stood for, can be pretty motivating for many." Akash said, shrugging. "There are always people looking for bringing about a change in this country Arnav. What they needed was a push and there were many who recruited these men and women for the cause." He stopped and looked at Arnav. "So you knew about this?" He asked already feeling his question redundant.

"He was my father Akash. My mother didn't talk about him but she ensured that everything he ever wrote was boxed and neatly stored till the time I was ready to deal with them. My father kept a detailed journal which helped me understand his psyche from the days he was a student of journalism to the days leading his death." Arnav replied.

Before Akash could prod further, Khushi spoke. "But why now?" Khushi asked. "I mean its three decades since the inception and now you are enacting?"

"We have always been active Khushi. We have ensured that we aren't on everyone's radar and keep ourselves low. In this country, the age where you can be put in national map of politics is somewhere around forty. You cannot have a twenty five year old man walk into political arena and dictate terms. If you have a scenario like that, then the man will be actually a puppet in the hands of a much older staff." Akash explained.

"You set up a system." Arnav said. Akash nodded at that. "Instead of screaming 'off with their heads', you started at basics. You built your foundation by installing your own people in various government, military, research and intelligence organization whose primary loyalty lies with your group of people. It took three decades to build an entire system which can be manipulated and directed on your instructions and now that you have it, you are actually invincible." Arnav explained further.

"That's about it then," Akash said. "Now apply the same logic to the radical group but use a different perspective. Everyone wants same results but the method of execution is questionable or debatable."

"This reminds me of a paragraph from 'Through the looking glass'," Khushi said.

The moment Alice appeared, she was appealed to by all three to settle the question, and they repeated their arguments to her, though, as they all spoke at once, she found it very hard indeed to make out exactly what they said.

The executioner's argument was, that you couldn't cut off a head unless there was a body to cut it off from: that he had never had to do such a thing before, and he wasn't going to begin at his time of life. The King's argument was, that anything that had a head could be beheaded, and that you weren't to talk nonsense.

The Queen's argument was, that if something wasn't done about it in less than no time she'd have everybody executed, all round. (It was this last remark that had made the whole party look so grave and anxious.)

Akash chuckled without humor. "We can sit here and debate an entire night to decipher who is who in this analogy." He stood up. "But one thing is certain –Cheshire the cat is governance and Alice here represents you both; Alice, who always saw things from an outsider perspective."

"That's one way to look at it Akash," Khushi's voice was hard. "Alice may as well be a dream of the people in wonderland and they needed Alice to complete their existence."

Without turning, Akash threw the glass in his wall on to the nearest wall and walked out of the room in muted frustration and disappointment.

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Posted: 12 years ago

In my previous comment I was referring to those who in general have it in them to use their mind, like Arnav, Khushi and off course Akash. They are ruled by the head and not the heart, not cynically by practically. There are the scene changers, if I may use that term.

Coming to this update, the reason behind (my assumption and I may be wrong) Arnav's kidnapping has a lot to do with who is father was and how he has turned out. The fact that Arnav and Khushi know about the manifesto sounds oddly comforting and disturbing, I may not be able to express myself here but will try. The thinking of Arnav and Akash are so different, yet one questions the influence. Arnav is not influenced by his father but has read his journal to understand his psyche and Akash is influenced by his father, who in turn believed SMJ. They are all from the same fabric in a way.

You mention Operation Blue star and I have to say this, it divided the country further and scarred a brave community for reasons, in my opinion could have been avoided. I am a woman with immense faith in God and his place, the manner in which the holy shrine was attacked is unpardonable. Indira Gandhi met her end in that gruesome manner and in that I see the answer, the hand that sets fire will also suffer burns.

"That's one way to look at it Akash," Khushi's voice was hard. "Alice may as well be a dream of the people in wonderland and they needed Alice to complete their existence."

The above line is so true about perception and I could not agree more.

