Jaane dil mein kbse hai tu...- Maaneet Ff - Page 34

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update
Loved it
Continue soon
Eagarly waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago

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4 keep pming me...😃
4 late commet...
keep it up this dear..👏👏
ur all updates r & ...😳...
each n every update of urs...⭐️
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NOTE: SOMEONE ASKED ME WHOM FAN I AM...THAT ANS IS ONLY SUMIT KUMKUM & HUSSAIN JUHI..NONE OTHER ANY OF RESENT ON TV..


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Posted: 12 years ago
😳 loved the trail room maaneet moments. Superb update
Precap-
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 9 A
nice part...
he says he loves someone else yet he kisses Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi
the up is god mann wants to talk to geet but geet how can she open the door mann himself oped haiii
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
So now Geet will know the truth...Waiting for next part..
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 9(B)




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Geet''..geet''.
Due to Loud knocked on door, she came back in reality from dreamland.

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Geet: ha
(Think):-thank god ye sapna tha
Tu bhi na geet'..puri jhalli hai ''na jane kya kya sochti hai''
She felt shy'..on own imagination.

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Maan: geet''open the door know'.
She opened the door'
Maan: geet , itna waqt lagta hai'..koi
She looks down'he continuously speaking '.but she think about the own dream.
Geet(think):- geet inhe ydi pta chala toh'..ye kya sochenge tere baare mein
Pr inhe pata kaise chalenga?
Khi inhe teri aankho me dekh liya toh..
Oh god geet..tu firse whi sb sochne lagi''
Ye sb Ananya aur Madhu ki galati hai'.whi jb dekho mujhe tease krte rhte hai'..
He looks towards her face'her expressions'those changes in each moment'
She smiles 'her make angry face, baby face, pout face'''
Maan(think):- isse kya huya
Mein yha kbse bhol rha hu'aur ye'..apne hi khyalo mein khoyi huyi hai'
Maan: geet
Geet: hmm
Maan: geet 'maine abhi kya kaha
Geet: hmm


He held her by shoulder and came close to her'and said "mein yha kuch kh rha hu 'aur tum..na jane kha khoyi ho.."
Geet: wo mein
She knotted her dupatta... . Feel nervous'..
Geet: wo mein
He cupped her face by chin'
Maan: geet kya huya
Geet: kuch nhi
Maan: geet mujhe tumhe kuch batana hai
Geet: maan mein aapse baad mein baat krti hu''.
She goes outside from the trial room, but he held her wrist'make her stop in corridor.
He faces her back'
Maan: geet meri baat jb tak puri nhi hoti'tb tak aaj tum khi nhi jayongi'.
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Rano: geet ko kafi waqt ho gya gye huye''.
Annie: aunty mein abhi dekhke aatu hu
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Suddenly power cut happened' she immediately turn and hug him.

Maan: geet kya huya''..
Geet: maan mujhe bhut darr lag rha hai
He hugged her back'
Maan: geet relax'
Mein hu nay ha'.
Daro mat
Geet: hmm
After few minutes both came out from hug'
Both turn back, now both not faces each other'.both backs faces each other'
Geet(think):- geet as eek dum se hug krne ki kya jaroorat thi''.
Wo kya sochenge
Maan(think):- acha huya light chli gyi
Nhi to mein ''.geet ki aankho mein dekhke usse dukh nhi de pata
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Annie: ye light kaisi chli gyi
Excuse me
Girl: yes madam
Annie: can you give me torch''meri bhabhi trial room mein hai''.unhe andhere se darr lagta hai''..
Girl: ofcourse madam
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Maan: geet''..
Mein kissi aur se pyaar krta hu
Geet''.na jane dil main kbse hai wo'..
Wo mere baare mein itna janti hai''.jitna mein bhi khud ko nhi janta''.
Wo mujhse dur thi''.pr har kadam pe sath thi'''
Jb bhi''kuch phli baar kiya''.wo wha na hoke bhi ''.whi thi'''
Mujhe ye ehsaas usse dur jake huya''..
Jb mein London chla gya tha'''aage pdne ke liye''..
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Wha jana''wo mujhe kitna smjhti hai'''
Jb mein yha tha na'.tb kbhi bhi asa nhi laga'.
Tb to mein usse shi se pasand tk nhi krta tha'..
Itni jagdalu jo hai'..
He smiles''
.
tb tum mujhe achi lagti thi''.
.
Us waqt tumsa ek humsafar chaiye tha''..
Pr waqt ne sb badal diya geet''
Mein ye tumhe hurt krne ke liye nhi kh rha hu''
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He turn'look towards her''but she not turn''.
Maan: geet
Mein tumhe ye sb ''
Mujhe ye sb phle hi bta dena chaiye tha
Mein janta hu''pr'..
Khne ka mauka nhi mila
Aur sayad''tb tak mein khud ko smjha hi nhi pa rha tha
.
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He again turns '..Now both backs face each other.
He paused for one minute''.
Maan: geet'uska naam Madhu hai''
.
Her tears flow down from hazel eyes''
Maan: Geet'. Ab tum job hi fasla lo'.mein tumhare sath hu
Tum ye shaadi''.krna chahti ho ya nhi''..
Ye bs tumhara fasla honga
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Geet koi bhi fasla lene se phle mein tumhe kuch khehna chahta hu'..
Ydi tumhara jwab HA huya''..to mein tumse wada krta hu'..
Mera atit kbhi bhi hmare rishte ke bich nhi aayenga'
Mein tumhe saari khushiya dene ki koshish krunga Geet'.
Jinpe tumhara''.bs tumhara hq honga''.
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geet tum kuch khti kyun nhi'''.

another ff update...

mg ff- is pyaar ko kya naam du- part 46


khamoshi update link


previous part 9(a)
Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
original posted by
chavvi16

what the hell is he playing at man
khud toh confused hai hi aur inhe bhi kar ke rahenge
have you no shame mister
agreed you wanna talk to her but this aint the way to do it
wonder if she even geard him when he was talking
ufff kya musibat hai bhai
cheers for pm

thanks for commenting...jaldi tumhe swalo ka jwab mil jayenga
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Posted: 12 years ago
original posted by
sweetsampa39

Awww
the cribbings of geet in trial room was cute.

But d precap seems intense.

Loved d update.


thanku...
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Posted: 12 years ago
original posted by
love2_soma

kya maan geet ko sach mei bata dega ki woh madhu se pyar karta hai...abb geet k faisla kya hoga...

wonderful
update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...


yes dear...wo bta denga...

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