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wow aditee....... awesome one.... flashback part 9......

Do you have any idea what a wonderful piece of work you are moulding Aditee ? I like her childishness....i like the way he is pampering her...OMG...this is awesome....Ekta should really learn something from you....she needs to knmow that this kind of stuff we want to see...and not all the rona dhona...and unnecessary sacrifices by the women....or so much galee galauj.....which leaves such a distaste in the mouth...
Thanks again.....
Neena

Laage raho aditee...........too good. 👏 plz continue soon.....sorry for bugging you to continue soon... 😉 😉 😉 but cant help it dear.....

Thanks for the wonderful compliments. Its immensely gratifying to see you all think Ishud start writing for a living.......
Accountancy and romance fiction? 😕
Will the twain meet? 😕

Originally posted by: aditee

Thanks for the wonderful compliments. Its immensely gratifying to see you all think Ishud start writing for a living.......
Accountancy and romance fiction? 😕
Will the twain meet? 😕

yupp the will sweetti..and beieve me..whtever u writee will meet ..sincee u ahve grr88 talentss in u ..

it dieasnttt havee to be common sensee..or sumfing which already eistss...!! ur ideas r such tht a person completely imagins the entiree scenee..

thnksxxx sweettii..andd yh u shudd take writing as a profesion and plzz writee a buk on jai and bani...since u r soo gud at the storylinee..looloollzz..

absoluetlyy lurrveee the flashvacks..although will be waitingg to see wht happens wen jai is out of the flashback modee..

thnksxxx sweeetti..

updatee soon..wil be waitingg eagerlii..................!!!!!!!!

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that was def. worth the wait!!
this jw is something else... so you think he has a brother for me!!
i loved his mono. it was great! i love the way he fights his inner demon to want her..to justify his want. to make it seem like pure intentions. its great. he wants to marry her, be with her know everything about her....gosh!! he remembers the blankets, he alreayd remember she liks chocolate, he even knows to take the cup from her hadn! haha! only if. see all the great guys are really only on paper, and i dont mean biodatas...hheeh...lol.

i dont blame bani one bit for feeling the way she does, though. why shouldn't she! big house, big money, big MR JW. i would be a bit intimidated too. but it was interesting to see her fight with her inner feelings as well. flight little girl! how could she, would she trust someon like this guy, who after meeting him only FOUR days ago...already at the guy's house!! my fav line..."i hardly know you" haha..lol..loved how he wanted to borrow that from her!
this would really make a great book...think about it there are already how many of us jai/bani fans???? book would be instant hit.. hahah ...lol

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thanks again for the great part.
egarly awaiting...anticipating the big fight and follow up...really curious now as to how they get married...

dipu00

Originally posted by: aditee

Thanks for the wonderful compliments. Its immensely gratifying to see you all think Ishud start writing for a living.......
Accountancy and romance fiction? 😕
Will the twain meet? 😕

The signs are of course of a good "milan" of the twains😉 Keep up the good work👏

great part 👏 👏 .these mood changes of Jai and Bani,tauba tauba. 😉

really nice aditee it was worth the wait

plz plz plz cont soon 😃 i am becoming desperate 😆 😆 to read the next part 😳 😳 keep it up 👏 👏 👏 awesome as always aditee 😊