AnSh OS - Study,Coffee and Romance!

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Manshi

@Mithi_vani

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

wow...wow...wow... Its realy sweet nd romantic, I loved it, sply i liked the part when Shiv explaing nd Anandi in la..la..la land, most imp line Shiv: iss bar dhyan notebook me 😆 😉 , I wish aisa kuch bv me bhi ho, Btw Thnk u so much 4 this wonderful os..

Edited by Manshi - 13 years ago

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Myraa Khan

@QuagMyred

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

I am dreaming again!!!

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

How could anyone concentrate when someone like Shiv is teaching... loved it alot

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roberoi

@roberoi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

My hubby just made coffee for me and he is the best in making it...(we hv a coffee machine ;-))

roz milti hai lekin aaj jo maza aa raha hai...kya bataaon Malika...Loving it and falling in love with hubby's coffee all over again 😳

Yeh J ko kyon ghusaya 😉 bahut jal chuka abhi suna hai phir aane wala hai so shooo him apne OS mein to paas bhi mat phatakne do pleaseee

I am sure aaj ka api bhi aisa hi delicious hoga😉 Amen!

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Khusi

@khusi_*

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Jhalak of future...patni seva...😉

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Hey malika this was so so so so so beautiful dear...simply superbbb...

The feelngs that both ANSH have for each other wowww...The language which u used ( I am not talking of HINDI but the words) to express the feeling very awesome...it was so serene and i felt poetic...

I could imagine two couples enacting this OS...Ek hamara ANSH aur dooosraaa my everygreeen favorite couple SRK and Kajol...bit weird naaa, but seriously the lines said by Shiv just imagine in SRKs style yaaar...I felt it dreammmy actualllyyy...

Last line...the bouncer that ANandi gave to Jagyaaa...👏👏👏👏

superb work...keep continuing this awesome work dear,,

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dixie123

@dixie123

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Malika: This was so wonderful ! One of your best I think.

Loved the way you have written about each other's feelings. But, the best part of this whole OS was Jagya spilling tea on his lap (I remebered your 'nail' wala Jagya 🤣) and files falling down from his hands and Anandi nihaaring her Shivji !!

This OS can surely be made into a scene. CVs are you reading ?