RAAZ- last chapter on pg 31

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hey guys, i know u are expecting updates for this story but i was'nt satisfied with the way it was turning out. so i am going to start a new story with the same title. here is the prologue. hope u like it. please comment or hit the like button.

Prologue

Zindagi hai ek ajeeb sa khel,

Jisme bohut saare jazbaat,

Na jaane kitne raaz hai,

Na jaane kitne khatre honge,

Pata nahi dar kyu lag raha ye sochkar,

Ki hai kahi mera apna jiske paas hai jawab iss sawaal,

Mere zindagi ka kya raaz hai aur kyu hai mujhe iss raaz se rakha anjaan

After penning down her thoughts she closed the book and went near the window. Gazing out she could see the city bustling as usual. She thinks " mujhse kaha gaya ki yehi mera ghar hai to kyu me iss shehar ko anjaan samajthi hu. lekin pata chala ki jhooth hai. toh phir sach kya hai. iss raaz ko jaane ke liye mujhe unko khel me shammil hona hoga." she goes near the mirror and sees herself " mujhe unhe unke hi khel me haraana hoga. Me abhi kamzor nahi pad sakti. Mujhe unki tarah hi sochna hoga aur karna padega. Shayad iss khel me mujhe apne manzil tak pahunchne ka raasta mile."she then starts dressing up,putting on lipstick,short dress and heels. After getting dressed up she looked at herself in the mirror and said " laila khan ab me tumhe me dikhaungi ki yeh Sonia kis mithi se bani hai aur kaise bani hai."

i know ki bina koi warning dekhe change ki lekin if u like it then please comment or hit the like button.

index
storyline and pics- pg 8
chapter 1- pg9
chapter2- pg10
chapter 3- pg 11
pics and chapter 4- pg 12
chapter 5-pg 14
chapter 6a, 6b, 6c- pg 15
chapter 7a- pg 16
chapter 7b- pg 17
chapter 8a and 8b- pg 17
chapter 9- pg 18
teaser- pg 19
chapter 10- pg 20
chapter 11- pg 20
chapter 12-pg 21
chapter 13a- pg 22
chapter 13b and note- pg 23
chapter 14- pg 24
chapter 15- pg 25
chapter 16- pg 25
chapter 17- pg 27
chapter 18-pg 28
chapter 19- pg 29
chapter 20- pg 30
last chapter-pg 31
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nicceee👏👏

u must continue!!😊😊😊
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arey wah..phr main 🤣
joking!!!
its nice..continue soon and pm me wen u update!!!
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Good concept. Continue it soon😊
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wow
continue dear
pls dont forget to pm
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welcome dear
and very interesting start
So Riya is alive but completely unwell?!
N what about the pendrive?
please continue😊
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wow!!! riya alive?? 🥳... please please update soon!!!
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eagerly waiting for the next part...indeed a very good concept...update soon!!!!😊
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Hey ...
Fantastic start ...
Plz continue ...
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wow just superb
plz do continue soon.
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plzzz

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