FF:Anjaana Anjaani!! Chap5:pg.24 uptd 22/12/2012

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neelima

@purecure

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: sweetdoc
Intresting nd diff ff...
Isme rathore ka character ekdum alag...aur arjun. ekdum flirty..wow
Update soon

tnx fro ur amazing comemnt...yea both r damn different ...tnx fro liking dem in dis new avtar too..!!!
will update soon!!!

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah
Great start.
Thanks for the pm

tnx once agin...!!!

Originally posted by: rockz.diva
heyyy superb yaar i lovd itt arjun <3 <3 <3 awww lvd hiz charecter :P amazing :)
waitng for nxt part dear

tnx fro loving arjun even in his new avaatar...tnx for sweet comment...gonna update soon!!

Originally posted by: meghasingh
res..
till then this is for you..

waiting fro ur precious comment...

n tnx fro such an awesome avi on best scene till day...dis is my fav. scene of d show..!!! tnk yew!!!

Originally posted by: kunchu
great start.. continue soon...

tnx dear...will update soon!!

Originally posted by: littlebrat
perfect balance of characters...

waiting for next part

tnx dear for ur awesome obso. will update soon..!!

Originally posted by: shah10
Amazing

thank you dear!!

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neelima

@purecure

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: priya00147
Dekh neeli pehle se hi kya ready karke rakha tha mainepar tera dono updates padhne k baad woh aisa ho gya!!!
ab mahan poets k jaise tera nam bhi books niklega!!!usse pehle ye bhi le...tere liye rathore or ladki ka pehla milan
chotu ki chandni aa gya raat k party mei..aur chotu bhi chamakne lga
kavs ne sai kaha tha believe hi ni ho rha ki arjun itna flirty ho gya..!!!tum meri beauty queen ho
gulab sab serve karne wala bn gya!bhootni ka aatma ghus gya hai
shree aur chotu ko haste dekh shree ki coming bhabhi urf galaxy tab 2 ms chashmish ko gussa kyu aya..kan khade karke sab sun rai thi kya
Offce mei toh dono jyotish ban gya aur sahi bhi nikal gya..!!
aate hi mr and going to b mrs tab k bich jhagra!!
bechare ka ego hurt kar gya..
junior se sun liya toh..
rathore wali bhi aa gai etf women crime branch chief banke..
arjun toh fr shuru ho gya..riya k pas baithke
newspaper hai arjun puraaa!!!
case pe kaise shuru hote hai dekhte hai..!
thaaankuuu updatee jaaaldiii kaarnee k liyeee peeeliii
aur updates chahie
Nahii toh kya hoga ye tum samaj gaii hogi..samjhana toh pdega nai
Good job

lolxx...dat guns uff still makes me laugh like hell...tnk god mere update sne gussa thanda kar diya...!!! btw uss tooti hue gun ke upar brown wala kya hai hai choc. cake or gobar???

beauty queen...lolxx!!!!😆

yaar pri...tnk yew so much for such a small comment...!!!😛

i hope u make it more small next time...!!!😉

yea welcum fro such a fast n early update..!!!😉

similarly will update soon...n will surely pm evry1!!!

haan samajh gayi nahi kiya to kya hoga!!!

tnk yew once again!!!

Originally posted by: -sree13-
sun neeli pehle toh main ne socha teri sir phod du..kyun ki tune pm time se nehi bheja aur main late ho gayi fir tujhe isliye chod rahi hoon kyun ki yeh dhasu update ne mujhe rok li...teri sir phod du toh yeh update nehi milenge na..!!!
awesome,brilliant,mindblowing poetic touch in 1st chap how you describe the party & the entry of Shru I was also partying in exitement yayyy shru agayi

shree & shru 1st encounter...!!! ETF office toh WWE ka akhara lag raha hai.. yeh ETF har koi aurat ki kabiliyat pe shaq kyun karta hai??? Pehle Arjun aur ab Shree..!!!! Shru yaar ab shree ki band bajaane ka mauka aa gaya

chinki bhi aa gayi..great going ab ayega majaa Rathod ki bhi nikal padhegi ab toh

Last but not the least for the song..this is one of my all time favs..I have came to this update for the song atleast 20 times

Iss baar chod diya..agli baar pm nehi kiya na time se toh teri khaair nehi tu dekh liyo abhi compensate kar jaldi update karke,samjhi ya samjhayun??

exactly...sir phoda toh no update...!!! tnk yew tareeka diya tum logo ko rokne ke liye!!!

tnx fro liking each n evry thing poem as weel as prose...!!!

yea shree ko pitne ka tym aayega...lekin bohot jald ye pathar maum na ban jaye...!!!

haan choptu or rathod dono ki nikal padi...

dis song is my fav too...!!! tnkx for liking it...!!!

wil update soon...!!!

tnx for such a small comment looking further fro such more!!!

Originally posted by: prava55663
words seem too short to express my feeling...
loved the update..
prologue...brilliant..

CS..what will i say..superb..clap!!!

loved the chap 1 awesome entry of all...
chap2 shree was so cute..loved shru riya rathore and chinki...

loved all...loved your writing..plzz cont soon...

plzz pm me when you update...

Loved the song effect...i love the song..
huggiees

tnk you so much n so much...for liking each n evry part from pro to chap 2...!!!!

will surely update soon n pm when done...!!!

tnx fro liking d song...!!!

tnk ye wso much fro ur sweet comment...it really means alot...

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
No i just can't imagine...

