FF:Tujhse Naraz Nahin Zindagi NOTE+UPDATE pg89 11/11/13 NO PMS - Page 30

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IshqDewaani

lovely update yaar...so sorry for late reply!!!

All the best for your exams...do well!!
Update after that...looking forward to it!
Thanks fr the pm!!!

Thanks for liking it dear...😳 and thnks for the wishes!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arul01

whoa! ankur to niki's rescue... he said that niki is his sister... i wonder why riya don't want arjun to know abt niki... please update soon! gotta know why riya is hiding it away from him! can't wait to read more! i really hope to know when arjun would find out abt niki!

Thanks so much for the comment😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: riushibabo

plllzzz update soon😕😒

I'm sorry for the long wait dear..😊
will update soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
tera abc maine pg 38 par hi likh diya🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: priya00147

tera abc maine pg 38 par hi likh diya🤣

matlab kya h tera??? omg kitna late edit kiya tune huh
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Posted: 12 years ago
main bhul gai thi tere tarah ki maine res bhi kia tha😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: priya00147

main bhul gai thi tere tarah ki maine res bhi kia tha😛

Chal koi baat nahi yaar😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

**PART ELEVEN**

It was another golrious start to the morning at ETF office everyone was happily smiling on the thought that they were successful in saving a life.

Shree: Good morning Ri, voh tera Ank kaisa hai???

Riya: Good Morning Shree Ank's fine he's out of shock and btw voh mera nahi hai

Chotu: Come on Ri you called him your son remember??

Riya: toh aise pucho na how's your son?

Arjun and Rathore were listening to their conversation carefully, Arjun couldn't help but smiled.

Rathore flicked the pages of file, he was staring intently at it. Arjun noticed it and placed his hand on Rathore's shoulder "Kya hua sab thik hai na?"

Haan, Replied Rathore

Alright team we have a new case, get your coffees and heads cleared seems like another serious case to me. So be ready when you enter the conference room today.

Shree: ye sir aise kyu baat kar rahe hai??

I don't know. Let's find out said Riya

Everyone settled in few minutes waiting for their Cheif to enlighten them wiyh the new case details..

All four looked back and forth at Rathore.

Shree Sir..

Sir..Shree repeated

Rathore suddenly jumped where he stood, 'Haan Shree bolo'

Rathore looked at Riya once, she sensed something to be unusual about her brother aka Cheif. She walked upto him nd rested her hand on his shoulder Rathore overlooked at her side ways.

He straight off gripped her hand and escorted to his cabin while asking the others to wait.

Kya hua bhai?? aise kyuu behave kar rahe ho aap

Riya honestly bolu I dont want you to be working with us on this case. But kyuu bhai she questioned

Kyunki if you join us in this case it definitely would be a very big mission specially because you're a female

Bhai what are u saying I seriously can't understand.. Why are u playing around with words???

Riya just read this said Rathore handing her the file.

ohhoo Bhaiya I can do this, But Riya your not fully fit..

Look bhai I would do this if I had to seriously I can't back out on any case just because there's a greater chance of me getting hurt.. Moreover there isn't any other female on our team to play the main Role.. Well let me re-word it.. There's no other female to play the next victim role...Gosh you're so sensitive bhai... you're Truly a brother to cherish..said Riya hugging Rathore..

Ohh shut up..You know I am always worried for u..

'I know bhai even though we aren't one' Rathore cut her words as he parted the hug in between Shut up we were, are and always will be one Understand..??

Yes Bhai.. she said crashing onto Rathore's chest sisterly...

Rathore smiled and hugged Riya back sighing in relief..

Arjun saw them talking while trying to lip read Riya, risk? What risk is she on about?


Arjun quickly walked into the conference room where Shree and Chotu discussed what was happening.

Rathore and Riya smilingly enter the conference room, everyone settles down.

Okay here's the new case everyone, Off late in hotels and restaurants in specifically in Santa Cruz there has been talks going around no-one knows if its true or not but we have to find out said Rathore as he slided the case files on the table.

Okay this has been secretly reported by 2 separate Restaurants manager, they have complained on the female singers missing.

Well people mostly call them bar singers but, we will just call them female singers?

Rathore: Arjun Tonight I want you to check Rest. Holiday Inn, Chotu go with Arjun

Riya come with me along with Shree we will be visiting Rest. Lee

Arjun: But Rathore I thought you wanted to go home early today.

Rathore: Don't worry mai chala jaunga.


Arjun: Par Rathore, I don't get this why are we looking into the missing case?

I mean kahi kuch aur toh nahi?

Rathore: You're right Rawte, other than the ladies missing, it's also said that these particular places only sell drugs specifically (Marjiuna)

Everyone just gathered basic informations from the Managers or the Owners and then we'll start following up.

Arjun took the file and walked out with Rathore while Riya walked out slowly trying not to miss her steps.

