MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 24

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It's surprising how many persons go through life without ever recognizing that their feelings toward other people are largely determined by their feelings toward themselves, and if you're not comfortable within yourself, you can't be comfortable with others.

Sydney J. Harris

Chapter: 9

The voice from inside made her cum out of an unknown zone mayank has taken her..

Mayank: Nupur its chilling .. and I am very bad care taker I am telling u…

She smiled despite of herself… can any one tell him he is the only care taker she came to know ever… so bad good pathetic how every he is.. he is the only.. the thought shocked her nerves and she stood up making her appear wht she is .. a seducer..

Nupur: really.. I though ur good at everything…

She emphasizing on everything mischievously.. and he raised hi eyebrows in oh..

Mayank: really… are u thinking about everything in ur imaginations.. already……aha donot worry I'll make sure I fullfil all of that ..he said in a whispered leaning closed to her…

She was caught ..it doesn't happen to much.. yet he is to good at that.. and that makes him a much more play along fun person

Nupur: n wht u think I m imagining Mr sharma…

Mayank: hmm.. let me have a closer look than.. he slipped his hand around her waist and pulled her closed she smirk and than pushes him back

Nupur: certainly not anything like that…

Mayank: really .. than why sumone is blushing so much… can u please elaborate that..

Nupur: I m not in a mood for elaboration…

Mayank: I wonder are u evr ..

This time it came more seriously… there was no mockery no humor

Nupur: I have never done it…its just that I donot know how to do it…

She said sheepishly and he was caught off guard with the innocence again.. this is sumthing that he cant get use to nor he can ever might get over.. but than is there any such thing as ever between them

Mayank: spreading his fingers softly on her cheeks…. U will learn.. u will.. I will make sure that..

It was a nice day.. the more time they were having with each other.. more they were getting in terms of being themselves… though it was more mayank who was speaking and nupur was more a listener but now or than her little appearance is wht was giving him hopes… and today her confession that she wants to yet she doesn't know how to was sumthing that made his heart expand…

It was night and after all the days work.. she was lying on bed and was waiting for him to join him.. it was giving her Gosse bump ..God knows why.. maybe because of the fact that mayank is the first man she is sleeping with .. Literally… the man she has been for s**.. she never stay there for sleep over… even if she was being paid to serve them whole night.. she will cum back to her home as soon as she is fiinhed.. nothing was ever more than that.. spending time with anyone was never the part… so having him beside her.. just for being there was sumthing knew and so exciting.. she has never knew that a man can be there with u without seeking any physical or s**ual pleasure out of a woman… and it was the most weirdest feeling to taken in…

She heard the sound of the door to open but she doesn't bothered to pretend she is sleeping or anything else.. she is now learn to be at peace around him… and it is more a feeling that she want to stay with .. for a lifetime… she smiled pit fully .. lifetime…. Here just 23 days are left..

He dropped himself on the bed with a jerk… with a loud sigh… he was tired.. yet the new feeling of removing tiredness was good.. ya good…

Her wide open eyes give him courage to speak.. but he hates himself for cuming up with such a pathetic question .. he so so hate himself ending this day with such errr.. crap discussion…

Mayank: nupur..

Nupur: hmm

Mayank: how long u have been in all this..

She turned to him in question wht he is asking… but than she got reminded he is asking about her.. wht she is.. sumhwere it change her peaceful expressions in to not so good and he hated himself more.. she knew he was curious .. he is dam curious mayb sumwhere insecure as he is there with a person that he doesn't now wht she is.. but even she can't deny the fact that she isn't sure of opening up with him.. after all its just 22 days left.. as another day is closing… after that wht is left is nothing.. opening up means to open the wounds too… and that part is actually wht he is curious to know and she is not ready

Nupur: 8 years…

Mayank: how old ur… he asked curious naah more shocked as she doesn't appear to be more than wht 20 … his expressions were now more weird

Nupur: she chukled.. I use anti ageing creams u see.. she winked at him has turned to herself and supported his head with his hand raising it to look at her…

Mayank: waoo.. I didn't knew I m sleeping with grany…

Nupur: she giggled.. I m 24…

Mayank: WHAT… how can this be… his heart sink so deeply that he even wasn't able to measure it..

Nupur: mayank.. do u need a permit to do all this…

Mayank: u started all this when u were wht 16..

Nupur: I lost my vir**** when I was 15… now freak out… I should have told this u on Halloween .. u seems like a white ghost now… she laughed and he cant even think how can she does so… Whtt.. mayank…

Mayank: it isn't funny nupur…

Nupur: really… she laughed more… but it's a good dam joke… it is… the smile was mixed with so much of rage…

Mayank: forget it…

Nupur: now that is funny for sure… forget what…. I think its more for u… forget it ..and sleep ur tired and now freaking out…

Mayank: I am actually…. He cant do anything than to be honest .. he was just giving panic attacks in his brain thinking about wht this girl hold in her heart…

Nupur: just wonder whn ur planning to loss it… she said naughty glint…

Mayank: why … ur to curious to know that…

Nupur: aha I am…

Mayank: donot worry that is on cards and that so pretty soon… he winked at her…

Nupur: I doubt…

Mayank: really…

Nupur: ya really…on a serious note… u shuld get serious now… ur not seeing any girl

Mayank: who told u so… I am actually staring at one..

