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Hiii friends...

I'm Padam, though I have been a silent reader on IF since more than two years, but some of you might be knowing me.
This is my first ever writing experience. I don't have any idea about writing. I just loved this song, which was part of another old show. This song is really special, because its lyrics includes the names of our very dear Maan and Geet, so this single writing piece from my side dedicated to this song.

A big big thankyou to my dearest friend Roopali for making this beautiful VM on this song. Please do have a look at it.😊


So here's the OS

MAANAATAN


As sunrays peeped into the room through those beautiful see-through floral golden curtains and brightened the room, Geet fluttered her eyes welcoming another beautiful day in her life. Sending a quick prayer to her Babaji thanking him for all his blessing and praying for them to be showered forever, Geet quickly got up for freshening up, but not before giving a quick glance to her Greek-God like husband. MSK, The Maan Singh Khurana, a ruthless business tycoon for the world, but for her, her ever-so-loving and caring Maan. Five years of marriage and still one look at him made her feel a tingle in her stomach. Remembering the passionate night passed between them, Geet resisted the temptation to go back to bed and snuggle with her husband and rushed towards to the washroom.

Coming out from the bath, she saw Maan awake resting his head on his hand with his elbow folded and staring at her.

"Good Morning Jaan" before another word could escape her mouth she saw Maan rushing towards her and engulfing her into a bear hug from her back, "Good Morning Mishti and a very Happy Anniversary. Love you so much Jaan, thanks for coming in my life"

"Happy Anniversary Honey and I love you too" said Geet turning around and hugging him and resting her face on the best place in the world, close to his heart, feeling his heartbeats.

Jaan formal theoretical wishes are done, now show me some practical work. Come give me my morning kiss, today with an extra bonus for this special day

Smiling at his antics Geet quickly pecked his lips and pushed him towards the shower, "No lafangapanti early in the morning Maan. Quickly get ready. We have to go to gurdwara first, before you leave for the office."

Office, which office, I'm not going anywhere today. This day is officially only for you and me and our lafangapanti. No interruptions at all. Already dadima have ruined half of the day by keeping that party in the evening and now you are talking of spending the other half in the office. No way Mishti, not fair.

Maan, don't you dare say a word against my Dadima's plans. I love her party plan and you don't have any other option then loving it too, otherwise breakfast alone for a week, without me and dadima accompanying you. And with regard to the office, I know it's a very important meeting, so no excuses. Lafangapanti postponed till Sunday. Now rush before I turn into my sherni mode and start your punishment from today itself.

Oh ho Mishti you are seriously turning scary and people call me bossy. Ok ok now don't give me that fake glare, I'm going. And yes don't forget lafangapanti won't be postponed till Sunday, only till the night comes.

Mere dil deya mehermaan, daasa tenu ki mai haniya

Tere naal zindagi vich rangtaan,

Tere naal khushiyan di sangataan,

Meri har duawaan, maanataan

Maanataan, maanataan'.

LATER THAT EVENING

Dressed as per her husband's desire, adjusting her red and golden saree, as Geet descended the flower adorned stairs, she felt her heartbeats increasing manifold with a single glance at her husband. Clad in that black tuxedo he surely was an envy for every guest present, but for her he was her pride, her life, her every dream fulfilled.

Mishti you look so ravishing, how am I going to survive this evening. Can't wait to take it all off you.

Geet blushed to the brightest crimson possible and hushed him as she saw guests approaching them. Leaving him attending some of his business associates, she left to greet and meet Dadima and her friends. Thanking them all for their wishes, blessing and presence in their happiness, Geet beamed with joy looking at her loved ones standing with them enjoying the evening celebrating their bond of togetherness.

May I have the pleasure of having a dance with the world's prettiest lady?

Geet standing among Dadima and her fellow charity trust ladies, turned red listening to her husband flirting with her openly in front of so many elder ladies. Excusing herself immediately she started her favourite job "Babaji, did you see what he just do, he is here once again, can't leave me alone for a minute. Pinky and other office staff and my friends were not enough to tease me, now Dadima's friends will also tease me. Babaji you only make him understand, I'm your favourite child and you still send me such embarrassing moments, Why Babaji." Geet was still complaining to her babaji when the husky voive of the culprit being complained of, brought her out of her silent conversation.

"Mishty, you make Babaji work overtime, give him a rest for sometime. You come and dance with me" said Maan with his lopsided smile as he dragged her to the dim-lit dance area.

Mera har khwab tu, GEET tu, saaz tu

Dhadkanon kit u leh, taal tu..

Mera imaan tu, meri jind jaan tu,

Meri pehchaan tu, MAAN tu..

Meri har duawaan manaataan

Manaataan, manaataan

As they swayed to the song describing the emotions of their hearts, the viewers were spellbound with the aura of love and happiness that surrounded this ideal couple which embodied and glorified the feeling called love.



Please give your views and feedback, negative views also applicable. If you are silent readers like me, and like my work, then a like will also do..


PS: A big thanks to my dear friend Mina (Mina420) for always motivating me to write...Love you sweetheart...😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow gr8...please do pm me...:)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome dear...
Keep it up...
Loved song...so maaneet
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Posted: 12 years ago
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⭐️ Ahh, Padam you made it! ⭐️
See, I told you just start writing and the rest will sort itself out 😉.
First of all, congratulations on your first OS 🤗 and may I hope for many more sweet and interesting ones to follow.
Now to your OS: sweet and loving 👏. We wouldn't want our Maan and Geet any different. Considering this is your first OS ... it is a really beautiful one.

Don't stop, do write more in your own time...
And maybe one day, you will also start writing mystery novels 😆 and then it is my turn to stalk you for daily updates...

All the best.
Love
Mina


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thnk you so much dear...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: miss_dreamy

wow gr8...please do pm me...:)



Thnx a lot dear..😊
But this is a single one shot, I dont write, this one just an attempt by chance. But if in any case I write anything in future, I'll surely PM you... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Priti11-

awesooome...
loved it...



Thnx a lot swty...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mish123

Awesome dear...
Keep it up...
Loved song...so maaneet



Thnku so much dear...😊
Nd yes the song is perfectly Maaneet, it was the only reason that I wrote this one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thankyou so much dear, its feel gr8 to see a compliment from an experienced writer like you...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thnx a lot dear...😊

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