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RES!
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This was so beautifully written... Right from the start, to the very end.
The main thing i love about this is how you have almost reversed the roles of Arnav and Khushi. Yes, Arnav is still a little bit detached, but it's Khushi who is angry at the world. It's Khushi who doesn't care for attachments anymore.
I absolutely love how you have managed this 👏
I really hope Arnav doesn't give up on her... And by the looks of it, Khushi already has a sense of attraction towards him - Just like at the start of the show when Arnav always used to try and figure out his attraction towards Khushi! Ahhh, once again... this has been so perfectly done.
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This was so beautifully written... Right from the start, to the very end.
The main thing i love about this is how you have almost reversed the roles of Arnav and Khushi. Yes, Arnav is still a little bit detached, but it's Khushi who is angry at the world. It's Khushi who doesn't care for attachments anymore.
I absolutely love how you have managed this 👏
I really hope Arnav doesn't give up on her... And by the looks of it, Khushi already has a sense of attraction towards him - Just like at the start of the show when Arnav always used to try and figure out his attraction towards Khushi! Ahhh, once again... this has been so perfectly done.
Her hair was pinned back hastily, letting her unruly curls settle on the side of her hallow cheeks. Prominent, purple bruises surrounded her eyes making it seem as if she had not slept well for a really long time. There was a frown on her face, her brows knitted together, The previously lively eyes now held emptiness and pain so evident that he simply had to look away.
I also love how you've not portrayed Khushi as a perfect face here. You've made Arnav see her stark reality... Which is so refreshing
Amazing update, it was so beautifully written... Cannot wait for the next
Shay X
Amazing update, it was so beautifully written... Cannot wait for the next
Shay X
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