MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

beautiful update fiza!👏
very well written👍🏼




thanku so much dear


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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi

I am back…sorry for the delay was caught up…

And to all my green bachy… about the wound on Nupur's neck…

Wht kinda of bruise a s** worker will have on her body… please imaging as I m not at all comfortable using words on this part…. So at times in this ff u have to understand understand..

And as sumone asked me… about the quotes in beginning

If they donot have a name to there sub script .. there are yes .. by ME…

Rplyed to u all

Enjoy

Fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Its like bungee jumping, LIFe… the moment u feel like your falling n falling and though this is it.. your pulled back and that is the moment u realize your flowing..

Chapter: 8

It was morning… and he was hating the huge glass wall on his face.. he groan in irritation and turned to the other side.. dipping his head more in pillow.. but than the alarm ring .. and he had to receive a pillow bang on his head

Nupur: shut up.. who the hell it is…

This was the moment he move his head up n hand to alarm clock and realized he wasn't alone in bed.. the groaning lady beside him is the new beautiful addition to his life.. he corrected himself.. isn't sure she is or not…

Opening his eyes he removed the pillow she banged on him..beliving it was her cell that was ringing… he chuckled making his head a bit raised up by placing another pillow under his head… she has frown and her hairs spread on her face. Slightly… yet she was beautiful

He just cant figure out how on this earth can be a person so freaking innocent cute, hot n mature all at the same time .. wht she is doesn't seems to reflect for a moment on her face, on her talks ..t he way she is.. he can see that last night when he said he is going to bed.. she thought he is asking her sumthing.. he isn't tht green not to read such things… he has spend his lifetime in fashion n Cosmo world of NY and he is aware of even slightest seduction and other kinda thoughts appearing on others face in second… he was even not wrong about Esha on this thought .. yet always ingonre that.. as now he can see he never felt like that attractive to her… he never has to control his urges around Esha.. they were never there.. but for her he want her to know.. he isn't here for her body he is here for her soul

Sigh get up mayank .. ur getting late for office…

Jumping off the bed and he hit the button to make curtains spread.. and went to hit shower and get ready…

He moved down to have his breakfast n all… and than just when he was about to leave for office.. he turn his head back to move up to the room… and move to her side who was sleeping peacefully… he lean on her and placed a soft kiss on her forehead…

Mayank: bye … and smilingly left for his office… he is liking the way his mornings are starting now..

..

It was almost noon when she again threw her pillow.. as now her cell was actually ringing.. and wasn't stopping…

She hate it ..peolpe disturbing her sleep.. she hate it.. and now she took her cell to make the person pay off for his mistake to woke her up..

Nupur: WHAT.. she shouted

And heard sum chuckles other side

Mayank: woo wo lady…Good afternoon…

She snuggled more in her pillow

Nupur: hmm.. morning…

Sigh this sleepy seductive voice made him actually feel Goosebumps.. she is making him fell every thing he thought he have control and cant feel….

Mayank: sleepy head wakeup..

Nupur: hmm

Mayank: chuckled… nupur.. kitna soti hoo..utho…

Nupur: kya kero uth ker…

Mayank: have sum food, u can go out . shop, site seeing .. do whatever u can..

Nupur: who goes for sight seeing alone..

Mayank: aha … point noted my lady… very well.. than wake up and wait for me all the time…

Nupur: ya ya… ur not tht good Sharma..

Mayank: aha really

Nupur: ya realy

Mayank: nupur…

Nupur: hmm

Mayank: thanku

Nupur: for what.

Mayank: for agreeing to stay wuth me.. it means a lot.. a lot..

Nupur: I m sure it does

He wasn't expected such a cold reply form her.. not at all.. he was..wht .. what he wnts and wht he expect… forget it..right now he has to finish this all work.. ASAP..

She looked at the side that is now empty .. she is still surprised and still cant trust the fact that he doesn't want him to pleasure her like that.. wht else is the way to make the other person happy she doesn't know.. and not wanting this .. than wht does he wants.. she hardly slept whole night as the moment the covers move slightly due to him moving in his sleep.. she felt now he will do that.. or than he will do so… but he proved her wrong.. and that was the weirdest part .

The knock on the door make her open her eyes.. she freak a bit mayank here…she sat up and corrected her dress n hairs..

Nupur: yes…

A woman in her mid 30s came in side..

