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lavi7

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Posted: 19 years ago

#311

well done.....maybe the writers of the programme could use some of ur ideas...... 👏

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maria-n

@maria-n

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Posted: 19 years ago

#312

What an intense part, Aditee, not even so much from sensual point, but all the emotions, biting conversations.
So he has already decided....
And she just insecure, not being of his level.

I wonder what would happen if he would simply propose to her (it would at least lessen her insecurity about the whole situation).

Thank you Aditee, I really loved this part. (But don't I love them all?!)

M.

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stonex

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Posted: 19 years ago

#313

part 38D was amazing
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FizuLki

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Posted: 19 years ago

#314

i loved the part!! atleast they're starting to like each other!! 😉

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Sughra

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Posted: 19 years ago

#315

gr8 work........cont soon!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

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TINK

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Posted: 19 years ago

#316

omg 😲 that was awesome aditee 👏 👏 as usual you really make every part, so enjoyable to read 😃 😃 plz plz cont soon, i luved it 😉 i wonder what will happen next 😳

p.s write loads 😆 😆

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Ashna Chand

@Ashna_Chand

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Posted: 19 years ago

#317

WOW!!! It just keeps getting better and better....I don't respond to each chapter but after a while, I have to tell you that you are an amazing writer. You should seriously consider story writing as a profession if you don't do that already... Anywayz..great job as always!!! Eagerly awaiting the next part..

Edited by Ashna_Chand - 19 years ago

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shafaq

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Posted: 19 years ago

#318

wooww...aditee tht was wonderfull..
sweetii plzz do contiuee soooon u r soo wickedd at thiss..!!
i cant wait till they confess their loveee to each other !!!!
thnskxx.....and i want to see hwt heppnes when the falshback is over...
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