Shree: Congrats Chotu aaj toh bahut hi shubh din hai tere liye kyu?

Chotu: Shree kyu kich raha hai yaar? Yaha toh band bajne vali hai

Shree: Aarey aise kyu bol raha hai Chotu, Arjun Sir bahut hi ache hai

Chotu: Haan kitne aache hai mujhe pata hai, tu dekh le mujhe jan much kar akele choda na..

Shree: aarey chotu tu akela kaha hai? Arjun Sir, honge hi tere saath🤣

Shree ran off..with that

'Shreee' screamed Chotu as he marched out with a file.

Riya stumbled as she walked out, Shree stopped and held her. 'Ri you're not well please sit or just water?'

No Shree I have to go with Bhai Thank god you're there with me😊 said Riya

Shree: Hmm.. Okay I'll take you to wash room just wash you're face for now?

Riya: Okay

Chotu couldn't find Shree, he thought he might have just vanished in thin air.

Arjun: Jaldi chalo Chotu, pura din nahi hai humare pass!

Chotu: Aaaya Sir

Arjun: Okay milta hu Sam'.


Rathore: Okay Juno

Uff ye Ri-Shree kaha reh gaye hai thought Rathore staring down at his watch.

Shree: Sir, we are here.

Riya faked a smile as Rathore glanced at her.


Rathore: Okay come.

They sat in the car, Riya you look really tired said Rathore

Riya: Nahi Sir, I'm fine'

Rathore: Ohh btw aaj tumhari bhabhi ne tum dono ko khas karke raat ko bulaya hai for dinner

Kyu sir, questioned Shree & Ri jinxing it.


Rathore: Shree, aaj karva chauth hai..

Ohhh replied Riya.

Rathore muttered as if you didn't know it Riya.

Rathore: Shree please tell Chotu as well. But I'm thinking hard enough about Rawte.

I mean should I invite him or not?

Riya: Bhai you should, he's your bestie remember.

Rathore: Yes, I remember that Choti, but you know Nikz would be there and moreover Reema? I don't know how everything would work and this Case, guys I really don't know how we are going to put up with everything in a day!

Riya placed her hand on Rathore's shoulder, bhai don't worry and please calm down I'll find a way?

The trio reached Restaurant Lee, it was famous for tourists. They walked in to find the place neat and clean they were escorted to the tourist dinning area where there's an actual stage facitlity.

Someone looking through a black glass observing Rathore, Riya and Shree'
Person1: Boss, kya maal ayi hai

Boss: Bittu kuch bhi mat bol

Bittu: Sir, ye desi hai lekin lagti videshi hai'Boss, sach mai yeh bahut hi mast maal hai

Boss walks over to the window could only see Riya's back. He slapped Bittu and said, 'Bittu uska chehra toh dikh hi nahi raha hai' tu kya bakwas kar raha hai?'

Bittu: Sir, abhi palti voh sach mai kadak hai

Boss: Usse baat karke dekh aaj sham ke show ke liye book karne ke liye!

Bittu: Ji sir, mai abhi us saale Manager se baat karta hu'

*Phone rings at reception.

Bittu: Oye jaaneman, us kamine Manager ko phone toh de..

Receptionist: Sir, apke liye call hai.

Manager excuses himself from the Etfians and receives the call.

Manager: Hello

Bittu: Oye kamine, jo maal tere saath hai boss ne usse sham ke liye book karne ko bola hai

Manager: Magar mai?

Bittu: kyu be tu nahi kar sakta kya?

Manager: Par voh? Aur aaj? Mujhe nhi lagta hoga!!!

Bittu: tu nahi puchega toh mai tujhe abhi uda dunga saale kamine'

Manager: aarey jata hu..

Riya and Shree observe Manager's facial expressions closely.

Manager: Ma'am I'm sorry but my boss wants you to perform I mean sing her for tonights show!

Riya & Shree cracked up laughing while Rathore walked back to them from a little visit he payed here and there.

Rathore: kya hua?

Manager repeated his words.

Rathore immediately got angry, and held his collor. 'Kya samaj kya rakha hai isse? Meri behan hai ye!!!'

Rathore pushed the Manager and left the Restaurant angrily pulling Riya with him. Shree ran behind them pyshic Manager. Riya couldn't stop laughing but controlled.

Rathore drove roughly back to ETF headquarters, meet me in an hour Rawte!

Edited by funkylicious - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Note:

Okay Thank you all fr the dedication in reading this FF😛Seriously loving every single comment... and like both means a lot to me🤗

Thanks to each and everyone of you who wished me for my exams..
I heartly apologize for the delay in my update... I promise just for you all I've a thing coming up by tomorrow😉
Hope you liked this part... and enjoyed it.. Do hit like/ Comment..
Love ya all...🤗
-Shru
Edited by funkylicious - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
shru it was amazing update
when manager said to riya to perform
rathod dragged him
i loved it
update soon

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