ArHi FF:2:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES - Page 55

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Posted: 13 years ago
omg khushi alone in darkness.. bt i hope u wont let it happen.. Lord arnav plz cme back for her😊 nd awesome update yaar.. dis also cliff hanger. 😡 dnt u think tonight is better then tmrw morning...? think abt it..better i ll wait for u to update 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kushipugly

</div><div><font size="2">Sweetheart, i m 33yrs old, married & have4 handsome boys including hubby😃. Now don't you dare start calling me Auntyjee as even though i m old from all of you,i m still young😃</font>
<font size="2">now laugh as much as you can because i m used to people calling me all that above you said& crazy😭 </font>
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<font size="2">Now about yr view towards the show, i was extremely upset too with arshi's assasination by cvs but hey they gave us a rabbavey ME, we still got to see arshi every 5days a week, drool nkeep drooling on arnav& you know, i just don't care the crap from cvs now as now i fully indulge myself with this epic ff😊 all my frustration for the show vanishes as soon as i read an update from aquiline. So, until the show gets better, just indulge in with the beast😊</font>
<font size="2">Luv you too sweetheart & thankyou for liking my drama post😳🤗</font>
<font size="2">lets have some pakoras together 😊</font>
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@kushipugly...all your antics seem like khushi s..I am sure khushi would remain the same after four boys too 😆 🤗
Edited by peepli - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
He did it!! He DID it?!?! Heartless, even for him!
But I am also curious to see how he might react when he sees Khushi broken like this, after she spends sometime in the dark. There is no doubt that he will come back for her. Beggar or not, she is his one lifeline! :P

Glad to know my smile matters!! Leaving plenty of them here! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Updating in 30 minutes. Warm the furnace for I will be cold from the long walk to the Inn. Order your drinks from the InnKeeper and a cup of anything warm for me. And those who are not at the Cave, now, can come later and hear the tale from one of the Comrades or the Inn Keeper himself...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting dear... Deaperately!!
Haiyy yeh 30 min kaise betega... 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
I'll make sure the fire is stoked...

Hot chocolate and pumpkin pie for me! I'll be at the inn, ready and waiting!
Edited by saomom - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
poor khushi...she is scared of the dark n he left her in the dungeons all alone...😭...but oddly the dungeons are reminding me of dungeons and dragons the cartoon hehe...love love love ur update👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Dingle: First to hit the deck! Does he know it's her worst nightmare? Hm.

Kushipugly: Second Commander! Hubby dear was right! And I like your theory on him locking her up to save her from himself. Interesting!

Sona: Just too taken aback by that chapter that you commented twice??

Indiavizion: The heart of you reaching to her misery!

Sonia: Will the girl learn to shut her mouth ever?

Peepli: Bad move to spit wrath on a flaring beast!

Saga_twilight: Your guess does have a shade here!

Pristineblue: Thankyou dear for appreciating my early decision to update.

Saomom: Missed you real bad! But reading how you'd rescued Kush if you were Lady La had me back in my happy spirits!!

Shas: My guest appearances owed to you!

Vrinda: Hold on! The rest of the chapters may make matters more worse in picturing her!

Bea_rom: Will anyone tell him of her fear of the darkness? Who knows of it in the Castle?

Khusiarnav: Only happy to know I could cheer you up dear! Love how you and the others are making this thread light up with smiles. And Anger management Class had me laughing? Will he fume and roar at whoever comes to train him to calm down?

Music: You got it dear!!*wink*

Darya dear: May the chapters to come clear the anger in your mind a bit...

Bablio: Dear, you are real a happy Comrade of mine and you must know, I always feel happy seeing you at the Inn when I come!

Casker: Cheer up dear! I know what you are feeling.

Medharees: I want to sing seeing the verses. I didn't think you would give us a song on your harp after this update. Surprises! I love them! And goodness, a very deep poem this is. I need some time to decipher its depths, my Arhasian Poetess.

Hatelove: Speechless a sign of Appreciation too?

AngelDream: Poor her, yes.

All Smiles: I was wondering what was wrong in keeping you away. I hope you are well dear for it does seem the Sandy Girl was quite a tantrum-throwing one. And goodness, your pick of my best lines and your thoughts into it and especially that picture. I am humbled! And some of your thoughts are so much of my intentions in the tale's future plot!

Flowers4u: Cheer up dear! Poor Kushi is strong at heart when she needs to be!

Jonashi: The member proud to be part of my circle! Though I do not want you to break your life's schedule to comment for me, I am always happy to see your thoughts and reactions to my chapters, dear! Always.

Leafs: Wow! You guessed which was my favorite picture in that collage! Yes, the "we are one, complete together" one! We're two romantics in the same boat! I am so sorry, I didn't know you could have been affected too. Hope all is fine now.

STB: Glad to see you could visit dear!

Hoopoe: The eye of yours to see beyond a picture created by words! I can only bow to you, lady!

Vidya dear: Your feelings are true where his feelings are concerned.

Crinklez: You too, dear? Great insight on the dungeon! Though I won't say if it is right or wrong.

Keerthi: oops! Me and my cliffhangers! Where ever did I catch the disease from?

Harsh: special smiles from you lighting up my heart! And I like the word "lifeline" for his Kushi.

Shamin: Dungeons and dragons in cartoons? *chuckle* Nice!