Saraah: hello ma'am.. I m saraah.. housekeeper.. ma'am u need anything… u can freshen up I will bring out ur cloths..

Nupur frown… wht the.. she do her work herself.. and these all things she doesn't like.. but Mr sharma..

Nupur: kero kero meri har ek addat karab kero.. aur jab sab kuch namukin hojay ga tu bolo gay… sab kahtam.. the months is over.. go back to wht ur …

Saraah: ma'am im sorry I didn't get u..

Nupur: shabash.. yeah farangi hai.. behnji ap ko kuch samjh nhi ata.. she suppressed her laugh… thanks saraah… I'll do everything by myself… u just can please make sumthing to eat I m really hungry..

Saraah: sure ma'am..

She stretch her self n went to freshen.. the day was boring… she has almost nothing to do.. she took a round in the house.. she open a close door and found a study.. it was filled with so many books.. she smiled widely.. now tht is sumthing she love…. Reading.. she went inside and remove the curtains… and look around to fins sumthing good to read..

She look out side the window it was beautiful outside… cloudy and beautiful.. she took her book from the study, covered herself with shawal.. she was moving outside than thought of having sum coffee.. so step in the kitchen when again was freak out by the voice behind

Sarah: ma'am can I help u… please tell me I will make it..

Nupur: yaar yeah kya musibat hai.. kasam se asa lagtah hai har waqt meray pichy hain… thanks I will do it

Sarah: ma'am please sir has strictly asked not to let u do house work….

Nupur: mayank ki tu nah… oky im out in the garden can u bring coffee there..

Sarah: sure ma'am.. she smiled

And nupur went outside… her lips shiver slightly it was cold..but it was beautiful there… she sat on the bench and open her book and start reading it… soon a mug of coffee came infornt of her..

Nupur: she smiled.. thanks…

Mayank: ur welcum…

She turned to look at him.. and he joined her on the bench.. but one think was strange.. he didn't smile the way he always does.. maybe he is tired…

Nupur: tum.. when u came.

Mayank: just now… so how was ur day..

Nupur: boring… until I found this… I didn't knew u have huge study here..

Mayank: he looked at her .. and than a book in her hand.. so u like reading..

Nupur: I love reading… sorry I went inside..

Mayank: nupur.. u donot need to seek permission for anything… do whatever u want.. the only thing I donot want u to do.. is.. u just donot pick the landline of phone evry..

Nupur: oh..okay.. he has a slight pinch of irritation in his voice.. he is calm person and seeing him like this is a little different

Mayank: dad is here and I donot want him to talk to u..

Nupur: chill.. even if he does n scold me.. its oky.. I donot mind… he will b angry after all u are with a..

This burn all that he was suppressing.. his dad get to tell him things…

Mayank: have I evr asked or got angry on him for sleeping with so many models of his daughter's age..

Nupur: MAYANK… ur talking abt ur father.. how can u

Mayank: no I am talking abt the Vivek Sharma… the owner of the Shrama's…

Nupur: whtever it is. U should be thinking like tht..

Mayank: I am thinking… u think I m assuming such.. chuckled sarcastically … really…. I m not.. u know wht is the criteria to be on the cover page of Cosmo World… please Mr Vivek Sharma… f***

He was stressed.. now he was too angry and feeling disgust today again… again he saw his father with a girl and he felt his whole body burned.. he just cant imagine tht person as his father.. but than even his mother has no problems with it.. when he a day told her she said she knew all this.. and the kinda of business n environment he is.. she cant expect anything more than this.. he is good with her and his family at home that's enough…

But ever time he look at all this he feel hell angry and disgusting of himself too… he belongs to these people.. today even he saw… gosh he opned his eyes and moved away his head trying to remove the thought… nupur who was observing him thought of distracted him from there… she still cant understand the fact that on one side he feel disgust of all this and on the other hand he is keeping her with him.. its what… either its his double standards tht wht he like he do and donot can except his loved one doing any such thing…. But he was surely disturbed right now.. and she didnt like it.. he has always stood with her.. maybe she can help him… he seems to be same as her, broken n tired ..

Nupur: wasy mayank ..she turned to him and placed her elbow on his shoulder… u also came on the cover page of that.. tumahry liyan kya criteria hai.. han ha..

He looked at her and smiled despite of in wht mess he was.…

Nupur: I thought ur green.. but mayankk…

Mayank: he turn to her … sweetheart are u planning to make me out with my dad..

She laughed out loud..

