SS-Muskaan jhooti hai!! (pt-2 updt)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello people, wrote an SS continuing from yesterday's episode. hope y'all like it 😉


Siddhi: Kuanl duniye ke sabse acche baap hai, main Anand ko kabhi pyar nahi de sakti par unhone Anand ko ma aur baap dono ka pyar diya hai.👏

Everybody is stunned to hear Siddhi's words; Kunal closes his eyes & thanks Ganapathi bappa for listening to his pleas. He is happy for fate favoring him at last, he looks at Anand across the court room & gives a smile of reassurance.😃

Thakral objects to Siddhi's statement & says to the judge that she's talking on somebody's influence & didn't really mean what she said.😲

Kunal: Bas thakral, aur kitna giroge? Case haarne ki nobat aayi toh apne prime witness ko hi galat bol rahe ho? Your honor, main guzarish karta hoon ki aap jald se jald iss case ka faisla sunaye isse pehle ki Thakral saab aur koi jhooti kahani sunaye.😉


Thakral: Your honor, main request karma chahuga ki aap mujhe ek mauka de yeh saabit karne ka ki Kunal kitna nikkama baap hai.😉😛

Kuanl: Thakkraaalll😡

Judge: order, order 😉 Mere pass aur bhi cases hai solve karne ko, Aap logon ki tarah main saalon ek dusre ke case ke wajah se court nahi aati hoon. Saare gavaho aur sabooton pe nazar rakhte hue adalat ka yeh faisla hai ki Anand ki custody uske papa ko diya jayega.


The chopras are jumping with joy OTT AC runs across & hugs his papa dearest & says 'My hero, ILU papa'😆⭐️


Kunal hugs him & tries to catch a glimpse of Siddhi, she's no where in sight. He could only see Abhay & Thakral having an heated argument & Richa standing coyly next to them. He leaves Anand & goes in search of her & finds her standing below the banyan tree silently crying.😭


Kunal: tum yeh mat samjhan ki main tumne thank you bolne aaya hoon, main jaanta hoon yeh tumhari koi chaal hogi.😡

Siddhi: kunal meri baat suniye!!

Kunal: Bas Siddhi, am sorry mera koi haq nahi hai tumhe naam se bulane ka par main tumhe mere dusre bte ko bhi tumse cheen loonga. Tab samajh aayega tumhe aapne kisi pyar karne wale se alag hone kaise lagta hai karke. Main tab tak chain nahi loonga jab tak main tumse sab kuch na cheen lo.

Kunal leaves storms away from there, Abhay comes looking like hunter & drags siddhi away.


Diwan house- an hour or two later,

Sulekha: Beta kya hua? Aaj case ki sunvayi thi na kya hua? (It's a wonder that she's asking this question when she was in the court stopping siddhi from speaking to chopras)😛

Abhay: Main yeh case jeet ke hi rahunga, mujhe Siddhi ko sabak sikhana hi padega.

Sulekha : kyon beta ab siddhi ne kya kiya? Maine siddhi ko kaha tha tumhe gussa nahi dilane ko par who meri baat maanti hi kaha hai?🤢


Abhay goes to Siddhi's room & drags her from her seat,

Siddhi: chodiye mujhe, yeh kyaa kar rahe hai aap?

Abhay: main tumhe nahi chodunga, tumne jo kiya hai uske liye tumhe jeena ka koi haq nahi hai. Main tumhari jaan le loonga. Koi mujhe mere Anand se door nahi kar sakta.😡

Siddhi: chodiye mujhe, meri baat samajhne ki kosish kijiye.