Chapter Ninety Eight: Lord Arnav with the Family

"See if you can open it, Akash bitwa," said a troubled Nani.

Lady Anjali looked pale and she kept muttering, 'how could you, Chotey; how could you, Chotey' as she walked to and fro before the door.

Lady Manorama shook her ahead, watching Lady Anjali's state, and said to no one in particular, "This is a very bad thing that Arnav bitwa has done this time. I admit I hate Rags, but to have put a girl of her age in the dungeon..."

Lord Akash and his father tried pulling and pushing the metal door but it refused to budge even an inch. Lord Akash shook his head, "It's hopeless, Dadi. I don't know how he had done it so easily."

"It's the strength he has in his blood and bones," muttered Nani wretchedly and then she saw Lady Lavanya step forwards and bang on the door again, "ASR! Open the door! Please open the door!"

The bangs on the door ceased and all muttering stopped when the door budged and creaked open and all waited with bated breath, their eyes on the door.

Lord Arnav emerged out of the darkness, his shoulder wet, proof of his presence in the dungeon whose ceilings and walls were always dripping from the lake residue, and they waited to see if his hands would drag out Kushi the way he had dragged her in, but to their bafflement, he was alone and as soon as he stepped in, he shut the door with a hard thump.

He made to move through the crowd and head for his bedroom but everyone stopped him.

"Chotey, where is she?" asked a pale Lady Anjali, "Did you hurt her?"

"ASR! Open this door," said Lady Lavanya, standing near the metal door hopefully.

Lord Arnav ignored them all and Lord Manohar stepped forward, his expression firm, "Son, I may not be as strong as you but my wisdom is above yours. What you did is not right. I suggest you open this door and let the girl out."

"No, Mamaji," he said with finality, "I will not let her go. She deserves to remain there and think over what she did."

"What did she do as to deserve the dungeon, Chotey?" asked Nani, pulling his hand.

He drew his hand away and frowned at her, "I permitted Lavanya's presence here because she never insisted on affection and ritualistic relationships from me. And then you had do go force a handmaid into this Castle and make her wash Lavanya's regal beliefs with her village muck!"

"Chotey!" Lady Anjali stepped forward, angrily, "Your actions and words are beyond heartless! I fail to see the human in you."

Lord Arnav's eyes glinted mischievously, "You could have if there had been a human in me."

Everyone was silent as the memory of the struggled nights flashed through their mind.

"Chotey," Nani was calmer in voice now, as she yearned to him, "I know you are angry now. But if you could try and calm down to think what you have done, we could-"

"There is no trying and thinking needed, Nani," said Lord Arnav, "What I did was worthy of her deed. She deserves to be taught a lesson."

"No, you are wrong, bitwa," said Lady Manorama, "This time you crossed the line because, according to me, no one deserves the dungeon."

Lord Arnav growled aloud and all of them stepped away from him. "Stay away from me," he warned, and he looked pointedly at his sister and Lady Lavanya, "All of you."

With one swift move, he made for the stairs, the wildness awakening within him and as soon as he reached the landing, he slipped into his room and shut the door from the world and guilty words outside.

To return back to the Index, visit:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3256949/arhi-ff-2-the-beasts-and-the-bleeding-roses

When is the next update? I don't know. Maybe tomorrow morning or maybe....tonight? That is if the Comrades can come to the Inn in the night evading Captain Responsibility and if the InnKeeper will permit us in.

P. S. The next update will be longer than these last few updates.These last few chapters were build up for the coming chapters! Make sure you make it to the Inn and then you can hear the tale first hand from me or you'll have to hear it from the InnKeeper (who is sweet!). And then comes the 100th update! *jumping about in glee*

Edited by Aquiline - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh good grief, I typed up two paragraphs of comments only to hit a wrong button and lose it all. I promise my comments were witty and generally quite fabulous, but alas, you will never see my initial thoughts.

So here goes my secondary thoughts.

1. Run Lady La - run for your life and take Khushi with you!

2. Mamaji - finally! If you are finally going to man up, you did it at the right time!

3. Lordy Lord - you're a jerk. A big, fat, mean jerk and I don't like you. I don't care if you (in my mind) are a beautiful mix of Barun and Richard Armitage. Right now, I want to punch you right in your gorgeous nose.

4. Khushi - darling, I hope you sleep for a long time and are saved from being scared to death for hours. And hon, when he finally comes to get you, please let him have it. Use all your big words and put him in his place. Walk out of that castle with your head held high, and don't go back! Don't look back! Just keep walking. You can write letters to Nani, Anjali and Lady La. Meet them for tea in the village, but don't go back!

See, not so witty and fabulous, but that's what you get when I hit a wrong button.

As usual, the hot chocolate and pumpkin pie were fabulous! Thanks for the invite!

ps - should you decide to update again tonight, I wouldn't be mad about it.
Edited by saomom - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So much anger, so much... Even lady manorama condoned the act..I don't understand, lord Arnav could just have refused lavanya, and the matter would have been put to rest as no one can go against him..why is he so angry and harsh towardskhushi..accepted, that she had planted the idea in la s head..I think he is angry not because she instigated la to ask him to wed her with all the rituals, but I think he is angry that this shows she, khushi, had no such feelings whatsoever towards him, and that grieves him greatly..has this anger stemmed from that grief ???

Edited by peepli - 13 years ago

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