Nupur: ur thinking so my god…

Mayank: I didn't said that..

Nupur: u did.. she was laughing…

Mayank: nupur… stoop…

Nupur: wht I didn't said tht im sending u n ur dad on a honeymoon..

She laughed and he laughed to..

Mayank: u have lost it.. stop it nupur.. she was continuously laughing…nupurrr… he placed his hand on her neck slightly pressing it in fun..

Nupur: whtt… ouch..

And he left in an instant remembering abt the burse

Mayank: I m sorry .. it hurt..

Nupur: she looked at him.. wht.. no it hasn't yaar… shhh.. ohh its getting cold here..

He moved more close to her with a smirk… she looked at him in wht and he shock his shoulder with what..she moved back to her book.. and he moved more to her.. pressing her to the corner…

Nupur: wht..

Mayank: I am feeling cold… he smirk

Nupur: aha…

She moved abit closed to him.. and he grin more… the warmth he was radiating in her and the sense that was diffusing inside him from her was making both of them wanted to cuddle to each other.. his hand was aching to pull her close and she was making her head stiff fearing it will disobey her and will fall on his shoulder..

Nupur: its beautiful here..

Mayank: ya I love it here.. it was land I bought many years back.. I love this place.. away from the city.. top hill. Peaceful and so amzing…..

Nupur: sigh.. serene and soothing too… so this home is made by u..u planned it all..… u were shifting to Seattle….

Mayank: I love it here.. not shifting here.. but I spend loads of time here…I like here…its kinda escape from all the mess.. I made this house the way I like homes.. not huge.. but comfortable.. with open garden and more nature than any brands … use to cum here a lot… this time I came here after an year…

Nupur: why… she turned towards him facing him now..

Mayank: I donot know… I felt so detached from everything..

Nupur: even this house…

Mayank: feelings attached to anythings are flaws…he chuckled to himself.. remembering the statement… I thought to give this house to Esha … this land value is not to much…

Nupur; ur kidding me.. its huge

Mayank: ya but I have more expensive areas in my pocket.. she didn't want it.. and that was when I slowly started to see things more clearly…it was like I use this house to make her demand sumthing more materialistic…

Nupur: why she didn't wanted this… its is beautiful here.. amzing.. I donot think so any expensive land would have such feel that is here.. and its precious to u right..

He smiled and turned to see in her eyes… why she have to see him and his likes so deeply in…

Mayank: it was precious to me but not in terms of the gold coins…. everyone thought I wasted money buying this land.. no resell value .. nothing to much amzing can be build… even if it is build.. not worth it…

Nupur: she made a weird face.. who make homes with the thought of resell and business intreset..

He chukled..

Mayank: people like us donot… the class I belong do…

He said as just a matter of fact and the thought about her home made her shiver inside… have she evry thought about sumthing like home… she cant remember

Nupur: she chukled.. people like me donot think about homes.. the just need a place to live..

Mayank: he softly moved her hairs back from her forehead to tuck them behind her ear… people like u deserve to dream and have home…

Her hairs were blocking the most beautiful view… the sight he loves to see all day… the sight that make him forget anything even his existence…the sight that defines her… her eyes… the moment she is not looking at a person ..is the moment she is behaving as herself… she is amzing.. she is a person who see life with all its purity .. she is a person who warm his heart with her thoughts.. he just cant believe wht he have start seeing her as…

Nupur: mayank why u are with me when u hate all those girls…

Mayank: tht was early… the question…he pasued …. u donot know wht I see in u.. u cant see wht I look in u.. wht I find in u…

His expressions were so soft and drowning

Nupur: u hate women who sell there

He never let her complete any such word …

Mayank: I hate women who use themselves.. for just sake of having sum materlistic needs.. to full fill there desire.. to do all this just for fun, for the heck of it.. and its not just women.. its men too

Nupur: where u find im different from them.. I m one of

Mayank: ur not.. u haven't choose it…

Nupur: how u can be sure I haven't… wht I if I have..

Mayank: no u haven't.. if u would have …tum mjhy rukhti nhi.. if u would have been one of them… tum mjhy khud se itna door kerni ki khosih nhi kerti…

His fingers was creating havoc in her .. the way they were moving in her hairs .. his eyes for making her go breathless.. he is making her feel respectable… he is giving her… she was just staring at her.. his words were going throw her ears and were settling in the most deepest corner of her heart.. she want to listen to him.. she wnt him to just keep saying it….