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing reading and kushis last line was superb totallly agree with it...continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...simply superb.
Arnav and khushi now have a better understanding of what akash is planning as they already know about the manifesto. It is good that aranv is trying to rationalise his fathers thinking.
Akash is shocked to hear that he only half of the manifesto.
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

So not only did arnav read all that his father had written, but so has khushi.

So is arnav the more balanced character because he has read both, the words spewed in calm as well as in anger, in frustration and s able to, so to speak, separate the wheat from the chaff in his father's writings.

Aren't most mobs or revolutions based on one side of the story. The fear of top management that fury and action and reaction can be garnered only by giving only as much information on a need to know basis.

So is akash the balanced one. Has he chosen this portion because he was directed to do so, given this path to go on or by choice after going through it in its entirety.

Latha, Kalyaani, RB, glad to know I have company 😆 ...in the well 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: serialwatcher16


So not only did arnav read all that his father had written, but so has khushi.

So is arnav the more balanced character because he has read both, the words spewed in calm as well as in anger, in frustration and s able to, so to speak, separate the wheat from the chaff in his father's writings.

Aren't most mobs or revolutions based on one side of the story. The fear of top management that fury and action and reaction can be garnered only by giving only as much information on a need to know basis.

So is akash the balanced one. Has he chosen this portion because he was directed to do so, given this path to go on or by choice after going through it in its entirety.

Latha, Kalyaani, RB, glad to know I have company 😆 ...in the well 😆

I always thought Arnav had an edge over the rest and was unable to put a finger on it. He is well read and knows his job, but the fact that he is privy to the works of a thinker like his father may tilt the scale in his favor. In that I see the difference in Akash and Arnav. The former is passionate and let's anger get in his way. The latter is passionate too but is cool headed, that by far is more useful an artillery in a war, a cool and calm head. This could be another reason for Arnav to be this successful.

A request, would like to know more about Khushi and her journey to who and what she has become today.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalyaani


A request, would like to know more about Khushi and her journey to who and what she has become today.



Kalyaani - I have another 7-8 chapters to go and if Khushi's past has to be brought into the game which frankly I haven't thought but always implied that her father is familiar with Arnav's father and the general political foray.

If you guys are with me for extra few chapters, then surely I will give it a go :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Kalyaani - I have another 7-8 chapters to go and if Khushi's past has to be brought into the game which frankly I haven't thought but always implied that her father is familiar with Arnav's father and the general political foray.

If you guys are with me for extra few chapters, then surely I will give it a go :-)

The reason for me to request a peep into Khushi and her past was to understand her a little better. Unlike Arnav, Khushi is known more because of her father and still lives in his shadow. The factors that influence her thinking, it cannot just be money or career, there could be more and that I want to know.
I am sorry if I was out of line requesting something from the story, usually don't make demands as I would like to give the author room to put forth a story the way they want, but had to let you know what was on my mind. We got an insight into two of the three main pillars of the story us far and she was the one I was keen to know more about. A woman in a man's world and she interests me the most.
I am with this story so not going anywhere.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

The reason for me to request a peep into Khushi and her past was to understand her a little better. Unlike Arnav, Khushi is known more because of her father and still lives in his shadow. The factors that influence her thinking, it cannot just be money or career, there could be more and that I want to know.
I am sorry if I was out of line requesting something from the story, usually don't make demands as I would like to give the author room to put forth a story the way they want, but had to let you know what was on my mind. We got an insight into two of the three main pillars of the story us far and she was the one I was keen to know more about. A woman in a man's world and she interests me the most.
I am with this story so not going anywhere.



You are not at all out of line Kalyaani. I am glad that you are investing time in this story and are upfront in letting me know about your expectations.

My main reason for not writing too much on Khushi was plain laziness. I explored two characters to depth and the FF didn't have any takers back then so I dropped the plan of writing more on Khushi. Now that I see some interest in this direction, it would be a pleasure to explore Khushi a bit more.

Let's make the storyline a little more twisty then :-)

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