RadhaKrishn: Punarmilan Ki Gatha Sumedh x Chahat SS

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Shamli had always envisioned her Prince Charming possessing certain qualities, yet she never found a man who embodied them all. Then, she finally meets Gopal-the perfect match she had longed for-only to discover that he is 2.5 years younger than her. Ignoring societal norms, she falls deeply in love with him, and in time, he reciprocates her feelings. However, their love faces harsh opposition, with Shamli's father cursing that they will never unite in this lifetime. Even in their next birth, he prophesies, they will have to overcome the toughest trials to be together.

Years later, they are reborn as Madhav (symbolizing Krishna) and Radhika (symbolizing Radha), with different appearances but the same age gap-Madhav is once again 2.5 years younger. But will destiny be kinder this time? Will their love finally triumph against fate?

A Radha-Krishna tale reimagined in a modern setting, drawing inspiration from the Malayalam movie "Chanthupottu".

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The three-shot "The Unending Dream": The Unending Dream Three-Shot Sumedh x Chahat TS [Completed] was originally inspired from this story

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Guys I just happened to see the first promo created for the serial RadhaKrishn of which I'm giving the link here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jsGc34Wet3M

And I should say that video gave me a mesmerizing effect which gave me a inspiration to visualize Radhakrishn story in a different angle in a modernized manner. Moreover I liked the cast of that video more than the original series cast, so I'm using them to create this fancifc story of Radhakrishn

Character Sketch:

Chahat Pandey as Radhika Vatsal

A bubbly and chirpy girl and Madhav's best friend who has always been a pillar of support for him when he is being criticized by the society for his feminine graces

A bubbly and chirpy girl and Madhav's best friend who has always been a pillar of support for him when he is being criticized by the society for his feminine graces. Even though she is two and half years older than him, she drops out two classes on purpose to stay alongside Madhav. Her closeness towards Madhav irks her Dad. She is infact the re-birth of Shamli, but when she starts realising her TRUE LOVE for Madhav, a tragedy separtes them.

Sumedh Mudgalkar as Madhav Rane

Madhav is a son of a famous Kathak dancer and thus has INBUILT skills of KATHAK inside him

Madhav is a son of a famous Kathak dancer and thus has INBUILT skills of KATHAK inside him. From, the moment Madhav learnt to stand on his two feet, he watched his MOTHER dance and thus built the skill of "DANCING" inside him. But, the same skills also turns out be a CURSE on the other side, when being a dancer he has certain FEMININE GRACES which leads him to mocked by the society. Madhav is infact the re-birth of Gopal who was separated from his eternal lover "Shamli". In the same way, Madhav too, gets separated from Radhika during his childhood due to a tragic incident.

Mallika Singh as Rukmini Tendulkar

A hip-hop dancer and Madhav's rival who later falls for him

A hip-hop dancer and Madhav's rival who later falls for him. She at first misunderstands ad undestimates Madhav's dancing talents. But later realising his extraordinary skills and his friendly nature, she falls for him and joins him to perform fusion dances together.

Madirakshi Mundle as Shamli Divekar

A bold woman who believes that EVERY WOMAN SHOULD HAVE THEIR CHOOSE THEIR PRINCE CHARMING

A bold woman who believes that EVERY WOMAN SHOULD HAVE THEIR CHOOSE THEIR PRINCE CHARMING. But, unfortunately her choice leads her in getting cursed by her father that she can never unite with her LOVER in this birth and in the next BIRTH, she will have to UNDERGO A GREAT TESTIMONY if she has to unite as him. Thus, she is re-born as Radhika.

Siddharth Arora as Gopal Gaitonde

A simple and fun loving personality who falls for his senior Shamli in college, even after knowing she is two and half years older than him

A simple and fun loving personality who falls for his senior Shamli in college, even after knowing she is two and half years older than him. However, Gopal and Shamli are unable to FULFILL THEIR WISH TO UNITE IN THEIR LOVE TOGETHER due to a CURSE befallen on them by Shamli's father. Later, he is re-born as Madhav

Meghan Jadhav as Ayaan Deshmukh

Madhav's cousin who has been having a CRUSH on Radhika since childhood

Madhav's cousin who has been having a CRUSH on Radhika since childhood. However, Radhika unaware of his feelings always considers him a GOOD FRIEND and never reciprocated his love.

