ansh SS: KISMAT KE KAGAZ PAR

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Kismet ke kagaz par

Anandi and shiv are married for past one month but they still not have full husband wife relationship as shiv has told anandi that he would take it to next level when she would be completely ready … but these one month alone at circuit house has brought anandi more and more closer to shiv.. her liking and respect for him has increased by leaps and bound and started to convert into love…. She loves to spend time with him., feels restless when he's not around , in all she is falling really hard for him..his constant touch, sent shiver down her spine….but still she is unable to confess her feelings.. everytime he comes in front of her and she tries to tell him but out of shyness she usually blurt out something stupid.. shiv has also noticed this change in her behaviour but was nable to point the reason to this restlessness of hers whenever he is around her.. he thought that she is still not uncomfortable to be with him and hence this behaviour.. little did he know that she is most comfortable with him that she has been ever with anybody her whole life……..

One day shiv came back from office and announced to her that he would be gone to delhi for a week as he has an important meeting over there..

Anandi: kya? Delhi? Aur wo bhi ek haft eke liye?'

She said with a sad tone

Shiv: ha anandi ji … wo zaruri kaam hai..

Annadi: lekin? Mein apke bina itne din kaise rahungi……

Shiv shocked to hear that; ji?

Anandi realized what she just said : umm.. kuch nahi wo main ye keh rahi thi ki mein ek hafte yahan akeli kaise rahungi…

Shiv: nahi ..main soch raha tha ki kyun na ap haveli chali jae.. wahi ruk jaiyega.

Anandi: nahi… ab ye mera ghar hai.. itne din waha rukna acha thode hi lagega..'

Shiv smiled listening to this: lekin ap yaha circuit house mein bhi to bore ho jaegi.. main to apko saath bhi le chalta lekin main waha pure time busy rahunga aur ap waha bore ho jaegi

Anandi( mutters to herself angrily): yahan bhi to bore hi houngi.. kam se kam delhi jati to saath to rehti apke.. par nahi . kam se kam puch to sakte the

Shiv: apne kuch kaha anandi ji

Anandi comes out of her thoughts: nahi… wo main soch rahi thi ki ap jaiye.. mein reh lungi yahan.. aisi koi problem nahi..ye mera hi to ghar hai.. apne ghar mein akele rehne mein kya problem ?

Shiv: nhi anandiji aise mera mann waha bechan rahega ye soch ke ki ap yahan akeli hia..ek kaam kyun nahi karti .. ap Udaipur kyun nahi chali jati… waise bhi sab apko wahan bahut yaad karte hai … shadi ke baad mere kaam ki wajah se hum zyada din waha ruk bhi nahi pae..

Anandi: par yahan panchayat aur school ka bhi to kitna kaam hai..

Shiv: arrey anandi ji 1 hafte mein kuch farak nahi pad jaega… panchayat mein aur log bhi to hai.. aur ab to apke school mein aur bhi nae teachers recruit ho gae hai to wo sambhal lenge… aur waise bhi sarpanch ko bhi to chute milni chahiye…….

Anandi thinks for a second , then sadly.: thik hai… main baki pancho ko bata deti hu..

Shiv notices her sad face: kya hua? Agar apka mann nahi hai to rehne dijiye.. zabardasti nahi hai koi…

Anandi comes out of her thoughts and realized that her bhondu pati has misunderstood her sadness: arrey nahi nahi.. aisi koi baat nahi hai.. main to balki khush hu.. waise bhi ma, papji , dadu, aur bki sab ke sath samay zyada bitane ka mauka hi nahi mila… isi bahane un sab se milna ho jaega

Shiv:great.. to main abhi ma ko khabar karta hu .. ap packing kar lijiye, kal bhim singh apko chod aega gadi mein..

Anandi shocked: kya ? ap mujhe chodne bhi nahi aenge..

Shiv: I m really sorry anandi ji …meri flight jaipur se hai subah subah.. to bilkul bhi time nahi hai

Anandi got angry and left room saying: ummm. Main room main jati hoon… mujhe ja kar packing karni chahiye…

And she left to her room………shiv was shocked to see anandi's reaction… she had been behaving differently for past few days but today was totally different… was her tone now angry? He could nt understand

He comes back to room..he saw her packing or rather throwing her stuff in bag….shiv was shocked to see her like that.. he had never seen her in this state….he held her hand in his hands as she was about to turn around

Shiv: anandi ji kya hua? Ap mujh se naraz hai kya?

Anandi was looking down and without meeting his eyes speaks: nahi .. aisi koi baat nahi… kisne kaha apse..main kyun naraz hongi apse..apko jana hai jaiye…zaruri kaam hai.. main Udaipur sab ke saath rahungi,,sab se mile hue itna waqt ho gaya hai.. mahi ki shararte bhi bahut miss karti hu..aur dadu ne to wada kiya tha ki wo is baar mujhe gardening ke nae tarike sikhaenge..aur choti ma ke haath ka khana bhi bahut miss kati hu mai.. sanchi se bhi to….

She continues speaking continuously without looking at him when shiv interrupts her

Shiv: idhar dekhiye meri taraf..he holds her chin and made her look upwards.. he was shocked to see her eyes full of tears….

Shiv: anandi ji ap ro rahi hai? Kya hua? Mujh se koi galti ho gai kya? Plz bataiye na..

