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tashu20

@tashu20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

awesome os...beautifully written.. loved it...!!!

love the way sharon confessed her love to swayam

plz keep writing more...😊

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honeyangel

@honeyangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

It was a nice OS... N loved the way sharon realises the importance and value of swayam in her life... Confession part was so nice... and It was beautiful OS 😛

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Wow. This OS was simply amazing. Sharon's confession was in simple words mind blowing. Beautifully penned. Loved this OS to the core. Definitiley one of my favourite OS.

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Sravani - Simply put a very amazing OS, with respect to the present track. Loved it.

Its been awhile i read any OS with the present track on SwaRon..badly needed this.

Thanks for writing this.

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Whoa! Whoa! Whoa! That was one helluva of an OS! I absolutely loved it! Matlab tune toh Sharon ko pura kholke, uske har ek part ko ekdum minutely examine kiya and explain kiya. I have NEVER EVER come across a more blatant display of emotion such as this especially where Sharon is concerned. Sharon as a rule, has been the most complicated, shrouded character there ever was and to see her like this stripped of all her inhibitions and layers was one mind blowingly awesome experience. This was as open as she could ever be. Brilliant job.

There was so much substance in this OS that it's difficult for me to pin point one thing that is much more amazing than the rest. This was evenly written and each sentence of this OS was layered thickly with emotions. This was like an emotional nuclear bomb. I still can't get over the awesomeness of this OS.

I really liked the way you managed to turn this scene around. I liked how you played with Swayam's character. All in all it was one extremely brilliant piece of work and I know I'm going to be reading it again and again. And just so you know, I'm now a big fan of your works. This OS appealed to me in many ways. Nice work! 👍🏼

Edited by Sawyer_Tom - 13 years ago

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Poonam

@Swayamonly

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Have I told you how much I loved ur OS?? NO??? Lemme tell you I looouuu it... After reading it, I'm litterly like ^_^ It was awethome...:P It was so blessful to see Swaron thinking about each other to this extent... You portrayed Sharon, her simplest side very well... Cudoos to you...:) *cyber hugs*

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_bellaSwan_

@_bellaSwan_

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

I read it numerous times . Still reading its one of most amazing one . It's awesome out of da world I loved it

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--Rumeli--

@--Rumeli--

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

woa!sucha candid one!a great confession!desirably longer one wich made it more beautiful!

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Pankhuri Priyam

@SwaRonpankhuri

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

aww lovly 1
Just love the way sharon emotd her secret..i was just imaging sneha doing dat.. Aww she lukd so gud inactng innocently.. Lovly, plz pm me if u continue dis or othr

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swaron_tanha4

@swaron_tanha4

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

wow...
it ws jst awsum...
lvd it...

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