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Author's Note:
Hey everyone! I know some of you might find it surprising that I've chosen Chahat Pandey instead of Mallika Singh to portray Radhika in this story. But as I mentioned in the earlier character sketches, this entire fan fiction was first imagined after I saw the promo of Radhakrishn featuring Chahat as Radha. That moment sparked the entire storyline in my mind.
Also, just a reminder—this is not a retelling of the Radhakrishn saga. Rather, it's an inspirational love story, deeply influenced by the essence of Radhakrishn and the Malayalam film Chandupottu.
I hope all of you who read this FF truly enjoy the journey I've crafted.

Chapter 1

1995, Purushwadi Village, Maharashtra

At seven in the morning, the first light of dawn gently brushes over Shamli's face as she slowly stirs from sleep. The soft chirping of birds greets her ears as she sits up in bed. Pulling away the covers, she walks toward the small balcony attached to her modest room and lets her eyes settle on the rising sun. A quiet yet resolute voice escapes her lips:

"I know I was born in a village where men dominate women... but doesn't every woman deserve the right to choose her life partner?"

Twenty-five-year-old Shamli stands still, her mind now clouded with thoughts of the many marriage proposals her parents have brought up—dreams they nurture, expectations they silently enforce. Her heart tightens as she recalls her father Vrishpal's words, "My daughter is my pride... but if she ever goes against my wishes, I will never be able to forgive her."

Shamli closes her eyes. She draws in a deep, steadying breath and softly murmurs to herself:

"Yes, Papa... I am your pride, and I could never disobey you. But how do I silence my own voice, my own soul? Deep down, I believe every woman has the right to choose the one she wants to spend her life with..."

2015, Dehna Village, Maharashtra

Fifteen-year-old Radhika jerks awake to the shrill buzz of her alarm clock. She reaches out groggily to silence it, eager to return to the warmth of her blanket. But as she closes her eyes again, a voice echoes in her mind—louder than the alarm, more persistent than her dreams:

"Every woman has the right to choose her life partner."

Her brows furrow, her breathing quickens. There's tension in her face—confusion mixed with something she cannot name. Sitting up abruptly, she stares at the ceiling for a moment, then moves toward the mirror.

Staring into her reflection, she whispers, half in wonder, half in disbelief:

"Who was that woman? Why did I feel such a strange connection with her? And why are her words haunting me... even in my dreams?"

She places a hand gently on the mirror, lost in the unfamiliar familiarity.

"So strange..."

1995, Shamli's House – Purushwadi Village

Dressed in a simple yet elegant salwar kameez, Shamli descends the wooden staircase with a soft smile gracing her face. Her bangles chime faintly as she greets her parents in the living room. Her mother, Kriti, pauses from arranging puja offerings and looks up—her eyes widening in admiration.

"Nazar na lage!" Kriti exclaims, dramatically reaching for a pinch of black kajal. "Let me ward off all evil eyes! My daughter looks absolutely stunning today!"

Shamli blushes, tucking a strand of hair behind her ear.
"Oh Ma," she chuckles, "Every mother thinks her daughter is the most beautiful girl in the world. You're no exception!"

She's about to step away when Kriti gently holds her hand, stopping her.

"You know what your name means, right, Shamli?" she asks, a quiet intensity in her voice.

Shamli lets out a familiar laugh, responding playfully, "Ma, since the moment I was born, you've been telling me again and again—'Your name means Radha, Radha, Radha!'"

She pauses, then adds with a mischievous glint in her eyes, "And now you're worried about my Krishna, aren't you?"

But the sparkle in her mother's eyes fades, replaced by a somber shadow.

"Radha never united with Krishna, Shamli," Kriti says softly.

Shamli's smile slowly disappears. The weight of those words sinks in. Kriti continues:

"They were eternal lovers—meant for each other, yes—but destined never to be together in this lifetime."

A strange ache flickers across Shamli's face, as if something within her has been stirred. Kriti notices her daughter's quiet distress and cups her face with a tender smile.

"That is why, my dear, I don't wish for a Krishna in your life. I want a prince who will not only love you deeply but will belong to you—someone who will be yours, and with you, in every season of life."

She places a loving kiss on Shamli's forehead before walking toward the kitchen, her voice trailing warmly:
"Now come have your breakfast before it's cold!"

Left alone, Shamli remains still for a moment, lost in thought. Her eyes reflect a mixture of confusion and quiet resolve.

"Strange, Ma... you don't want a Krishna in my life," she whispers to herself. "But I do. I want to find my Krishna—one who will not only be my eternal love, but also mine to keep. And I promise you... I will find him. Soon."

