LIFE updated TEASER/part 4 ON PG 3/4 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshithaaa

geet and maan loved each other

geet's father know about their relation but forced her to marry dev
now geet is pregnant with maan's child so they r having relation even after geet's marriage
she can divorce dev why she is in still in relation with dev


U WILL GET UR ANSWER IN NEXT UPDATE
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
TEASER
MAAN:I CAN'T WAIT NOW WE HAVE TO DO IT
GEET:BUT MAAN U KNOW NA WE CAN'T AS PER THE CONTRACT
MAAN:BUT I CAN...TILL NOW I WAS QUITE BUT NOW I WILL SHOW WHO IS MAAN SINGH KHURANA
GEET: MAAN DON'T TAKE STEPS IN HURRY
MAAN:TRUST ME KAHTE HE NA EK THIR SE DO NISHANE AB YAHI SACH HOGA
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
awesome amazing parts
loved them
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
nice update ...watitng to know y geet married dev when she loves maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Nice start dear :)

you should defo continue this story and give some time to readers to get attached with it .. Keep it up :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
part 4
maan:jaan ur ok na
geet:ha baba i m ok now u go u have to attend a urgent meeting
maan:but jaan how can i
geet:(kisses on his cheek)no buts & ifs u have to go bye
maan:(kisses on her forehead had leaves)
after maan left geet was again drown in her past 2 years of her life
flashback
geet:maan leave me their are 20 missed calls of dad i have to go
maan:(getting angry)u know what geet u have to always go away from me.whenever i m with either their will be lots of missed calls from ur father or it will be not rigth for u to stay with u luv me or not u trust me or not. do one thing go to ur dad tell him u luv u wants marry me or choose a perfect man for u whenever i will not attend ur calls and will be busy u will become angry but what about me whenever we are together either u have to go home or u will be keep saying don't touch me here & here or its not right for us to stay together this late at night don't u trust me i m also not forcing accept few hugs and kisses ther is nothing between us but u have problem with it tell me damit what's ur problem
geet(who was in tears instantly hugs him):maan i m sorry i also wants to marry u plz don't get angry with me i will not able to live
maan(calm downs):sorry i should not have reacted like not come i will drop u geet calm down sorry now stop crying jaan shh
(they reach geet's home and maan leaves)
geet:hi papa whats up
papa:where were u this late at night i have told u u have to be home at 8 and its 8:15 ur 15 minutes late anyway nextweek is ur wedding i have called u to tell that i have fixed ur wedding which is nxt week
geet:but papa i luv someone else i luv maan papa plz papa cancel it
papa:its my final decision and i m not going to change it u have to marry dev singh khurana
geet:but papa wait a min i will call maan
papa:no u will not
(with that he snatches her phn and locked her in a storeroom)
u will be out only on ur wedding day right dev
dev(who was hiding till now):ofcourse don't worry i will take care of that bro doesn't come to know about it sweetheart FIL will u give us 5 mins
papa:ofcourse(he leaves)
dev shamlessly watches her with lust filled eyes and touches her face thn he slowly brings his hand down
geet:stop it u dirt don"t touch me(pushes him away)i will tell maan
dev:u don't hav ur phn & on top of it bro isn't here till next so when he will enter in mansion that time it will be our wedding night sweety and i am leaving u now but i will not leave u on...
take care
on wedding night
dev :u will be mine tonight
they were in hotel
geet:stay away from me
dev try to forcefully kiss her on lips
stay awayyy from her dev singh khurana
geet:maan(instantly goes and hugs maan)maan he is bad he is...
dev:u r late bro we r married
maan:that doesn't matters to me she was mine she is mine &she will be mine
dev:what will u do it will take too much time for divorce and all & on top of that she can't divorce me till 1 year
maan:that doesn't matter to me from now on she will live with me..
a loud voice break geet's trnce
girl:geet where r u lost yaar
geet:meera tum kab aayi
meere:aabi when u were lost in lala land
geet:meera i have only u&maan &our baby my life is so complicated
meera:don't worry maan is there na & iam also there now stop ur sady sady session
precap:teaser
sorry for the mistakes
i m only showing some glimpse of past there is lot more in past
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
nice update
grrr dev he also knew abt maan n geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
nice update
geet's dad forced her to marry dev
dev is a dog
Thank god maan came in time
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
congozz on writing first OS dear

nice story

waiting for more ...

ps : can you add index in your first page ...

thnx for pm dearie

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