My Fallen Angel- chapter 8 Pg (41)

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NothingLasts

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Posted: 12 years ago

I am looking forward to how Arnav will help her overcome her paralysis and help her regain her bearings in life!

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Cheryth

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Posted: 12 years ago

RES*

Mads
I'll read and comment tomorrow ok 🤗

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Hey Disha

Guess what? I got the first page

and Woo Hoo AM SECOND 🥳

Thank You sooo much for the PM Hun🤗

Title of the new SS/FF: I simply Love the Title ❤️; Fallen angel (completely my sort of thing) - mysterious, alluring and exciting all at once...

The character sketch: It seems interesting and I love how you've made Payal and Akash play a more vital role in this story also me likey how you've made them BOTH elders 😊!!! Khushi is a fashion designer and our Heart Throb, our ASR is a physiotherapist?😲
Hmmm, That's an intriguing change Hun

Also, I would love to know more about the adorable Sia and her pranks with her maasi

She sounds endearing already 😃
I simply adore the fact that Khushi and Akash seem to share a good brother-sister bond too

That's surely a lovely change Hun 😊

Prologue: It's kind of heart-breaking Mads, Khushi and Payal lost their parents and Khushi was a sole witness to it (which explains her non-khushi self and her nightmares)😔
Sigh* What could be worse and more life changing than to be a witness to an accident that takes away your loved ones, your beloved parents😭
Many just wish they didn't survive
Hence, I understand her pain
At least Payal has Akash with her innit
But, Khushi
And OMG She's paralysed? Oh, that's distressing Disha
It broke me 💔

But, the ending sure gave me hope
Am guessing Akash's call was to his brother, Arnav who in this story is a Physiotherapist?
I have a feeling things are going to be taking an interesting turn😉
Is Arnav going to be Khushi's doctor?
Oooh... That'll sure be out of teh ordinary😆
I can't wait to read more Hun
I love your work
You do know that right?😳
Hehe

Overall, Another one of your work of art👏
And I can't wait to be a witness to this mysterious journey
You've written the chapter beautifully Hun...
Flawless writing!!!⭐️

Please do continue soon
Please. Please. Please!!!!😳

P.S: Don't neglect ACTH though sweetie ok... You must know it's my first love out of your work on IF *giggles* Do update that soon too Hun🤗

Imma eagerly waiting...

Love ya sis
T.C
Cheers

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Reader_Hobby

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey!

This was a little emotional reading about Khushi and Payal's parents passing away. Then Khushi not being able to feel any sensation in her legs ... Bless her.

I am very glad however that Arnav, from the character sketch is not a business tycoon. Infact he is a physiotherapist 😊. Interesting.

Please do continue this soon. Very eager to read more. Very well written.

Please PM me once you have updated. Thanks.

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Shay

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Posted: 12 years ago

LOVED IT!!!

I can tell this one is going to be amazing.
The love that Payal and Akash have for Khushi is so clearly evident, and you described their sorrow so beautifully.
I can't wait for more of this one... And moreover, i can't wait for the entry of Arnav Singh Raizada 😉
Fantastic Start!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ASRandKKGSRFan
Hey!

This was a little emotional reading about Khushi and Payal's parents passing away. Then Khushi not being able to feel any sensation in her legs ... Bless her.

I am very glad however that Arnav, from the character sketch is not a business tycoon. Infact he is a physiotherapist 😊. Interesting.

Please do continue this soon. Very eager to read more. Very well written.

Please PM me once you have updated. Thanks.

So glad you liked this story! Thank you so much for your comment, it means a lot🤗

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Originally posted by: shay1990
LOVED IT!!!
I can tell this one is going to be amazing.
The love that Payal and Akash have for Khushi is so clearly evident, and you described their sorrow so beautifully.
I can't wait for more of this one... And moreover, i can't wait for the entry of Arnav Singh Raizada 😉
Fantastic Start!

To tell you the truth, I cant wait for his entry too😉

Thank you so so much for this lovely comment😃

*goofy grin*