2015, Radhika's House – Dehna Village

Radhika rushes downstairs, her braided hair bouncing against her back as she lands in the kitchen with a burst of energy. Dressed in her school uniform, she throws her arms around her mother from behind in a tight, spontaneous hug.

Kirtida, flipping hot gobi parathas on the tawa, lets out a surprised giggle.

"So my little doll is ready for school already? Come, sit at the table—I'll serve the parathas hot off the stove!"

The savory aroma fills the kitchen, and Radhika inhales it deeply, smiling in delight.
"Wah Ma, gobi ke parathe? Can you please pack two extra today in my tiffin?"

Kirtida glances back at her, slightly amused.
"Two extra? You barely manage to finish one most days. What's going on?"

Before Radhika can answer, a stern voice cuts through the warmth of the moment like a cold gust of wind.

"Because she wants to feed that transgender friend of hers!"

Radhika and Kirtida both freeze in place, slowly turning toward the source of the voice. Standing at the kitchen doorway is Banuprakash, Radhika's father, his brows drawn tight, his expression lined with disapproval.

His tone is sharp, laced with judgement, and his eyes fix accusingly on his daughter.

Radhika clutches her skirt tightly, her earlier cheer slipping away like morning mist under harsh sunlight. Kirtida turns, visibly taken aback, trying to read her husband's face, unsure of what might come next.

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To be continued.

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Chapter 2

Dehna Village, 2015 – Radhika's House

Radhika froze, her breath catching in her throat as she turned to face her father. Bhanuprakash stood near the doorway, his expression twisted in fury, his voice still echoing with the cruel word he had just used—"transgender." Her heart pounded as her eyes met his, filled with a mixture of fear and disbelief.

Madhav. Her Madhav.

Her best friend since childhood—two and a half years younger, yet her classmate, because she had deliberately repeated two grades just to remain by his side. To the world, it was foolishness. To her, it was loyalty.

Bhanuprakash had never hidden his disdain for Madhav. He looked down upon the boy not only because of his modest background, but because Madhav walked with grace, spoke with softness, and danced with the elegance he inherited from his mother—traits that didn't sit well in the rigid boxes Bhanuprakash believed boys should fit into.

Madhav's mother, Devika Rane, a widow and a proud Kathak dancer, had been abandoned by her family for marrying a man of her own choice. Since her husband's untimely death—before Madhav was even born—Devika had raised her son single-handedly, pouring into him not just love but art. Her modest dance school, run from a corner of the village, was where it had all begun.

Radhika was three when Bhanuprakash first brought her to Devika's dance class. Madhav had been a baby then, gurgling in a cradle. From those early days bloomed a bond unbreakable by time, status, or social judgement.

But to Bhanuprakash, Madhav was a threat. Not because of what he did—but because of who he dared to be.

Now, as Bhanuprakash took slow, deliberate steps toward her, his rage simmered just beneath the surface. Radhika's fingers clenched tightly into the folds of her school skirt, her knuckles whitening with each step he took.

"Are those extra parathas for that..." Bhanuprakash began, his tone laced with disdain.

Before he could finish, Radhika's voice rang out—loud, sharp, and unwavering.

"Madhav!" she said, her eyes locked on his.

He flinched slightly, surprised by her interruption.

"His name is Madhav, Pa. And don't you dare insult him by reducing him to a label you don't even understand!"

A stunned silence filled the room for a brief moment. Then Bhanuprakash's voice roared, "I'm insulting him? The entire village calls him that! And you—you're fighting me, your father—for that boy?"

Radhika stood her ground, her voice steady, even as emotion flickered in her eyes.

"Yes, I am. Madhav is my best friend, Pa. He is as dear to me as you and Ma are. And I will not stand silently while anyone—even my own father—disrespects him."

Her voice trembled slightly at the edges, not from fear—but from the power of her conviction.

"He may be different, but he's brave, kind, and talented. And if people mock him for the way he walks or talks, then I'll stand by him. I'll fight them all—for him. Always."

She grabbed her school bag, slung it over her shoulder, and without another word, turned and walked out of the house.

Bhanuprakash stood frozen, taken aback by her defiance, while Kirtida watched silently, her eyes reflecting a mother's worry—and perhaps a quiet pride.

Outside, Radhika walked into the sunlight, her steps quick and sure, her heart pounding—but her spine unyielding.

