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Posted: 12 years ago
Did Maan marry Geet for Kids???
Was he forced in to the relationship??
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Posted: 12 years ago
For the new Fan Fiction
waiting eagerly for the next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 2
the whole part is in past.. only few gestures of geet in present .. so shall shade it purple
PAST CONTINUED
She rolls to his side & slowly slips her hand on his waist. She could instantly feel him stiff & then relax now days. Initially she could feel him get restless.. but 5yrs..umm.. these years have made him little comfortable. But she has learned it over years he is genuinely tired after ☺️. She took a deep breath. Humesha hi tired!!
Her pouting soon turned into sadness when each & every bitterness started to play back in her mind. Things were all fine. If u take like that. Maan was always a man of few words. He hardly spoke to anyone & the least to her. Maan was very serious types thats wat she understood of him now. Actually very serious type. He hardly socialized. He didn't even attend his office or client parties. Can u believe he didn't even watch movies forget watching TV. Yah he did watch tv... strictly news channels. She began to learn abt him as the time passed. Everyone respected him a lot & so a kind of admiration, respect formed in her heart with that came distancing.
She couldn't relate to him in personal level & phir uss din ke baad tho bilkul bhi nahi. She clearly remembered it had been just couple of months since there wedding. The usual sas bahu taunts. Daadi & pami always had their difference & nokh ' jhok. She never interfered in anything. She was way too practical & modern in her approach. She didn't believe in this nokh-jhok. She believed in not doing things which yourself don't like if some one else does it to u. So hear she was a clear miss fit.
Pami always taunted her most of the time over her family being not that high status as Khuranas. Pami would have never agreed for this marriage but it was Daadi who took an upper hand especially in matters like this. That could be another reason why pami disliked her so much. It was another day like this when pami had been really mean to her. Geet never answered back. She was really hurt that day. When Maan came back she rushed to the room behind him & hugged him crying out her agony. He instantly got worried & cupped her face. It was the first time he ever held her so closely other than their usual love making session at night & actually the first time looked into her eyes. That moment was something to be cherished for life long.. because it never happened again. Even today she feels it was probably her mistake. She should have kept quiet. To think abt it now.. she shied it was not that bad actually. But then she was young, new in the family. No one made her feel part of it, sadly not even him. There was no family talks. It was always Maan passing an order & that used to be final. Every one used to just follow wat he said. This was not the case in her house. Family used to talk. Ok .. darji used to take decisions but family spoke, like sitting together, "the family time". There was nothing like that. Only person who made her feel little like a family was Daadi. But then all that was easily ruined by pami just in a fraction of sec.
It was one of such day & she was all time low. All she needed was a sweet talk, just a hug. Just some one to make her feel special. Tell her its not always her fault. Well she expected that from the Maan Singh Khurana her husband, who didn't know wat emotions meant. But that moment when he looked into her eyes in concern he did look vulnerable.. like he did have emotions & all she had to say the reason for her tears was some silly fight with saas.. dammit!! it was not even a fight, it was pami again saying something mean to her. She instantly saw his eyes spitting fire. He stepped back like he disowned her. His anger had no limit.
Wat guts u have have to complain abt my mom to me
her eyes welled up & anger filled in. she was never angry abt wat happened. She was only upset all she wanted was a hug from him. & his anger only made her angry now & she too spoke back forgetting she was talking to the Maan Singh Khurana, that too in a tone no one ever spoke to him
Aur kis se kahoon. She always does this to me. Main ne tho kabhi aap se kuch nahi kaha. Lekin today she crossed all the limits, she.. before she could complete she felt a hand hit her cheek. She glared back at him angrily. How dare he? Before she could voice it out
he spat in out in shear frustration. Tum unse kitni choti ho ummar main. Can't u atleast consider that. He pointed his finger angrily don't u dare raise ur voice at me ever again. Aapne haad main raho Geet is wat she heard last from him on that topic. Well it would have been far better had she not wrecked up the topic itself, that wat she feels now.
She smiled sadly probably things would have been different now. Atleast she wouldn't have feared him as much as she does now. Something that episode left an impact that she could never share anything with him after that. Nor did he try to make it alright. Probably he didn't even notice.. she felt a fresh layer of tear form in her eyes. She immediately wiped her tears & sat upright to look fine.
After that incident when ever she approached him all he had to say was grow up Geet.. or Geet aapni bachkani harketen bant karo. Or I don't have time for ur saas - bahu talks.
Not that he was male chauvinist types. He never expected her to do all those wify things like cooking for him, or doing up his wardrobe. Actually he was very independent that way. He didn't even like if she tried to. Kitni bar kaha, I will manage. He preferred she did something rather useful than taking care of house hold kiosk. More over it was KM they had so many people to do all that. Thats when she decided to get back to her work.
PRECAP
more of past & guess maans initial reaction
-PART 1 PREV NEXT PART 3 -
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muskan & munchkins
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Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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When Muskan is back there is jaan on the GF for me.
Daadi has chosen Geet. Saas bahu drama in KM. Lots of nok jhok and fighting. Different scenario for sure.
Poor Geet all she wanted was a place to belong and he took that away too. Upar se "grow up Geet"... Can I transfer the khota kamina ullu galiyan here? How mean and cruel can you get?
She has been putting up with this for five years now? Why oh why? Ok now I am totally getting into the story...
Believe me, I know people like that who say things like "I can manage". I think that is the rudest thing you can say to someone who loves you and is trying to care for you. Grrr!
Thanks for updating so fast...
Hugs Muskan and munchkins...
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Edited by had2bu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
talking about the first part...