Mein to sapane mein bhi arjun ko flirt type imgine nahi kar sakati...ek baar rathore ko flirt samjh sakati hoon kunki i want rathore as flirt...*smile*...par arjun...na na...

Ha riya ko rude imagine kar sakati hoon...shree ko as sir bhi imagine kar sakati hoon par arjun...na na...

tu sab imagine kar sakti hai ...i kno...tere ss ke guttery update sdekhe ...toh arjun ko to maine bas flirt dikhaya hai...!!!

nautanki...pata hai arjun ko no flirty se zyaada tu kya kehna chah rahii hai i kno...tujhe rathore flirty chahiye...!!! shaitan...!!!

teri umeed poori karne ki koshish karungi...ill try!!!

tnx for ur sweet funny comment...!!!

Originally posted by: sashashyam
MY dear purecure,
One thing you do NOT have to do for Anjaana Anjaani is apologise for any aspect of it. I have never come across anything quite like this, and I find it extremely novel, and not just the narrative but the introductory verses and now the music playing as one reads. You are truly an original!

Shyamala B.Cowsik

Dear shyamala aunty,

Thank you so much for your sweet comment. Your comment's each & every word work as an motivation for me which helps me in continuing the SS further. I hope I keep rocking as per everyones expectations.Thanks once again & yes, no apologies from now on.!!

Purecure

tnk god u catched it...if not then i wldnt hav got ur precious comment...!!!😉

im glad u liked it specially d poem n its rhyming sequence...!!!

tnk yew so much fro ur sweet comment...!!!

tnx fr liking d poem...!!!

n mujhs ekya islah logi...maien aapse aur shru se islah leke hi to likhna shuru kiya...aur aap humse...ye to aapka badappan hai!!!

tnx for liking poem as well as prose...n d couples too...!!!

will update soon...!!!

tnk yew yaar fro awesome comment!!!

tnx fro liking it...wil upadte soon!!!

& Arjun loves riya...hmmm...no...not really...not yet!!!

tnx fro liking specially flirty arjun!!!

tnx fro ur sweet lil comment!!
Edited by purecure - 12 years ago

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Sanchayita

@Love_Arnie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Unresed on page 12... A post fter chap 2... Plzz..chk.. Sorry for being late... I know its height of being late... Sorry!

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neelima

@purecure

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: SanchayitaM
Here is the flirty Arjun::

n the panic-stricken Rhea...

superb update...!!
I am so sorry for being late in un-resing my comment... Sorry sorry sorry... Holding ma ears...!!
Flirty Arjun... Omg!! I wished to witnessed one... Meoowww...!! 😉
n kharuss Rhea...!! Wow! Gr8 yaar... Nice thinking!!
N Shree n Shru's fight...!! That sir n madam wz juz awesome...
N teri bhabi ya behen...??🤣 was mind blowing...!!
I loved to read this one... Because it has some sort of your touch everywhere... There's something faboulas in your touch!! Love that neeli neeli thing... Prevailing everywhere..!!
Poem wz too good...!!
Now plzz plzz update the 3rd chap asap.. Cant wait!!
Take care n update sooon.. Meooww (4 the pm)!!
Love you sistah!!!!🤗

frist of ol...di spictures really indicated what i meant to say...n got dfat u really got d really expressions of it...!!

it's ok dear...no probz u late...bcoz ur comment brought a grt smile on my face...!!!

d best thing...is dat u really got or understod d neeli's touch...!!! sanchi sis yunhi thodi bualti hoon...!!!

tnx fro liking each n evry part of it...n my touch in it...!!!

will update soon...!!!

ur every comment...whetehr u comment early or late...will never loose it's value...n is great motivator for me...!!!

love u sistah!!!

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

😭 dont know how i missed your chapter 1 and 2

so sorry😭

but it was brilliant

it's almosy as if i'm in a drama, and the narration was perfect👏

first time seeing arjun flirting, does he really love Riya or he's just fooling around😳

N shree and his chachmish

N chotu and chandni

and Rathore also has got his partner

haye kitna sweet and cute hein

you write extremely well, it's a pleasure reading your updates

please update soon now😆

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neelima

@purecure

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: rinku321
plz update soon

goin to update soon...stay tuned!!

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neelima

@purecure

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: haruhi26
😭 dont know how i missed your chapter 1 and 2
so sorry😭

but it was brilliant

it's almosy as if i'm in a drama, and the narration was perfect👏

first time seeing arjun flirting, does he really love Riya or he's just fooling around😳

N shree and his chachmish

N chotu and chandni

and Rathore also has got his partner

haye kitna sweet and cute hein

you write extremely well, it's a pleasure reading your updates

please update soon now😆

hw u missed...as we misse du..while u wer not here!!! lolxxx...

u missed bt no probz...ur comment olds same value to me...!!!

does he really love Riya or he's just fooling around...hmm love...not really...not yet...fooling around...evn dats not true...whats his basic reason behind it mean is it love or jst flirt or reason fro his behaviour...u will come to know in next update!!!

tnx im glad u like it's every bits n tits...!!!!

will update soon...!! n tnx fro u rsweet comment...!!!

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: purecure
hw u missed...as we misse du..while u wer not here!!! lolxxx...

u missed bt no probz...ur comment olds same value to me...!!!

does he really love Riya or he's just fooling around...hmm love...not really...not yet...fooling around...evn dats not true...whats his basic reason behind it mean is it love or jst flirt or reason fro his behaviour...u will come to know in next update!!!

tnx im glad u like it's every bits n tits...!!!!

will update soon...!! n tnx fro u rsweet comment...!!!

okies

to tum update kab kar rahi ho😉