~DESTINY~ THREAD 2:Link Thd 3 Pg 1 - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing yet sad..
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awesome one...loved it...
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loved it...

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Part 18

Maan: where the hell were you Sameera. And you Arjun.. wats wrong with you guys. Do even realize wats with me.

Sameera: Maan.. wat should we say. Agar kuch samjh mein aata than I would have said ki where were we.

Maan: wat do you mean Sam..

Arjun: Maan, we were kidnapped.

Maan: kidnapped, are you kidding Arjun.

Sameera: No Maan, we are not and infact it's the truth. since last one month we were kidnapped and held captive.

Sameera broke down in Maan arms while Maan felt an awkward feeling seeing her hugging him. He did try to hold her but his hands were not ready to even bear her touch. he did not know why but his heart and mind were not ready for it anymore.

Sameera: Maan.. woh.. we were held, tied with ropes Maan.. we were kept at a haunted place. I could sense tat place was far away from here.

Maan slightly parted her and said.

Maan: but why.. why would someone kidnap you both.

Arjun: tats wat we are trying to find Maan. They did not even call Dad for once while nor did they ask any ransom money than why did they kidnap us aur upar se they had given us everything except kept both of us tied in different rooms with our mouth closed.

Sameera: You know.. for once I felt ki they will touch me but they did not. kuch nahi kiya unhone.. phir kyu..

Maan: Its ok.. I feel they misunderstood you both for someone else. now come down. Its fine.. you are back.

Sameera: Maan.. humari shaadi.. I mean if your family comes to know tat I was kidnapped and held for a month than.. will they accept me Maan.. will they let you to marry me.

Maan: Nahi…

Sameera: Wat..

Maan looked at Sameera and realized wat he said.

Maan: Aisa kuch nahi hain Sameera.. it was not your fault.. but right now don't think much about it. just relax.

Sameera: Par Maan.. our wedding..

Maan: Give me some time Sameera.. I need to settle everything back.. a few days and everything will be fine. But until and unless don't speak about our wedding if you trust me.

Sameera: I do Maan…

Maan: ok.. than why don't you both go and visit your Dad.. and by the time you return I will have a surprise for you.

Sameera: Surprise.. kya hain Maan.

Maan: Surprise hain Sameera..

Sameera hugged Maan while Maan tried his best to reciprocate her but he could not. he finally held her loosely while Sameera was on cloud nine thinking about the surprise. She knew tat Maan was totally under her spell but she did not knew tat destiny was the main culprit here.


Maan was brought back from his thoughts when the driver told him tat they had reached the KM. he looked at his two sleeping angels in his arms while a tear made its way. He did not dare to wipe it as he knew tat now its was their time or say last time to flow from his eyes.

Maan: I will not let you live in peace Sameera.. never.. bahut hua ab.. Three long years I died repenting for my mistakes but not anymore. Now no one can stop Maan Singh Khuranna.. Wait for me Sameera.. wait for Maan Singh Khuranna.. only Mishti's Maan..

Maan slowly kissed his angels and with his soft lips Mehar was wide awake. She smiled seeing her Dadda kissing her and in returned kissed him on his cheeks while her eyes reached for her Mumma.

Mehar: Dadda.. Mumma.. estill sleeping. Mumma.. bad.. late.. Mumma..

Maan: Naa. Mehar.. Mumma really tired na..

Mehar: Hmmm.. par Mehar.. Mumma play na..

Maan: Mehar.. You are her Mehar na.. so be good girl.

Mehar: Yippy.. Mehar.. Mumma's Mehar.. par.. Dadda's Mehar, where.

Maan: Dadda's Mehar is only her Mehar..

Maan Kissed her Mehar once again. He slowly opened the door letting Mehar out and carried an unconscious Geet in his arms. They walked towards the door of the KM unknown tat wat would be the reaction of his family members.

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Maan was shocked to see Dadima back after two years. he had tears in his eyes seeing her as she was the only one who truly understood his pain but he was not lucky to have her with him during his painful days. He still remembered her last words when she had left Delhi to go and stay away at Haridwar.

" Destiny.. did play Maan.. and I could not save you both.. but I know Destiny cant defeat the one who have to defeat it. Destiny did prove right but it can't prove wrong, the ones who will prove it wrong."

Dadima had a smile on her face while she ordered Shikha to do the aarti. The Khuranna's and Handa's did watch the scene with their mouth shut as Dadima had strictly ordered no one will say a word but how could they see her destroyer near her. The moment they were inside Vicky pulled Mehar making her cry.

Mehar: chodlo.. chodlo.. Chachu.. Dadda.. Dadda.. chachu.. bad..

Maan did try to stop him but Vicky was far angry to listen to him.

Vicky: Enough Mr. Khuranna.. not a word more. You did wat you wanted but not anymore.

Dadima: Leave her Vicky.. I said leave Mehar at once.

Vicky: Dadima..

