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swaron_tanha4

@swaron_tanha4

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

unres...
wow...luvd it...
awsum concpt nd beautiflly penned down..

Edited by ambuja4 - 12 years ago

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Anonymous--

@Anonymous--

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

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*Edited*

Amazing OS di😊 It was so so romantic! Just perfect😳

I loved the beginning with Swayam trying to wake up poor Sharon😆 And when she placed her head on his chest..Ahhh..That was super sweet

That hot chocolate bit made me wanna go have some Why did u describe it in such a delicious manner?😡

Aww... n my fav line was when Swayam stared at Sharon as she drank her hot chocolate..So Majnu-ish❤️

I loved the last bit as well.. Their first snow..The kiss..enchanting.

Thanks for the PM Ananya

Lovely OS di😊

Edited by Neeti96 - 12 years ago

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

EDITED.

Sudha,this was an awesome OS By your and your friend's side. you both did a splendid job. the theme was a charming husband and the devilish wife. SwaRon magic filled in the time reading this OS. Swayam's efforts were good while Sharon tried hard to resist them. i loved how you wrote the OS with the minuscule moments penned down effortlessly. it surely made a pleasure read which brought a smile to my face.

P.S:No thank you-sorry among frens. 😳

Edited by Ananya.SwaRon - 12 years ago

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Lovely one sudha and shika...

simple yet so beautiful...pleasant to read...

thanks for the pm ananya...

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

res awosm update sudha 👏👏👏

Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Hey Sudha...🤗

The OS was so sweet and adorable...it sent me to swaron dream land...u & ur friend Sikha have done a great job...as always...a sudha OS means a treat for readers...

Coming to the OS...the lovely start...where he was thinking about day when said to wake up every day next to sharon is his biggest wish...it made me nostalgic...

I remember telling Rey that if there was anything that I most certainly want from life, it was waking up next to Sharon for the rest of my life.

Loved his state mind depicting her as his angel and how she changed his life..

"Oh the luck of a guy like me" I thought, she was no less then an angel and her innocence inside her volcanic exterior which kept me on my toes. There was never a dull moment with her by my side if she was the angel she very well essayed being the Devil part to my life as well.
The Hot chocolate and 1st snow...perfect combination along with our swaron...awww...loved the kiss part...it was dreamy...& the OS was true to ur style of writing...simple yet perfect...

She ruffled my hair as I pulled her even closer and placed my lips on to hers this time claiming every part, and wished every day for the rest of my life to as be as beautiful as today with her by my side.

Thanx for such beautiful OS dear...hope u had a great thanx giving day...continue showering us with ur brilliant writing 😊

Love
Deepika

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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Karen Johnson "Maria"

@Karen_sharon

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Sudha...I'm a big fan of ur works and luv reading it...though I'm not dat regular in commenting but I just luv reading ur OSs...like all ur other works dis had to be Fab...and it was...luvd it dear! :)

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Aaawwwiiieee it was so cute Sudha seriously loved it...

Shikha seriously awesome work and Sudha thanks for posting on her behalf... would love to read more of her work...

and Sudha waiting for more from your side...

Love,

Manasie.

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Kanchan Agrawal

@KaNcHaN_06

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

unres

wao di it was awsome...👏👏👏

loved the way of writting...

thanx for the pm...😊😊

Edited by kanchan06 - 12 years ago

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paro1311

@paro1311

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

i think i've made it very clear everytime that i just love ur works😊 ur writing is very mature.. i dont know how much of this os is ur work nd how much shikha's but the final product was gr8. so keep up the good work both u guys..

ps: sudha i would like to read more of ur writings if u'd let me, even if it isnt on swaron!