1995 – Shamli's College, Nashik

Shamli arrived at college, her presence as radiant as the morning sun. Her friends greeted her warmly, one of them slipping a glossy wedding card into her hand. "Here, Shamli," she said with a grin. "Don't forget to come to my wedding! And hey—your parents have been looking for your Prince Charming for ages, haven't they? When will we be holding your wedding invitation, hmm? Or are you still waiting for that perfect man who ticks every box?"

Shamli laughed awkwardly, brushing a lock of hair behind her ear. Before she could answer, a gentle but haunting melody floated through the air.

A flute.

The sound was delicate, enchanting—almost divine.

"Wow," Shamli whispered, instinctively drawn to the melody. "Who's playing that beautiful tune?"

"It must be someone from the inter-college music fest," one of her friends said. "It's on all week—probably a participant rehearsing."

"Let's go check it out!" Shamli urged, curiosity dancing in her eyes.

They followed the music toward the open stage, where a crowd had already gathered. Cheers erupted: "Gopal! Gopal! Gopal!" The name echoed across the courtyard.

Shamli's heart skipped a beat.

Gopal? she thought. Isn't that another name for Krishna? Her mother's words from that morning flashed in her mind.

She shook her head quickly, dismissing the thought. Stop it, Shamli. You don't even know this person. Don't get carried away.

Still, something about the name and the music tugged at her.

Through the shifting crowd, she tried to catch a glimpse of the musician's face, but all she could see were fleeting moments—his hands, the flute, and then, suddenly—his eyes.

Those eyes.

Dark, deep, and inexplicably magnetic.

Just as quickly as she saw them, he turned toward the judges. The music stopped. Murmurs and applause followed.

After a brief discussion, one of the judges stood up and declared, "Congratulations, Gopal! You're through to the finals."

The crowd burst into cheers.

Shamli smiled unconsciously, feeling an unfamiliar warmth in her chest. As the crowd dispersed, Gopal stepped off the stage and was surrounded by his friends. Shamli watched him, disappointed she still hadn't seen his full face.

"I'll be back in a minute," she told her friends and began walking in the direction Gopal had gone, her feet moving as if of their own accord.

She trailed him through the corridor, careful to keep her distance. But suddenly, Gopal slowed down, sensing he was being followed. He turned sharply.

Shamli ducked behind a pillar, heart racing. Gopal looked around, puzzled, but when he found no one, he resumed walking.

Just as Shamli exhaled in relief and decided to turn back, a harsh voice echoed through the corridor.

"Well, well... if it isn't the slum hero himself."

Shamli turned in shock. A group of hostile boys had surrounded Gopal. One of them sneered, "You think you'll win this fest and outshine us all? Let's see how far you'll get!"

Without warning, he punched Gopal across the face.

The blow echoed through the hallway.

Gopal staggered, but retaliated instinctively, sparking a full-fledged brawl. Shamli's eyes widened in horror as she looked around for help, but the corridor was deserted. Then her gaze landed on something—a flute, Gopal's flute—falling from his pocket and rolling to the floor.

Before he could retrieve it, one of the bullies picked it up and, with a wicked grin, snapped it in two.

A gasp escaped Shamli's lips. Gopal fell to his knees, stunned, his eyes fixed on the broken instrument. All the fight seemed to drain from him in an instant.

The group closed in to strike again.

Whack!

A stick came down hard on one of the attackers. Then another. And another.

It was Shamli.

Her eyes blazing, she swung the stick with unrelenting force. "Don't you dare touch him again, you cowards!" she shouted.

The stunned group, unable to stand up to her rage, scattered and fled.

Breathing heavily, Shamli turned toward Gopal, still on his knees, broken flute in hand, his back facing her.

She gently touched his shoulder. "Gopal," she said softly, "let's get out of here."

But he didn't move.

"Gopal!" she repeated, this time more firmly, pulling him up by the arm.

As he rose, he turned toward her—and their eyes met.

Time stilled.

In that moment, they both forgot the broken flute, the bruises, the pain. There was only that gaze—deep, searching, timeless.

Radhe Radhe... Radhe Radhe...
The Radhakrishn theme played faintly in the background of their hearts.

2015 – Dehna Village, School Grounds

Madhav sprinted toward the school gate, breathless. "Dada, please don't close it!" he cried.

The security guard, recognizing him, smiled and held the gate open. "Go in, beta."

Madhav thanked him and stepped inside, only to be tripped by a boy his age. He tumbled forward and hit the ground with a thud. Laughter erupted.

"Well, well... look who's late—Hijra!" the boy mocked cruelly.

But before he could utter another insult—

Smack!

