[MG-SS] If it wasn't for The Night [Epilogue-p 89] - Page 47

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update.. 😊

i really really really enjoyed reading it..

and motor mouth is awesome word ... 😉


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Posted: 12 years ago
I know the story is completed but upon someone's request here is a little closure to another couple who are as much a part of the story as Maan and Geet were. So here you go, a closure for Jackass and Chickenlegs :)

Closure

She felt her hand stop at her mouth as she watched the picture they presented. She felt her lips pull down into a smile, a genuine one at that at the couple before her. As he twirled her, she saw her friend throw her head back and laugh. She felt her own lips tremble as she watched them in wonder and amazement. She silently wished and prayed for the happiness to remain intact in their lives.

Her eyes closed and her head rested across the pillar from where she was watching them without them knowing about it.

A low sigh escaped her lips, a happy sigh as she felt unconstrained happiness for her friend. She heard another sigh, right above her and opened her eyes, her eyebrows furrowed in confusion.

As involved she was all the time she was watching them, she hadn't realized how uncomfortable she was feeling. Now that she was out of the little trance, she'd realized how stiff her posture was. Of course why wouldn't it be stiff now that she's literally sandwiched between the pillar and…Rehan.

She lifted her face to look at him, whose arms were caged around her and who by the way was peeking all the time, standing behind her. He now dropped his head back as his hands still wrapped around her waist lazily.

She saw his closed eyes and his head which was leaned against the wall. His hair fell on his forehead and she had this urge to pass her hands through that thick mane and push them away.

"Rehan" she felt her own voice sound strange to her. Since when does her voice turn husky?

She felt a sudden tug across her waist, and the next moment, their positions shifted, with his back resting against the wall while she was pulled towards him, his hands encircling her.

She was startled with the sudden movement but her confusions cleared by the next set off words he spoke.

"Shh" he said covering her mouth with his palms. He slowly peeked from the pillar to see the couple oblivious of their presence, and immersed in their own world.

Ihina saw as Rehan faced her now, and his head fell back again and he sighed in relief. "I thought they might have heard us" he let out another sigh removing his hand from her mouth.

"Man I am tired. I am going to sleep like a horse for two weeks. These people let me work like a slave for making them see sense. I give up matchmaking from now on."

She furrowed her eyes at his unintelligible rambling but slowly understood his words. So his highness did know about them already. She felt her lips pull down into a small smile watching his droopy eyes. He really looked like he needed sleep desperately which pinched her for ruining his sleep, with a worrisome phone call.

"Sorry for ruining your sleep" he heard her speak and his eyes snapped open as he looked at the girl before him in amazement. He didn't understand how the hell he heard someone apologize and why the bloodied hell does it sound close to Ihina's voice.

"Does fatigue causes people to hear voices?" he asked her cautiously, making her want to laugh and roll her eyes at the same time.

"No I suppose"

"Oh" he paused for another minute and looked at her suspiciously "Am I hallucinating or are you harbinger of chickenlegs? Why the hell can I see you smile I mean S-M-I-L-E without no apparent reason?"

She rolled her eyes and heard him give a whoosh of relief.

"Thank god you are you." She heard him speak now.

She gave a short laugh and when she raised her eyes she saw him looking at her strangely.

"What?" she asked tucking an invisible strand behind her ear, suddenly feeling conscious.

"Nothing I—" he felt a sudden loss at words and quickly averted his gaze. He'd no idea why the hell did he feel but he felt sudden warmth in his heart when she laughed.

"Nothing I just.. you just look…different"

She fluttered her lashes as her eyes lowered down. A short pause followed, where she felt awkward even to look into his eyes. Suddenly she felt acutely aware of everything starting from his after shave which enchanted her senses to his breath that fell on her forehead, and the hands that now rested on her waist, which seemed to burn her. She wondered since when had she felt discomfiture around him.

She felt a need to break the suffocating silence and hence raised her eyes to meet his.

"Since when are you into matchmaking by the way?"

"Since forever" he replied with a glazed look on his face. "I should be given a Nobel prize for putting up with two thickheads. One never expressed, and the other…don't even ask about her. The girl seriously does have a complicated brain. She doesn't see the obvious but sees the imaginary things. She thinks I had put the card for you. Now from where the hell did this conclusion come from" he said rolling his eyes.

She felt the words pinch her for unknown reason and felt her cheeks heat up. Quickly averting her gaze, she pushed his hands away in one swift motion and turned her back to him "I think I should leave" she murmured and took a step only to be stopped by a grip on her wrist.

She felt her heartbeats rise when he caught her wrist. She felt him come close and her body turned rigid when his breath fell on her cheeks.

"Come to think of it" he whispered near her ears "It doesn't seem such a bad idea after all no one would ever have a chickenlegs and a non ass creature as their girl friend. So you are stuck with me don't you think?" she heard his amused voice and flashed her eyes at him.

If it was any other day, she would have used all those swear words in the world and would have made his ears bleed and she faced him with the very intention however what she'd seen in his eyes muted her.

Though his eyes were masked with mischief, she could read the underlying seriousness in them and felt her heart warm at the honesty in his eyes.

She blinked and after a moment of thought she faced him and gave him a sultry smile thus by making him freeze. She leaned closer and passed a finger across his jaw line and purred "Well not a bad idea though but" she said tapping a finger against her chin and looked into his eyes and bit out "high hopes jackass, try in next birth"

With that said she pushed him away and started walking away. He'd seen her retreating back half bemused and half agitated. However when he'd seen her pause for a moment before exiting the room and saw her smiling when she slightly turned her head, he got his answer as he finally slumped against the wall and look into heavens.

"Thank you god" he mouthed as he ran out of the room to catch up with his high headed chickenlegs, his girl. Damn it, that sounded great. His girl.

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Edited by Cloud9. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally "my hero" got "his girl"..😃
Thank you so much dear for giving "closure" for this couple but you forgot another one..
Did "chocolate" got her "healthy and handsome butterscotch"???😕I am seriously worried about her...
Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This Rehan is really lucky & he seriously should consider match making as profession.In d process of match making his brother & best friend, he got 'his girl' also...great
The ending was great
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome
Thanks For The PM
Edited by nahtani88 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the ending
poor rehan had t work hard just to get them to accept their love
she was really blind and maan too scared
but it was beautiful the way they got together and also the closure for the other couple
rehan got his girl too
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Posted: 12 years ago
BE MINE...OHHH HOW ROMANTIC...and the poem yeahhh allah it took my breath away...an awesome story and well written...it is twell written that's make the story special...thank u for writing this story...
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Posted: 12 years ago
okay serious res... read all parts shall review it soon :D

PS: i am still waiting for ur "Celebrations" review... res post rakhi hai tu vahaan...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

okay serious res... read all parts shall review it soon :D


PS: i am still waiting for ur "Celebrations" review... res post rakhi hai tu vahaan...

meine toh kabka unreserve kar liya
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Posted: 12 years ago
Didu!
You made my evening!
I was so in love with Rehan when in the last update, he caught Ihina and said "Be mine"
That was, well , sexy, passionate and straight forward proposal
Now you gave them a great start.
Ihina's expressions, Rehan's dialogues
All in place.
Jackass and Chickenlegs all the way!
Thanx Didu
Mera rishtha pakka ho gaya hain
Jaldh hi nikah hogi.
Love you!

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