the lines "after 5 yrs of marriage every time she longs to told him in her arms after their close moments but he wants to clean up & lay on his side of the bed" made me feel as if he was in this relationship only becoz of family obligations and all...and looks like alot of story would be a flashback at first...anyway looking forward to this new ss of yours... coz you are always a pleasure to read...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wipeee i'm third...

didn't even realize that by the time i posted my view on the first part you had already posted the second one...

anyway... maan's character is now becoming quite clear... he never intefres in the family matters... he somewat seemed like mechanical in his approach... as in he fulfills the duties of husband... physical and social... the way he said " grow up Geet.. or Geet aapni bachkani harketen bant karo. Or I don't have time for ur saas - bahu talks." but there's is no place for emotion called love in his heart for his wife...

the lines " It was one of such day & she was all time low. All she needed was a sweet talk, just a hug. Just some one to make her feel special. Tell her its not always her fault. Well she expected that from the Maan Singh Khurana her husband, who didn't know wat emotions meant." made me feel as if geet was really vulnerable at that point and in a great need of a support which she didn't get except our always adorable dadi...afterall its difficult for any girl to quickly adjust to new surroundings and new people.
Edited by drashtirocks1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh ...my how can maan behave like that pls keep u r pace like this I'm loving this story ...hope to read next update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update ...maan behaviour quite indifferent in this story and he was really rude to slap geet whats wrong a wifey share problem wid his husband i am not saying go against his mother but atleast listen her then made her understand ...but no he behave like typical man or says mam's boy
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏awesome...amazing wonderful brillaint..really a different story...wondering how Geet managed till now...and what will be he reaction of great MSK...and i am also very intrested to know what MSK's point of view is...will be waiting...and thx for the fast update👏
Edited by sonnal_17 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😔...💔ing update..

I don't even want to imagine the pain that must have finally brought her to the decision of asking for a divorce😔 ..To have to feel lonely like that.. in an entirely new family, new life , to never get to open up to your husband! where does one go from there?

and now to sit there in his office , a place and people that know him probably better that she does..muskan this is soo ..:(

update soon..( before I start wishing that she should meet someone else😒)


and Thank you to the munchkiins!🤗
Edited by ninand - 12 years ago

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