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giaa5678

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Posted: 12 years ago

MY FIRST OS SO SOORRY FOR MISTAKES

PART 1

MAAN:DON'T TAKE TOO MUCH STRESS ITS NOT GOOD FOR U U TRUST ME NA

GEET:HA MAAN BUT WHAT ABOUT HIM

MAAN:JAAN IM HERE NA I WILL HANDLE IT

GEET:MAAN WHAT IF HE WILL TRY TO DO IT AGAIN

MAAN:NOTHING WILL HAPPEN TRUST ME

GEET:OK BUT NOW I WANT TO STAY IN UR ARM I MISSED U SO MUCH.

MAAN:I ALSO MISSED U SO MUCH

(JUST THEN SOMEONE BARKED IN THEIR ROOM)

MAAN:DON'T U HAVE MAANERS TO KNOCK

DEV :DON'T TALK ABOUT MANNERS...I DIDN'T KNEW TO ROMANCE WITH UR YOUNGER BRO WIFE IS IN UR SO CALLED MANNERS

MAAN:JUST SHUT UP U bas***d

GEET : MAAN LEAVE DEV GET OUT FROM HERE NOW

DEV JUST SHUT UP U BITCH U R MY WIFE & UR WITH HIM

AT THIS HOURS OHH I FORGOT U R HIS MMM LET ME THINK YES U R HIS

MAAN:STAY IN UR LIMITS DEV U NEVER BOTHERED ABOUT HER THAN WHY NOW ...JUST LAEVE FROM HERE

DEV:UR TAKING HER SIDE BRO JUST THINK ONCE BRO SHE CAME HERE AS MY WIFE THROUGH OUR WEDDING & SHE IS NOW ACTING AS UR LOVER THATS IT

GEET :U bas***d HOW DARE U

DEV:GEET JUST THINK THAT WHAT U WILL TELL TO OUR FAMILY THAT U R CARRYING HIS MY ELDER BROTHER'S PART IN U

MAAN:DEV SINGH KHURANA JUST LEAVE

GEET:MAAN CALM DOWN ITS OK

MAAN:HOW CAN IT BE THAT ONE NIGHT SCATTERED ALL OUR DREAMS HOW CAN I BE OK

GEET:FOR ME FOR UR JAAN FOR OUR BABY U HAVE TO BE CALM NOW GOOD NIGHT SLEEP.

MAAN;GD NIGHT BYE

pt 3 - pg2

Edited by giaa5678 - 12 years ago

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Zariya

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Posted: 12 years ago

me 1st
geet n maan illegal relationship n not bother abt others
me faint any moment

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giaa5678

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Posted: 12 years ago

me crying😭

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angelic_cute

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice but yet incomplete

do continue soon

dev force geet to marry i think so and after dev betrayed geet maan saved her

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giaa5678

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Posted: 12 years ago

part 2

early morning sun rays hit d bed geet was in arms of her maan smiling while thinking something

maan:gd morning jaan (he said kissing her on her cheeks)

geet:gd morning

maan:why are u smiling, tell me what are u thinking of

geet:maan in these 2 years my life changed completely

flashback

geet:love u love u love u love u maan u r best

maan : i m after all i m maan singh khurana but what i wil get in return of what i did(he said eyeing her lips)

geet : maan u r shamless i will not talk 2 u

maan : ok fine...jaan i hav to tell u that today my whole is urs u can ask me for anything today

geet : (cutely)sachiii

maan: ha sachi now tell me what do you want

geet :ok 1st we will do shopping then we will watch movie then we will do lunch then

maan:ok we will do what u want but(with this he slammed his lips on her his hand was going to open d dori of kurti)

geet : maan leave me leave something for after marriage too

maan: sorry miss handa i will not repeat it but i can't wait now u r 18 now we can get married and according to your family girls get married at this age only haina

geet : what if they fix my marriage with some other guy

(maan was now angry & in MSK mode)

maan : then i will kill that guy brutually that anyone will not able to find has body also

geet : ok baba don't get angry i was teasing u only now give me my sweet maan back

flashback ends

geet : maan its 8 now u should be ready at 9 on breakfast table samjhe

maan: jaan let me sleep

geet:maannn wake up now or else

maan : ok baba i m not sleeping khush

geet:ok now let me go hav to prepare breakfast

maan:ok but jaan u r forgetting something

geet : what

maan:my morning kiss

geet:u shameless man i will not leave

maan:who said to leave me i m all urs

precap:family reacton

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Zariya

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice
maan geett were gf bf in past n stil share physical relationship while geet is married 2 dev

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giaa5678

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Posted: 12 years ago

PART-3

MAANEET came to d hall where all family members were wating for them

dadima(maan's):what is this don't u both have any shame u r coming in front of us like u did nothing.geet what kind of girl u r

papa(geet's):chi how can u do this geet..u have a illegal relationship with ur so called husband's elder brother

geet was behind maan she was hiding herself from her father's warth

papa:geet u have to abort this child its a dirt and if u will not

(maan was angry now)

maan:mr.handa its non of ur buisness its my child we will do whatever we want to do

papa:geet is my daughter and what relation u hold with her ha tell me u bas***d.

geet:stop it papa i always loved u respected u but what u did to me ha what do u think what kind of feeling i get when you all call my child dirt because of u only i m like this i have to be in this because i love maan i never loved dev and never will love him i told u ihave to marry maan but what u did u knowingly married me to dev i hate u go away from me

maan:calm down geet its not good for u

geet:maan hee is a curse on d name of father he sold me maan how can he maan

with this geet started to faint

maan:geettt r u okk

he took her to their room and called doctor

doc:mr. khurana she is very weak any stress will be not good for her

maan:ya i will make sure that she doesn't take any stress thank you doctor