Nupur: common mayank.. a woman ur these days is not the one u want for that… and ur not ending up on bed with sumone just seeing her for alike a month or so… right…

Mayank: ur estimating to much about me… I know I do have that effect.. girls just cant stop hallucinating about me.. ur thinking about me to much … he smirked..

Nupur: wht to do.. nothing amazing to think about so i am just trying to stick with lousy ones… sigh… my bad..

Mayank: I take that as offense…

She chuckled and pulled his cheek to wch he frown..

Mayank: wht was this …. I m not kid nupur…

Nupur: but u so appear like a grumpy bear when u frown like that.. see

He actually frowns more and was now irritated to core…

Mayank: grumpy bear… he almost shout… and she nooded in yes with giggles… that were not so annoying actually were a beautiful melody.. but right now its about his intergrity…

Mayank: out of all beautiful praises u came up with this…. wht makes u look at me like that fat, stupid, blue angry bear…

Nupur: u missed one thing ..frowning…

Mayank: nupur… u find me stupid fat…

Nupur: no I found u the most cutest, amzing man I have ever meet... and I think I will ever meet…

He smiled and this time more form his heart….

Nupur: I actually love the grumpy bear in all those bears.. he so cute…

This was sumthing that made him grin more widely… no not the fact that he was being compared with a bear.. that was not even the last thing on this earth he was thinking she will look at him like… but that fact that she compared him with sumone she likes… so indirectly he wants to believe she said .. she likes him..

Mayank: and ur the apple wch is droped quite far from the tree….

Nupur: I didn't got droped.. I was cuted off the tree…

Mayank: whatever it is… now the apple is my basket..

Nupur: now I take this as offense… u didn't got anything better to name other than a vegi

Mayank: fruit

Nupur: What evr……I so hate apples… Atleast wht I did was cute… now wht that is … From were I look like an apple…

She was acting annoyed and he was chukling at that..

Nupur: stop laughing… atleast my examples are better than urs… apple in basket…wht..

He laughed more now…

Mayank: see… ur sweet.. n ur turn so red and that so easily… now ur again red just like an apple…

Nupur: I m not… and u better get sum sleep…else I will bang ur head…n u will b all red and than i will make sure u rote.. ..s he pushed him to make him fall on the bed and he laughed more…

Nupur: mayank one more time u laughed I will kill u wht so funny about that…

Mayank: the apple is taking it as an offense I tell u…he raised his one hand and said tht like vow…. And than agin grined… ur getting annoyed on nothing… u called me fat bear that was oky.. a shinny tasty apple isn't..

Nupur: no it isn't..

She bang a pillow on his faced and he returned it throwing on her face with a smirk… he get it back

Mayank: wht nupur .. wht happen to ur adultery… are u planning to play pillow fight with me whole night… when we can have better things ….

She frown a bit… god knows why even knowing he has bought her , she is sumwhere donot expect him to go with her on that term.. and evrytime he bring sumthing like that she become nervous.. god knows why… sumthing she is expert at makes her feel nervous

Nupur: and wht are those…

Mayank: disappointing ur imaginations… sleep… and that so in literal meanings…

He moved forward looking into her eyes keenly… and she gulp down sum lump… until she was pressed on her pillow… he smiled and pecked her forehead lingering there for longer than he thought… in desire not to detached from her… yet he did…when he felt cutting grip on his hand…

Mayank: good nite…

She opened her eyes and found him still leaning on her.. she knew she was again turned into apple and the thought made her smile again…

Nupur: good nite…

He dropped himself on the bed again and closed his eyes still facing her… and she to didn't moved an inch away from him… it was amazing to have him beside..

With his eyes still closed…

Mayank: though I love it the way ur holding my hand… but please loss it abit girl… my fingers are complaining of mal blood supply..

He smirk and opened his one eye to look at her and she looked at his hand wch was still in her tight grip.. and truly she was holding it so tightly as if she may loss the grip and he will disappear…

She was moving the grip away when he placed his other hand on it stopping her to do so.. and placing his hand near his face …that is still in her hold… he closed his eyes.. to drift in to sleep…

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Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
loved it lods
Beautifully written
loved it to d coreee
loved the way Mayank always keep shocking her..
God!!!!!!!! why m fearing something really horrible in Nupur's Past...Sigh!
hope soon she will be able to share with him too...sigh!
i really loved that Grumpy Bear wala thing...😆
bt Apple wala was masttt 🤣🤣🤣
i mean srsly!! apple aur koi acchi wali fruit nhi mila??? 😆 isse accha toh Tomato hota 😆🤣🤣
bt Mayank was really cuteee
loved him a lottt
n OMG!!!!! loved the last part
the way she hold his hand n he later on keep it near his face was something really serene n heavenly...
loved it sooo very much...
bt itni jaldi 7days kese pass ho gaye??? mujhe toh laga abhi 2din hi huye unko ek ghar mein reh kar...
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API 🤗🤗🤗

ps: sry for the delay m all caught up with exams...
Edited by -Anila- - 12 years ago
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ya sorry wasnt feeling like 😕
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beautiful amazing. hope nupur will share her past to mayank

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