Dadima; I said Leave her at once. No one from you has the right to stop Maan getting close to his daughter and wife.. I mean no one.

Yash: no one.. than I shall remind you Dadima tat he the one who is responsible for all this. Maan is the one who kept her mother away from her for years aur app keh rahi hain ki no one has right.

Dadima: Mr. Yash Handa.. don't forget tat they are still married and he has all rights on her.

Shikha: Haan.. with those same rights he played with her love and made her pregnant.. haina na Maa..

Dadima: Shikha…

Shikha: Kyu Maa.. M I not right. Did you forgot wat he said.. tat Mehar was a mistake.. Did you forget wat Geet said.. their baby was a mistake.. hain na.. Maan..

Maan kept quite without a word. He knew tat no one could believe his words but he knew tat somewhere Dadima still trust him though she hates him.

Rano: Kyu Maa.. why are you not saying anything now. answer to wat Shikha said.

Dadima: I never said you are wrong Shikha par jaha tak I can see.. I feel no one can see.

Rano: nahi Dekhna hain hume.. I cant trust this man anymore Maa.. not in this life nor in my next birth. I will never trust him.

Vicky: Bahut hua Dadima.. ab aur nahi.. He did have this court orders but now I will fight against him legally and will make sure tat he never comes near them again.

Yash: I cant let the murderer to stay close to her.. pata chala ki unhe phir se maarde aur ish baar humesha le liye.

Maan closed his eyes and opened them with a fire.

Maan: Bas.. Yash Handa… bas. Bahut sun juka aur dekh bhi juka hoon. But not anymore. Not anymore Vicky. You made me to sign the legal papers when I was not in my senses still I agreed. I agreed to stay away from my own wife and daughter when they needed me the most par nahi.. tat was not enough for you. you still tagged me as a murderer. Maantha hoon.. mar diya tha maine ushe.. par ish dil ne kabhi ushe pyar karna nahi choda tha. Tell me Mom.. wat should I do to prove tat I never hated her truly.. tell me Maa.. wat should I do to prove tat my anger did not let me think and when I did I had destroyed everything Maa.. I destroyed everything. Haan Vicky bolo.. how can I prove tat I love her and cant stay without her. should I kill myself Yash.. but sadly I cant. I cant Papaji.. I cant kill myself because the moment I die she will not survive.. and I cant let her Mehar to have this pain Mom.. I cant.. boliye jawab dijiye mujhe.. kya karu mein.

Vicky: There's nothing you can do Mr. Khuranna.. there's nothing tat you can do to save yourself from all this.

Maan: I don't want to save myself Vicky.. Maan tho mar juka hain na.. he is dead when he lost his Mishti due to his anger. Abhi tho sirf ek zinda lash hain.. and m trying to put life in tat dead body.

Yash:You deserve it Maan.. you deserve much more.

Maan: Than why don't you all kill me.. yahi sab khatam hoga.. Why Maa., why don't you kill me so tat your daughter gets free.. why..

Rano was now quite without any word. She knew tat she cant even kill him for wat he did.

Maan: Nahi maar sakthe na mujhe.. than why maa..why do you all hate me so much.. kitni baar maafi maang juka hoon. I paid enough for my mistakes but not anymore and I swear Vicky.. if any one of you try to come in my way , they will face Maan Singh Khuranna now. and I mean it.

Vicky: dekthe hain Mr. Khuranna.. for how long you will be able to do it. I will take them away from you and its my promise… I cant let them suffer in your hands.

Maan: lets see Vicky..who suffers and who wins.. But do remember tat you are going to face Maan Singh Khuranna and Maan who belong to his Mishti and her Mehar and it wont be easy Vicky.. it wont be.

Vicky: You will pay Mr. Khuranna and I will make sure about it.

Dadima: Maan.. get inside right now.. I don't want Mehar to hear and see you all fighting. Right now in.

Maan slowly nodded his head and asked Mehar to follow him while Vicky left Mehar seeing Dadima giving glares to him.

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Maan placed Geet on the bed while Mehar silently observed her Dadda. She was still bit scared of wat she had seen down. Though she did not know wat it was but she did not like others shouting at her Dadda.

Mehar: Dadda.. everlyone.. bad.. sab.. bad.. Dadda… shouting na.. I hate.. all..

Maan picked Mehar in his arms and kissed her on her face.

Maan: Naa.. Mehar.. don't say tat.. they love you na… they love Mumma..so

Mehar: but.. they.. don't.. lovb Dadda.. Chachu.. Mamu.. bad.. Mehar.. not.. goinlg. To them.. Mehar.. don't lovb them..

Maan: Na.. Mehar good girl na.. so.. Mehar love chachu and mamu.. and Dadda loves everyone.

Mehar: Pal.. They bad na.. Dadda…

Maan kissed her again tickling her while she laughed making Maan happy. His eyes slowly reached to his Mishti who was back in their room after years. Dadima stood at the door seeing them but she only feared for Geet and Mehar. She still remembers the day when they had taken the final decision of sending Geet to mental asylum fearing for Mehar and her life. Maan looked up seeing her while his eyes had tears seeing his support with him.