The boy fell to the ground, clutching his cheek.

Silence descended.

Radhika stepped forward, her arm still raised from the punch, standing tall between Madhav and the bully. Her eyes were fierce, defiant.

Everyone stared in shock.

Radhe Radhe... Radhe Radhe...
The melody of Radhakrishn echoed again, this time louder, stronger—like a divine rhythm that never faded.

And then, a voice rang out—Krishna's voice, from a distant, divine realm:

"Roop badla, log badle... na badla toh hai prem.
Prem ke bin jeevan hai aadha.
Dharti par aaye—Krishna aur Radha."

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To be continued.

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Chapter 3

2015 – School Courtyard, Dehna Village

Radhika's eyes blazed as she stepped in front of Madhav, shielding him from the group of bullies who had just shoved him to the ground.

"Back off!" she growled, her fists clenched.

The boys laughed, taunting Madhav again. But before they could finish their insult, Radhika landed a swift punch on the ringleader's jaw. Chaos broke out as she swung at them with fierce precision. The startled boys, completely outmatched by her fury, scrambled away one by one, nursing bruises to both body and ego.

Madhav, stunned, ran up to her once the dust settled. "Radhika!" he exclaimed, exasperated. "What the heck are you doing?! You don't need to fight my battles!"

Still catching her breath, she turned to him and shot back, "They were making fun of you, Madhav!"

"So what?" he snapped. "It happens every day—I'm used to it by now!"

Radhika moved closer and placed a firm finger on his lips, silencing him. "No, Madhav. As long as I'm here, no one gets to hurt you—not with words, not with actions. And if anyone tries, they'll have to face Radhika first. Just like Radha protected Lord Krishna."

Madhav blinked, visibly thrown off by her declaration. "Wait, what? Why are you dragging mythology and Bollywood dialogues into this now?"

She gave him a playful whack on the arm. "Those aren't Bollywood lines, idiot. It's mythology—truth passed down through generations. I've heard Ma narrate the story from the Brahma-vaivarta Purana. Radha was cursed by Sridama to be born as a human and be separated from Krishna for a hundred years."

Madhav tilted his head, curiosity piqued. "So... Radha and Krishna never reunited?"

Radhika's voice softened. "They were born as eternal lovers—born for each other, but never meant to be together in the worldly sense."

Madhav burst into laughter. "What kind of logic is that? 'Born for each other but never meant to be with each other'? That's the most tragic love story I've ever heard!"

Annoyed, Radhika glared at him. "You think it's funny? You have no idea how painful it is to love someone with all your heart... and still end up marrying someone else."

Madhav looked at her, eyebrows raised. "So... who did they marry then?"

"Well," Radhika replied, folding her arms, "Lord Krishna married 16,108 women. His principal queens were Rukmini, Satyabhama, Jambavati, Nagnajiti, Kalindi, Mitravinda, Bhadra, and Lakshmana. And the rest... he rescued from Narakasura. He married them to protect their dignity."

Madhav nearly doubled over laughing. "Sixteen thousand wives?! In our class, Shashwat can barely manage one girlfriend—Anjali! How did Krishna keep up with that many women?"

"Stop making fun!" Radhika snapped. "And don't forget—you're named after him, Madhav."

"And you," he shot back with a smirk, "are named after his lover, Radha. Right?"

As soon as he said it, Madhav realized the awkwardness of his own words. He quickly stuck his tongue out. "I mean... not my lover. I meant Krishna's lover!"

Radhika just shook her head.

"So," Madhav pressed on, eager to recover from the awkward moment, "who did Radha end up marrying?"

Radhika paused, her expression suddenly distant. "Ma says... after Krishna left for Mathura and fulfilled his duties, Radha was married off to Ayaan."

Just then, as if summoned by fate itself, Ayaan—Madhav's cousin—appeared, walking toward them. He was Radhika's age, but two years senior, as she had dropped classes to study with Madhav. Ayaan had harbored a quiet crush on Radhika for years, always lingering nearby, yet never brave enough to express his feelings.

"Hey!" he called out cheerily. "Did I just hear my name? Radhika, were you missing me?"

Radhika frowned in confusion, but Madhav, ever quick with a comeback, jumped in. "No, Ayaan. Radhika was just explaining the Radha-Krishna love story... and how, despite being eternal lovers, they never married each other."

Ayaan, intrigued, leaned in. "So... who did Radha marry?"

Before Radhika could speak, Madhav blurted, "To Ayaan!"