Anandi burst with more tears rolling down her eyes.. shiv cuppes her face..

Shiv : anandi ji kya hua? Plz aise roiye mat..ap janti hai na ki main apko rote hue nahi dekh sakta… plz chup ho jaiye

He wiped her tears gently ….

Shiv: plz anandi ji bataiye na , kya hua?

Anandi immediately hugs shiv and more tears escaped her eyes..he felt her tears through his shirt. shiv was shocked to the core at her reaction … a shiver ran down her spine.. they have never been this close.. he immediately embrace her in his arms

Shiv worriedly: anandi ji kya hua apko ? sab thik hai na?

Anandi sobbing: collector sahib main apke bina kaise reh paungi itne dino tak…

Shiv realized what the matter was: anadnij iisiliye to main apko udaipur bhej raha hu… dekhiye agar ap wahan jane mein comfortable nahi hai to ek kam kijiye, ap haveli ruk jaiye….

Anadi got angry and immediately broke the hug.. shiv surprisingly: kya hua?

Anandi: main apse ye keh rahi hu ki main apke bina nahi reh paungi aur ap mujhe kabhi haveli to kabhi Udaipur bhejne ki baat kar rahe hai.. yun to bahut samajhdar bante firte hai aur itni si baat samajh main nahi a rahi ki main akele rehne ke liye udas nahi balki apke bina rehne ke liye udas hu, main apko miss karungi…pata nahi kaun apko intelligent kehta hai… itne din ho gae , par mere dil ki baat nahi samajh pae , to main hi pagal thi ki apse ye expect kar rahi thi.

Shiv: kaunsi baat

Anandi bluts out angrily: yahi ki main apse pyar karti hu

Shiv was shocked: ji? Kya kaha apne?

Aanndi realized what she just said.she luked down

Shiv: anandi ji ahi apne kya kaha?

Anndi: umm.. kuch bhi to nahi.. kya kaha maine? Apke kaan baj rahe hai

Shiv: nahi anandi ji apne kaha ki ap mujh se pyar karti hai.. o my god.. kya ap sach keh rahi hai..

Anandi smiles a littleand luked shyly down…a huge grin spread on his face .. he held her face in his hands..

Shiv: anandi ji ek baar phir se kahiye na plz

Anandi looked deep into his eyes and smiles and shyly says: ha collector sahib..main bahut pyar karti hu apse..bahut.. tears rolled down her cheeks)

Shiv: I cant believe this… par ye kab , kaise…

Anandi with teary eyes but a smile adorning her teary face: kab, kyun kaise? Mujhe kuch nahi pata collector sahib par sach ye hi hai ki ap mere liye kissi farishtey , kisi kahani ke rajkumar se kam nahi hai .. apne mere jeevan mein wo sari khushiyaan bhar di hai jinke bare mein maine kabhi sapne mein bhi nahi socha hai.. kabhi nahii socha tha ki mujhse koi itna pyar karega ki uske liye meri hansi se zyada kuch mayne hi na rakhta ho… collector sahib… apne mujhe ek naya jeevan diya hai… apka sath, apki dosti kab mujhe achi lagne lagi pata hi nahi chala… main bhagwan ka ye ehsaan zindagi bhar nahi bhul sakti ki unhone mujhe ap jaisa jeevan saathi diya… app, Sirf apkesaath hi zindagi ka har pal jeena chahti hu..kabhi nai socha tha ki main phir se pyar kar paungi, lekin mere dil pe mera bas hi nahi chala, aur main apse pyar kar baithi.. kab ap meri zindagi ban gae pata hi nahi chala,,,, app paas hote ho to bahut accha lagta hai.. aur door hote ho to meri dhadkane jaise ruk hi jati hai….ab mein sath kabhi nahi khona chahti….i love you collector sahib.

Saying this more tears rolled down her eyes with a bright smile on her face… shiv wiped her tears and cups her face .. he has also got little tears in his eyes..

Shiv: I cant believe this anandi ji… ap mujhse pyar karti hai? Ap janti nahi hai main aj kitna khush hu… ap janti nahi hai ki main kabse is pal ka intezar kar raha tha…apne mujhe aj meri zindsai ki sabse badi khuhsi di hai.

Anandi puts her hand lovingly on shiv's face and wipes off little tears that were starting to form in her eyes… she was lost in his deep eyes and instantly hugged him.. shiv's hands automatically landed o her back… he could feel her love… her heart was beating against his chest...


TO BE CONTINUED...

THANK YOU.. HOPE YOU LIKED IT.. AND IF YOU DID, DO PRESS LIKE AND COMMENT...😛😛😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww!! very nice pls continue
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lovely👏 too good...lekin yeh "TO BE CONTINUED" bahut hi zalim word hai😉 dil toot jata hai...so plz update next part ASAP...👏👏👏👏
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Like it!... Are... We love it yar... 👏 ⭐️ superb, fantasic, mindbloing part , Ukhadi-ukhadi Anadi aur uske Bole badari Shiv,both r very...very...cute.. , Pls...pls...update next part asap.
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To be continued? Dil ki dhadkanein bhi kabhi tootni chahiyein...inka silsila jaari rehne dein...rokengi to dil dhadakna band ho jayega 😳

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AWEEE VERY NICE... LIKED IT ALOT ... DO CONTINUE SOON😊👏
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Great Job!! I really wanted to keep reading and reading...

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