Abhay: sunne samajhne ka time ho gaya hai ab, tumne jo kiya uske liye tumhe saza zaroor milega.😡

Abhay pushes her toward the table & strangles her, Siddhi struggles to untangle Abhay's hands but his strength over powers her. Siddhi chokes & is losing consciousness fast, her life flashes before her eyes. She sees Kunal, her kids & the times which she never could spend with them. She faintly hears a sound whispering In her ears saying 'Siddhi, main tumse pyar karta hoon, main tumhare bina nahi je sakta. Hey bhagwan iss bachalo' its kunal's voice which she remembered it from the time when she was shot 9 yrs ago. The fight in her came becomes stronger, she tries to scratch Abhay hands, face to stop him. He doesn't stop; Siddhi tries to find something on the table with which she could stop Abhay. Her hand touches a cold block; she grabs it & hits hard on Abhay's head👏. Abhay gives a cry & his eyes rolls out; he touches his forehead with shock & falls down.🤢

Sulekha comes running to Siddhi's room on hearing her son's cry & finds Siddhi holding an idol in her hand gasping for breath. She sees her son lying dead on the floor & runs towards him; she hugs her son & starts crying. She looks at Siddhi in anger & says tumne mere beta ka khoon kiya hai Siddhi, tumhe iski saza Zaroor milegi.😡

Siddhi's trance is broken when she sees the idol in her hand; it's the Idol which Anand chopra had got for her as a gift. The idol of mother Mary holding baby jesus, how & when did this come to my room? She thinks & breaks down.😭


Disclaimer: based on my imagination 😉😆



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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Ramya - love your signature and cannot agree with you more 😉😆

P.S: Comments on SS will follow...
Edited by shweta_r - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Rams this is a very likely possibility that Siddhi may yet again have to save herself from Abhay (well she got herself into the mess due to her 'majbhoori's') because Kunal ain't coming!
And yes its likely Suleka will be the next vamp alongwith Richa , Parichay has to have more negative characters than positive! 😡
So what's next😕? Siddhi goes to jail for another 10 years (obviously she nor Kunal are capable for winning a case at court) , Kunal will be shown vela yet again and the story will focus on both Anands falling in love with same girl?
Having said that,Good piece of work😉 Since you aren't a Parichay CV I am sure this track will be handled sensibly 😉😃 I like Sid hitting Abhay with the gift AC bought for her !
Edited by chitsss - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Ramya,, when did you write this? I almost missed it even today! Good work!! Waiting for the continuation. Did you see the new promo? Looks like Kunal is coming after all.. but its too soon to say anything considering how misleading promos are!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maybe the judge will pardon Siddhi for this murder or maybe even give her a gold medal for it, since she has already been to prison for a crime she didn't commit😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Siddhi in JKR avatar.. Its an interesting twist..



Well Written Ramya👏👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2

Diwan house

Siddhi is hunched in a corner holding the Idol tightly to her chest while Sulekha is bawling holding Abhay's lifeless body🤢. Richa walks in the room & says 'Inspector, arrest kijiye Siddhi ko, Abhay ka khoon karne ki jurm main' Sulekha joins in & shouts 'ha Inspector Siddhi ne mere bte ko mara hai'. Siddhi is taken into custody. (don't ask how Richa came there, kuch bhi ho sakta hai parichayland main 😉)

Chopra house

Everyone is happy about KC winning the case,Veena,seema & AC are cooking special halva to celebrate😃. Richa stumbles inside Chopra house gasping for breath & calls for veena ' Ma ma kaha ho aap?, mujhe aapko ek kush khabar sunana hai' 😈Veena, Seema,AC & the rest of the ungrateful chopras come to the hall to see Why Richa was having asthma attack.😆


Veena: ' Richa, beta kya hua tum itne halat main kyon ho? Kya hua jot um bhaagi chali aayi yaha?'😕

Richa: 'Ma Siddhi ne Abhay ko khoon kar diya, main abhi Diwans ke ghar se aa rahi hoon. Ab who Jail main sadegi aur main Kunal ke saath ek nayi zindagi finally shuru kar sakthi hoon'😈

Veena: 'Kya!!!!!!, Siddhi ne Abhay ka khoon kiya? Par kyon? Mujhe toh lag hi raha tha ki Abhay se shaadi karke oh kush kabhi nahi reh sakti karke'🤔

