Virika SS: Love or hate? *AWARDED* - Page 7

Created

Last reply

Replies

610

Views

104k

Users

78

Likes

1.6k

Frequent Posters

-vish- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#61
awsome update😊
loved hw u describe viren staring at jeevs...
thanx for pm...plz continue soon!!
little.angel56 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Please continue soon
this is gona be a torture, if you make us wait more :D
this is awesome, loved it trullyy!
Aqibaa_19 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#63
awesome update...continue soon n do pm me the next time u update...
Jujuk thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Chapter 3

"Viren look whose here !" The smile on Viren's face disappeared as he saw the tall and well-built figure in standing in front of him. " Look Rahul is here to join us for the wedding. I'm so happy you took out time for us from your busy schedule!"

"I had to come aunty!" replied Rahul as he stretched out his hand to greet Viren," Hi!"

"Hi!" Viren replied with a forced smile.

"Come lets go .."

Swamini took Rahul with her, stopping every now and then to introduce him to her guests.

"Jeevika, meet Rahul my sister's son"

"Hi, I'm Rahul."

"Hi Jeevika. Jeevika Chaudry."

"Of course! Nice to meeting you,India's super model! You are truly beautiful! "saying this he held her hand and planted a soft kiss.

Rahul smiled. Jeevika blushed. Viren fumed.

The two enjoyed the night talking to each other and then retired to their rooms to rest for the night.

**********

"Good Morning !"

"Good morning!"

"Guess what Viren, Jeevika has prepared your favourite kheer for breakfast." Swamini smiled as she scooped out a generous portion of it onto Viren's plate.

Viren's eye widen and he gulped looking at the kheer in his plate ."Kheer again! I mean I just had it last night. "

"Viren at least have some." Jeevika pouted, "for me."

"I am having an upset stomach. I do not feel like having anything." he sighed holding his stomach. Why does she always have to do this?

"Viren"
"Jeevika"
"Viren"
"Jeevika"

"Rahul "

"What? Where did he come from ?"

"From Czeckoslovakia"

"Ufff!! I meant why did you take his name now? "

"Beacause I am going to feed him the kheer "

"Ya right! But bad luck it is already 8:15 and no one is allowed at the breakfast table after 8. And by the way that Rahul has come from France"

"Done?"

"Yes."

"Then get off the chair and let Rahul sit here so that I can serve him the kheer."

"Excuse me?"

"Ya sure you are excused, you may leave now!"

"This is my house. My chair. My table. My plate. My cutlery. My aaa.."

"Anything else you would like to add to the list?"

"Hmm...My kheer!"

"Oh really? Well I made it and I will decide who shall have it."

"Really?"

"Cut it of you two !"

"Oh Rahul! When did you come?

"Right now. And it seems like you have prepared kheer."

"Will you have it?"

"Sure"

"Come join us." Swamini pointed towards the empty chair.

"But it's already 8.15," Viren tried to remind Swamini of the rule in low tone. At which she shot a glance at him. " Rahul I pity your stomach!" Viren said as he got up to leave the room.

PLease read the comment below :)
Edited by Kashy15 - 13 years ago
SJ6... thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#65
oooh wat a cut update love to see them arguing loool
wonder when they will fall in love lool
xxx
Jujuk thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Thank you all for the lovely comments!
I hope you like this update and in case you have any problem / confusion regarding the track then feel free to ask. In the above update the dialogues are between jeevika and viren. Rahul has a short part in the convo!
Someone asked me if I update for comments only then my answer is no but everybody likes too be appreciated and basically it is just a way to see how many peaople are following the story. Thank you once again!
P.S. Manvi and Jeevika are not sisters. :)
Enjoy
Do comment and like !!
ashna1406 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#67
loved it..
continue soon with a longer update
loved this viren n jeevika
wnt them to fall in love!
n do pm me 😊
BloomingAway thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#68
great update😊
They are so cute
plz continue soon
MaaNeeTLuV thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#69
wow amaxing yar..viren is awesome luv u jeevi!!
Nishtha.Relan thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#70
lloooved it !! it was awesome and lovely!
Thanks for the PM!!!
and do continue soon i will wait for the next part to blast thanks !!!

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul · 1 months ago

Love and emotions Season 10 Part 1 2 little girls were playing together.They were Kavya and Khushi. Kavya:You are my best friend Khushi....

Expand â–¼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42 · 9 months ago

Characters Burak Ozçivit : Osman Bey Ozge Torer : Bala Hatun YiÄŸit Uçan as Boran Alp Ragıp SavaÅŸ as Dündar Bey Eren Vurdem as Konur Alp Alma...

Expand â–¼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Sshesha · 1 months ago

DEDICATION I am dedicating this story to my friend Jasminerahul who had requested me to write on Samrat-Nayanthara from Yeh Hai Chahatein based...

Expand â–¼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul · 2 months ago

Love after lies Part 1 I dedicate this SS to my friend Shesha who wants me to write a ParAj SS.The main plot belongs to Shesha.I just created...

Expand â–¼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42 · 9 years ago

Ritik Mehra : Business Tycoon and Elder brother of Raghav Shivanya Kapoor : Doctor and Elder Sister of Naina and love interest of Ritik

Expand â–¼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".