Maan: Dadima…

Mehar looked behind and she at once realized tat she was her Badi Dadi as Pari had said.

Mehar: Dadda.. this.. Badi Dadi na.. Mehar. Badi Dadi na..

Maan and Dadima smiled hearing her.

Dadima: Mehar… don't you want to hug Badi Dadi.

Dadima stretched her hands for her while Maan gestured Mehar to go and she ran to Dadima who hugged her showering her love on their little Mehar who had become their life. She kissed her face while her tears wetted Mehar small cheeks. Mehar wiped them off while smiling.

Mehar: chi.. Babaji.. Badi.. dadima.. small cry baby.. Dadda.. see. Badi… Dadi.. cryling..

Dadima: Haan Mehar.. Badi Dadi cry baby..

Mehar giggled hearing it and she instantly added.

Mehar: Dadda… to cry baby.. Badi Dadi.. Dadda.. na.. cryling… Mehar see.. Dadda.. everly.. night.. cry baby.. Mehar.. wipe.. Dadda face.

Dadima looked at Maan and the look at his eyes told Dadima how alone he was. she felt bad for leaving him but she could not do anything and her hatred made her to stay away. She slowly walked towards him and sat next while her hands softly touched a sleeping Geet but her eyes on Maan.

Maan: I need them Dadima.. Maan cant live alone anymore. He is dying Dadima.. he needs his Mishti and Her Mehar.. he needs.

He could not speak anymore and hugs Dadima and Mehar tight breaking down for the first time. Dadima did not say a word but her tears did say everything. Her hand on hir head while Mehar shed her tears seeing her Dadda and Badi Dadi crying.

Maan: M sorry… but I did not know Dadima.. Her Mehar.. she was not mistake Dadima.. she is our love…. Her Mehar.. for me Dadima.. she was not a mistake..

Dadima: ssshhh.. everything will be fine Maan.. everything will be ok..

Maan: m scared.. m scared Dadima..

Dadima: You cant be.. you need to get her back, Maan.. get back you Mishti. Her Maan needs her.. Her Mehar needs her Maan.. Mishti Needs her Maan..

Maan: Par.. sab.. they wont.. they will take her away Dadima.

Dadima: no one can Maan.. don't let them come in between. Don't let them Maan.. you are Their Maan.. and their Maan is not weak.. he is strong.. Tell them tat Maan Singh Khuranna is back.. show them tat you will fight everyone who will come in between prove them tat they are wrong Maan. Prove it to your Dad Maan.. prove to him tat his son loves his Mishti and will get her back.. prove it to me Maan and prove it to yourself Maan..

Maan parted from the hug and the moment he saw tears in Her Mehar's eyes he died thousands of deaths. Mehar though too small she could never see her Dadda cry. She slowly wiped off his tears while kissed him all over his face.

Dadima: This is your Strength Maan…I know you never said tat she is your Mehar.. ab tak.. sirf Her Mehar.. you need to prove Maan.. tat she is your Mehar too.. you need to prove tat Mehar is not only Geet's but MAAN-GEET'S MEHAR..

Mehar: Mehar.. MUMMA-DADDA MEHAR… Badi Dadi.. Mehar.. MAANEET's Mehar…

Maan and Dadima smiled hearing the new word she gave for Maan and Geet "MAANEET" and truly she was.. she belonged to MAANEET and no one else.

Dadima: See Maan.. she is yours and hers.. and now its you who have to prove it.. give her Mumma and Dadda back, Maan.. bring her back.. and I know MISHTI'S, MAAN will do it.. he will do it for Her Mehar.. hain na..

Maan hugged Mehar tight while his eyes brightened with the new zeal while his lips gave a sweet smile.

Maan: I will Dadima.. Her Mehar will get her Mumma-Dadda.. and I will prove tat she is MAANEET'S, MEHAR.. I will..

Dadima smiled blessing him and asked him to take rest for some time as now it would not be easy fro him to fight their destiny. A destiny which did bring them together again but with its cruel game.

PRECAP: Geet seeing Maan and her reaction…

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Posted: 12 years ago
update maan separated geet and meher maan regreting family accusing bi... sameera hope maan will kill her soon



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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome part but still confuse at some places

how can nobody in maan family trust him and why mehar suffering soo much
poor geet
waiting for next part
Edited by tabby999 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update... So only dadima is understanding maan's pain.. Waiting to see geet's reaction... Meher is so cute...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i donno di i just cat help myself from hating maan so much sometimes sins are so much that regret cannot wash them away 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyharika

i donno di i just cat help myself from hating maan so much sometimes sins are so much that regret cannot wash them away 😭

yeah maans pain is nothing compared to geets.she suffered for 7 years .he trusted an outsider than his dear ones.

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