There was a beat of stunned silence.

Radhika's cheeks flushed crimson. Ayaan blushed too—though his was from a different kind of heat: the bashful glow of a long-nurtured crush.

Realizing the awkwardness of what he'd just said yet again, Madhav quickly tried to brush it off. "Oh, come on! That doesn't mean this Radhika and this Ayaan will marry in the future! Because this Radhika isn't the lover of this Madhav like Radha was to Krishna. We're not eternal lovers, right?"

His words hung in the air—half a joke, half a question neither of them could answer.

Radhika looked at him, unreadable.

Somewhere in the distance, the wind carried the faint strains of a flute.
Radhe Radhe... Radhe Radhe...

1995 – Shamli & Gopal's College Grounds, Evening

Gopal winced, trying to steady himself as he rose from the ground, blood still trickling from his split lip. Shamli, panting from the struggle, had just fended off the group of rowdy attackers with every ounce of strength she possessed. As Gopal stood upright, their eyes met for the first time—truly met.

In that moment, time seemed to slow.

Two souls, strangers by name but inexplicably connected, stood inches apart. Their eyes locked—a gaze so intense it felt as though they had known each other for lifetimes. A rush of unspoken emotions swirled between them.

Then, reality returned, awkward and sudden.

"You..." Gopal began, his tone laced with suspicion. "You were the one following me earlier, weren't you? Are you with those men? Part of their gang?"

Shamli recoiled, stunned. "What the hell are you saying?" she snapped. "I just fought them off to save you—and now you're accusing me of being one of them?"

Gopal stood his ground, still guarded. "Then tell me—why were you following me?"

Shamli looked away, flustered. Her cheeks flushed a soft pink as memories flooded back—memories of a haunting melody drifting through the corridor that drew her like a prayer in the wind. Gopal's flute. His music had stirred something within her. Without realizing it, her feet had followed the tune, just for a glimpse of the boy behind the magic.

Gopal pressed again, more forcefully this time. "Why, Shamli? Just say it."

Shamli exhaled slowly, then spoke with gentle honesty. "It's because... I loved your music. I heard you play, and it moved me. I wanted to congratulate you personally... especially since you made it to the finals of the Music Fest."

Gopal's shoulders slumped.

He looked away, eyes falling onto the ground—onto the shattered pieces of his beloved flute, now lying like fallen limbs of a dream. Silently, he knelt, picking up the two broken halves with trembling fingers. Tears welled in his eyes.

"Well," he muttered, voice heavy with defeat, "I won't be playing in the finals anymore. So, you don't have to waste your time appreciating a loser."

Before Shamli could respond, he turned away, brushing past her, hiding the moisture in his eyes. Shamli stood frozen, watching his retreating figure disappear into the shadows. Then slowly, she looked down.

The flute.

Delicately, she picked up the broken pieces, cradling them as if they were sacred. She placed them gently into her bag and walked away—eyes burning with silent resolve.

The Next Day – College Auditorium, Music Fest Finals

The auditorium buzzed with energy. Colorful banners fluttered, and the scent of jasmine and anticipation filled the air.

Gopal stood backstage with his group of friends, laughing half-heartedly as they cheered for the performers.

"Hey Gopal!" one of his friends clapped him on the back. "You were selected too, right? You'll be called on stage any moment now. Where's your flute, man?"

Gopal looked down, the cheer on his face fading. His heart sank as he remembered the broken flute, and the pain of yesterday returned like a wound reopening. He opened his mouth to explain—

When a familiar voice rang out from behind.

"Here is Gopal's flute."

Heads turned. Gopal spun around.

There stood Shamli, holding out a flute.

But not just any flute.

It was his—transformed.

The cracked wood was now whole, seamlessly mended and polished. Delicate beads shimmered along its length, tiny stones glistened like morning dew, and soft ribbons in vibrant hues danced with the breeze. A magnificent peacock feather crowned its end, swaying gently—as though Lord Krishna himself had blessed it.

Gopal was speechless.

He stared at her. Then at the flute. Then back at her.

The room seemed to fade away as the soulful tune of "Radhe Radhe Radhe... Krishn Krishn Krishn..." echoed in his heart.

She stepped closer and whispered, "Your music isn't just sound, Gopal. It's soul. The world deserves to hear it."

Gopal took the flute into his hands, reverently, as though holding a sacred gift.

Their fingers brushed for a second too long.

And in that moment, Shamli didn't just return his flute—she returned his belief in himself.

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To be continued.

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