Nupur: mayank.. I .i am.. not…

She was fumbling in his effect… she was drowning in his eyes… she was flowing… she was flowing…

Mayank: ur not proud of wht ur … though u should be… ur wht ur… u know whts wrong n whts right…. Ur not proud to be on the wrong side.. when still u have securely preserved the right in u.. u have the ability still… u have the thought .. u have the sight… the righteous. .. I cant call u tht wht u belive ur … I call that those girls who just for the sake of a alight interest can go to any level… and even doing all those.. they didn't feel a slightest regret…. Even if u have choosed it for god knows wht reason… no donot say u donot have a reason cause I know u must have… and I donot care… cause I have seen worse than tht…

For me ur not a sl**.. ur nupur… ur a girl purer than all those bi** I have seen.. ur a girl who warm my heart with her thoughts. .. ur a girl in whom I seek comfort..

She was just looking at him dumbfold… she was feeling if he will not stop right here.. either she will hug him and will seek his warmth.. or she will let the moist film break the barrier and flow..

Mayank: so donot say tht.. cause u donot know wht I see in u and how I see u..

There was a beautiful silent around them… they were just staring at each other… mayank was looking at her with all the affection… her face was glowing in the soft light of drowning sun… he was loving the texture of her hairs… her soft burgundy hairs were flowing with his fingers… she was looking at him and was just donot know wht to call him or feel him as…

He was a bit sacred to see more in her eyes… he was feeling pulled towards her.. and he has already moved dangerously closed to her…he can hear there heartbeats mingled together… but he even cant remove his eyes from her…

But the moment was broke at the right point …

Sarah: sir … there is a call for u…

Mayank: I m cuming… he said without break the eye lock… he stod up and hold her face by his one hand… and leaned down ..kissed her forehead… cum inside its getting cold..

Saying so he moved away towards the house… leaving nupur still with closed eyes… she never has experienced such affectionate kiss… it reminds her… it reminds her .. it reminds her of her mother… alone tear dropped from her eye… and she took a deep breath… wiping it off .. he is breaking her rules.. with all the correct ways… but he is …sigh..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
loved it lods
Beautifully written
loved it to d coreee
Awww...the morning part was sooo amazing n Adorable!!!!
i loved it to d coreee
n was totally Awww-ed with both MN 😆
loved it a lottt
spcly! his kiss on her forhear awww...
n then when he again call her it was sweet
n i sooo loved Nupur with her humor..😆
i mean bechari firangi 😆🤣🤣
loved that a lottt
n wow! she likes reading good...
ewww!!! i sooo hateee Esha the Bitch n Mayank's dad the creepy jerk!!! yuckkk!!!
n m sureee m gonna get more opportunities to hate these two!! 😳
bt poor Mayank his life totally messed up with discusting ppl n Nupur's life already a mess..Sigh!
thats wht the connection lies two lonely souls for each other with each other...
dying to read abt them more..
n abt that house! m sure Mayank wud find a way moreee worthy person to give it away...😉
loved it sooo much
n loved his kiss again..😆😳
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

ps: loved that line u written at the begining of this part it was amazing...loved it 😳
Edited by -Anila- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
mindblowing update. mayank is gem of person. mayur convo is beautiful
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is so beautiful update 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing updt fiza
loving this mayank ..he is such a sweetheart
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
A Beautiful update
i can feel how difficult for Nupur to let the feeling engulfs her heart,those pure feelings that she never felt before
continue soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
res

edited


uff wht a update... strt was soo funny 😆 😆

i m really in awww for mayank loved his character...he made nupur mind to be change..


llovelyyy

now i got tht neck wala point 😉😉 😆

pls pls jaldi update kerna cant wait more...
Edited by drmaha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update..
The morning part was cute..
Loved Nupur and Sarah's conversation... It was hilarious..
Can understand Mayank's pain.. It must be really hard for him to see his father like this...
Mayank believes that nupur didn't choose that profession with her consent.. And the way mayank define nupur as a person has truly touched my heart..

Mayank is feeling pull towards Nupur and Nupur is also feeling the same.. But Nupur isn't ready accept it just because of her profession..She's thinking Mayank's all concern for her is just for a month and after that he will throw her out of his life...

Please continue soon and thanks for the pm...

P.s- I'm also liking the way Mayank's mornings start now :D

Edited by Humayra - 12 years ago

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