Seema: 'Siddhi aur Abhay ka khoon? Mujhe yaakein hi nahi ho raha.'😲

AC: 'Nahiii!! Meri ma kisi ka khoon nahi kar sakti.'😭 (OTT at its best 😛)

Richa: 'Kyon nahi kar sakti? Uss ne pehle bhi mere bhai ka khoon karke 9 saal chakki pissa hai ab who puri umar chakki piss ke hi kategi.'😉


'Kyon jhoot bol rahi ho Richa, Siddhi bhabhi ne Rohit ka murder nahi tum ne kiya hai' Speaks Raveena.

Everyone is shocked & turn to look at Raveena who's standing with her husband Vikarm at the door.😲 ViRa narrate the story of how Rohit died in the accident & who was responsible for it.🤔

Seema: 'Par Siddhi ne jhoot kyon bola ki who khoon Kunal bhaiya ne kiya hai karke?'😕

Vikram: 'Didi ji Siddhi ne jo kuch kiya who Kunal bhaiya ko bacchane ne liye kiya hoga aur yeh sab Richa ki hi chaal thi.'😳

Richa: 'ha ha maine hi Siddhi ko divorce papers pe sign karvake jail bheja Kunal ke badle, maine jo kuch kiya Kunal ka pyar pane ke liye kiya. Main kabhi kunal aur Siddhi ko milne nahi doongi' she howls & goes away.🤢

Chopras are still reeling on hearing Richa's words when KC walks in; he's surprised to see Raveena & Vikram & taken aback by the open mouth looks on the chopras. Seema tells him about what Richa had told them just minutes ago.😊

Kunal: 'ha seema mujhe pata hai Siddhi mere liye hi jail gayi karke, uss ne mujhe bataya tha. Par main who baat bhool hi gaya Siddhi be jab Abhay se shaadi ki'

Seema: 'Oh!!Kunal Bhaiya, Richa ne yeh bhi kaha ki Siddhi ko arrest kiya hai Abhay ke katal ki liye. Who ab Jail main hai'

Kunal: 'Kya, Siddhi jail main hai? Mujhe uss se baat karni padegi'.🤔

Chembur Police station

"Siddhi, yeh kya sun raha hoon main. Tumne Abhay ka khoon kiya?' : Kunal

Siddhi who was standing with hollow eyes turns towards Kunal & stares blankly without registering its Kunal.

Kunal: 'Siddhi, main tumse kuch pooch raha hoon. Jawab do, kya tumne Abhay ka khoon kiya?'😡

Siddhi jolts back to reality:'haan kunal maine Abhay ko mara dala'

Kunal: 'Kyon Siddhi?😕

Siddhi: ' woh mujhse mera sab kuch cheen lena chahate the, main kaise apne zindagi ko jaane dete?'

Kunal: ' kyon, jin paison ke liye tumne uss se shaadi ki who tumhe nahi de raha tha?'👎🏼

Siddhi:'aapko jo samajhna hai samajh lijiye, waise bhi aap jaan ke kya karoge mere zindagi ke bare main?'

She shouts at Kunal & walks like a zombie & sits on the cot lost to the world

Kunal is flummoxed listening to Siddhi's words & walks away from there clueless to the fact that his other son Anand is missing from the picture from the day Siddhi told about him to Kunal.


PS: Its purely based on my imagination, any resembles to real or reel is purely co-incidental 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hehe! Nice take Ramya. So finally Siddhi is pagal!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very well written Ramya,👍🏼
I liked the sequence of events happened . It is not abrupt but Apt. Will wait for the next update..😛
Edited by san_aish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi

Thanks Ramya for the pm. Read both parts now.

Glad Siddhi killed off Abhay, wont mind seeing that in the show too. But KC again behaving clueless. Hope in next part he decides to fight for siddhi in court and gets the full truth.

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