LIFE updated TEASER/part 4 ON PG 3/4

giaa5678 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#1
MY FIRST OS SO SOORRY FOR MISTAKES
PART 1
MAAN:DON'T TAKE TOO MUCH STRESS ITS NOT GOOD FOR U U TRUST ME NA
GEET:HA MAAN BUT WHAT ABOUT HIM
MAAN:JAAN IM HERE NA I WILL HANDLE IT
GEET:MAAN WHAT IF HE WILL TRY TO DO IT AGAIN
MAAN:NOTHING WILL HAPPEN TRUST ME
GEET:OK BUT NOW I WANT TO STAY IN UR ARM I MISSED U SO MUCH.
MAAN:I ALSO MISSED U SO MUCH
(JUST THEN SOMEONE BARKED IN THEIR ROOM)
MAAN:DON'T U HAVE MAANERS TO KNOCK
DEV :DON'T TALK ABOUT MANNERS...I DIDN'T KNEW TO ROMANCE WITH UR YOUNGER BRO WIFE IS IN UR SO CALLED MANNERS
MAAN:JUST SHUT UP U bas***d
GEET : MAAN LEAVE DEV GET OUT FROM HERE NOW
DEV JUST SHUT UP U BITCH U R MY WIFE & UR WITH HIM
AT THIS HOURS OHH I FORGOT U R HIS MMM LET ME THINK YES U R HIS
MAAN:STAY IN UR LIMITS DEV U NEVER BOTHERED ABOUT HER THAN WHY NOW ...JUST LAEVE FROM HERE
DEV:UR TAKING HER SIDE BRO JUST THINK ONCE BRO SHE CAME HERE AS MY WIFE THROUGH OUR WEDDING & SHE IS NOW ACTING AS UR LOVER THATS IT
GEET :U bas***d HOW DARE U
DEV:GEET JUST THINK THAT WHAT U WILL TELL TO OUR FAMILY THAT U R CARRYING HIS MY ELDER BROTHER'S PART IN U
MAAN:DEV SINGH KHURANA JUST LEAVE
GEET:MAAN CALM DOWN ITS OK
MAAN:HOW CAN IT BE THAT ONE NIGHT SCATTERED ALL OUR DREAMS HOW CAN I BE OK
GEET:FOR ME FOR UR JAAN FOR OUR BABY U HAVE TO BE CALM NOW GOOD NIGHT SLEEP.
MAAN;GD NIGHT BYE
pt 3 - pg2
Edited by giaa5678 - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

18

Views

1.9k

Users

10

Likes

64

Frequent Posters

zariya123 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#2
me 1st
geet n maan illegal relationship n not bother abt others
me faint any moment
giaa5678 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#3
me crying😭
only 5 likes &2 comments
angelic_cute thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#4
nice but yet incomplete

do continue soon

dev force geet to marry i think so and after dev betrayed geet maan saved her


giaa5678 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#5
part 2
early morning sun rays hit d bed geet was in arms of her maan smiling while thinking something
maan:gd morning jaan (he said kissing her on her cheeks)
geet:gd morning
maan:why are u smiling, tell me what are u thinking of
geet:maan in these 2 years my life changed completely
flashback
geet:love u love u love u love u maan u r best
maan : i m after all i m maan singh khurana but what i wil get in return of what i did(he said eyeing her lips)
geet : maan u r shamless i will not talk 2 u
maan : ok fine...jaan i hav to tell u that today my whole is urs u can ask me for anything today
geet : (cutely)sachiii
maan: ha sachi now tell me what do you want
geet :ok 1st we will do shopping then we will watch movie then we will do lunch then
maan:ok we will do what u want but(with this he slammed his lips on her his hand was going to open d dori of kurti)
geet : maan leave me leave something for after marriage too
maan: sorry miss handa i will not repeat it but i can't wait now u r 18 now we can get married and according to your family girls get married at this age only haina
geet : what if they fix my marriage with some other guy
(maan was now angry & in MSK mode)
maan : then i will kill that guy brutually that anyone will not able to find has body also
geet : ok baba don't get angry i was teasing u only now give me my sweet maan back
flashback ends
geet : maan its 8 now u should be ready at 9 on breakfast table samjhe
maan: jaan let me sleep
geet:maannn wake up now or else
maan : ok baba i m not sleeping khush
geet:ok now let me go hav to prepare breakfast
maan:ok but jaan u r forgetting something
geet : what
maan:my morning kiss
geet:u shameless man i will not leave
maan:who said to leave me i m all urs
precap:family reacton
Edited by giaa5678 - 12 years ago
zariya123 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
nice
maan geett were gf bf in past n stil share physical relationship while geet is married 2 dev
giaa5678 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#7
PART-3
MAANEET came to d hall where all family members were wating for them
dadima(maan's):what is this don't u both have any shame u r coming in front of us like u did nothing.geet what kind of girl u r
papa(geet's):chi how can u do this geet..u have a illegal relationship with ur so called husband's elder brother
geet was behind maan she was hiding herself from her father's warth
papa:geet u have to abort this child its a dirt and if u will not
(maan was angry now)
maan:mr.handa its non of ur buisness its my child we will do whatever we want to do
papa:geet is my daughter and what relation u hold with her ha tell me u bas***d.
geet:stop it papa i always loved u respected u but what u did to me ha what do u think what kind of feeling i get when you all call my child dirt because of u only i m like this i have to be in this because i love maan i never loved dev and never will love him i told u ihave to marry maan but what u did u knowingly married me to dev i hate u go away from me
maan:calm down geet its not good for u
geet:maan hee is a curse on d name of father he sold me maan how can he maan
with this geet started to faint
maan:geettt r u okk
he took her to their room and called doctor
doc:mr. khurana she is very weak any stress will be not good for her
maan:ya i will make sure that she doesn't take any stress thank you doctor
Donnaa thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#8
awesome update
geet's father knew abut maaneet then also he married her to dev😡
cont soon..
giaa5678 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#9
NOTE
PLZ DO TELL ME .I AM CONFUSED THAT I SHOULD DISCONTINUE IT OR CONTINUE IT
TELL ME IF U ALL WILL SUGGEST TO CONTINUE I WILL UPDATE IT TONIGHT
harshithaaaaaaa thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#10
geet and maan loved each other
geet's father know about their relation but forced her to marry dev
now geet is pregnant with maan's child so they r having relation even after geet's marriage
she can divorce dev why she is in still in relation with dev


Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: suhaaana · 1 years ago

INDEX PART 1 PAGE 1 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/165545356 Part 2 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/165663476 Part 3...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: suhaaana · 1 years ago

Index Part 1 page 1 Part 2 page 4

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme · 2 years ago

Overview Two people completely poles apart in career, status and style. One is the epitome of elegant, the other epitome of simplistic. One is...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: Dragon-Heart · 2 years ago

INTRODUCTION A new season of this fiction. It's not an FF it's an ss

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21 · 2 years ago

Hello everyone i know i already written many stories whi complete nhi ho paa rhi hai and i start one more actually, i written this for OS...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".