Jaane dil mein kbse hai tu...- Maaneet Ff - Page 32

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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVELY UPDATE
BT MADHU KE DIL MAI KAUN HAI
OYE NO MAANEET SCENE KYA YAR
ME WAITING

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Posted: 12 years ago
Maaneet ka romantic pal aya aur chala bhi gya...


Hope maan geet ke liye chose kre.


Conti soon


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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 9(A)


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Daadimaa: bte ye color aap pe bhut acha lagenga

Aap jara tb tak try kr lijiye

Geet: ji

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Geet:- excuse me

Girl: yes madam

Geet: wo mujhe is dress ko try krna tha

Girl: madam, firstly you go straight then take left.

Wha changing rooms hai.

Geet: thanks

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Maan(think) :- yhi mauka thik rahenga

Aur mein geet se aaram se baat kr payunga

Aur koi disturb bhi nhi karenga

Pr wha jana thik honga?

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Abhi baat nhi ki'to aage baat krne ka mauka nhi mil payenga

Kal se rashme start ho jayengi Maan''''

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He knocked the door'

Geet: kaun hai

Maan: geet mein hu

Geet(whisper) : maan, pr wo yha kyun aaye hai''.kisi ne unhe yha dekh liya to''

Nhi nhi babaji''.phle hi annie ne hume dekh liya''aur wo''..

Maan:- geet

Open the door

Geet: what?

(Mummer):- pagal ho gye hai kya

Maan: geet, mujhe tumse baat krnhi hai

Geet: maan aap jaiye yha se

Maan: geet, mein tumse bina baat kiye huye , khi nhi jayunga

Geet(whisper) :- inhe kya ho gya hai

Babaji''''..

Geet: - maan hum baad mein baat karenge'..

Maan(mummer):- ye ladki smjhti kyun nhi'.

Mera is se baat krna bhut jaruri hai''

Aur ye'kuch sunana hi nhi chahti''.

Geet(think) :- inhe asi kaunsi baat krni hai'''.

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Geet: madhu mujhe pareshan krna bnd kr

Ananya(geet & madhu friend) :- ab isse hmara pareshan krna kha acha lagenga

Dost huye praye''..

Geet: ye tu kya kh rhi hai

Madhu: jo sch hai

Ananya: ab to isse bs Maan jiju ka pareshan krna acha lagenga

Jb wo iske pass aane ke bahane dunda karenge''

She felt shy.

Madhu cupped her face by chin.

Madhu: uff ye sharmana

Ananya: haye, abhi se ye haal hai''..

Jb wo karib aayenge''..to kya honga''..

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Maan: geet tum bahar aa rhi ho ya nhi

Geet:

Maan: thik hai geet, mein hi andher aa jata hu''.

Geet(whisper) : iska lock to phle hi krab hai

Inhone jhor se dakka diya to'..door open ho jayenga''..

Nhi'''nhi'''..

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Maan's hand completely snaked her waist'making her lost in his embrace'she closed her eyes'feel this moment...feel his love'while his lips touched the uppermost skin of her back'just before the scalp starts'she shivered with the simple of his lips''

Maan breathed in her hairs, taking all the scent of her body'

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Soon his touch replaced by a gentle and smooth kiss'First way to feel the pleasure of having each other so close''

Her heart stopped with his kiss'.

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His kiss seems endless'As his lips made its way down...Making her insane in his touch...

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He grabbed her more tightly in his embrace enough to make her open her eyes and get locked in his gaze'

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Ye sapna hai ya haqiqat'

Ye khwab hai'..ya sachai''

Ye yha sach mein hai''..ya mere khaylo ki ye koi tasveer hai''..

Jo bhi hai''..pr mein isse tutte nhi dekhna chahti''..

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She feared to break the gaze' is it a dream'that if I will broke the dream' and he will vanish'.

Precap:

"Meri Zindagi mein hai koi geet''.jisse is dil ne chaha tha''.

Pyaar kiya tha''.pr wo pyaar ek tarfa tha''..

Uska naam Geet Madhu hai''..

Tum kuch bolti kyun nhi geet''''."

Note:-

Next update: - part 9 (b)

I updated tomorrow if get time'''and it's depend only your response'

Hit like button and do comment'''


next part updatedpart 9(b) on page 80

Previuos part part 8 on page 69

Edited by maanetpriyanka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
what the hell is he playing at man
khud toh confused hai hi aur inhe bhi kar ke rahenge
have you no shame mister
agreed you wanna talk to her but this aint the way to do it
wonder if she even geard him when he was talking
ufff kya musibat hai bhai
cheers for pm

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