Fanaa Hum Mohobbat Mein Teri-#4,Thrd 5 link added - Page 12

Originally posted by: uteem

Waiting

Originally posted by: queenbee001

Update jaldi please 🤗

Originally posted by: neha5058

kisi ko update chahiye????

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Mujhee...Mujhee...now just stop being so cruel to me...please...see me all making "innocent cutie face"...jaldi se update kardo

Thanks for the wishes dear...good to know about ur papers..so now chillax time I guess and of course more updates too😉😆😆

First of all, , thanks a lot for the likes and comments… love you all… muah, , ,

Now, , I asked a question last time about the pace of the story…. Some of you agreed that the pace is slow and some of said that it is correct….. so I am thinking that I should increase the speed a little bit, , will give you more maaneet sweet moments with family also, , and you wants handas also, , don't worry maine uske liye bhi kuch socha hua hai…. Will come later… ok.. till then enjoy this update…..

part-44

"maan" she called him softly, , he turned towards her still having a sweet smile on his face, , she clicked and he heard that click sound suddenly the smile washed away from his face, , geet chuckled, , ,

"Kodak moment" she smiled back….

His smile was washed away but then he smiled back at her, , he loved this innocent act of hers, , Beside of snatching cell from her hand maan was smiling at her antics, , actually he is loving this new geet because he is on the way of knowing about her, , those little-2 things which made her more beautiful by inside, , the inner beauty is really needed, , he wants inner beauty rather than outside beauty, , he was ditched once by her who has outside beauty but from inside she was a beast but where the girl who is sitting beside him, she is beautiful from inside n outside too, ,

His face is glowing like any girl's face glow, , he doesn't know what he treasured , , why he is smiling without any reason but right now he get to know one thing and that is, , he felt like smiling when he is with geet, ,

By the time they reached to hotel, , it is not crowded hotel but according to his taste, , he likes less people where he went and this is the same place, , maan come out from the car and move towards her side, , she was about to open the door but before that maan opened it for her…. She felt nice with his sweet gesture….

Maan locked the car and held her hand in his taking her inside the hotel, , she moved with him like she is the part of his body…… maan left her hand while walking, , she looked at him confusingly , thinking that why he left her hand but his next movement stunned her, , she felt something on her waist, , found that his hand on her waist holding her protectively, , she looked at him then looked down shyly and blushed….

Maan knew that she is blushing, , he thought to tease her little bit , , he bend down his face a little matching with her level, ,

"geet, , don't blush too much,,,,,, we are at public place" maan whispered in her ear making her stop on her way, , she looked at him stunned again with his words but then blushed again, ,

"geet, , you are blushing a lot, , maine kuch kiya kya?" he asked seductively in her ear sending shivers down in her body…… they are still in outside the hotel, alone in parking area…..

"maan" she whispered shyly…. She loved his teasing but she is not used to it, , she knew that she loves him but this is new feeling for her, , the tickling sensation she felt when maan come close to her, , the roller coaster inside her tummy, , when he look at her, the sudden redness appear on her cheeks making her blush, , she loved this new feeling, ,

"geet, , bolo na maine kuch kiya?" he asked again while walking taking slow steps lost in each other….

"nahi" she replied enjoying her closeness with him, ,

"kuch karu?" he asked again , still he is teasing her, , he knew that she will deny but her reply shocked him, , he thought why not fulfilling her wish…

"haan" she replied back to him again lost in him….

"really!" he asked again, ,

"hmmm" she replied back….. but the next act of his stopped on her track….

Maan walked fast pecking her cheek like a newly boyfriend did with her girlfriend for teasing her, , geet stood there rooted and touched her cheek where maan kissed just a while ago, , and blushed again but suddenly she came back in her sense, , she ran behind him, , he turned and ran ahead facing her laughing at her plight….. geet stood there at once hearing his laugh…. Ohh he looks awesome when he laugh, , so mesmerizing sight…. She was admiring him, , he stopped laughing when he saw her lost in him…

He moved towards her, , shaking her by her shoulder…..

"geet, what happened?" he asked in worry..

"you looks more handsome when you laugh..!" she said looking in his eyes….. he smiled at her compliment…..

"please aap smile kiya kijiye, , aapko suit karta hai" she said to him….. she tiptoed and kissed on his cheek, , maan blushed with a small kiss, , geet looked down and blushed again….

I keep thinking of how much I love talking to you..

How good you look when you smile.

How much I love your laugh.

I day-dream about you off and on,

replaying pieces of our conversation;

laughing at funny things that you said or did..

I've memorized your face & the way that you look at me..

I catch myself smiling again at what I imagine..

I wonder what will happen the next time we are together

& even though nothing will come out of this,

i know one thing for sure, for once.. i don't care,

i cherish every moment i have with you.

(credit goes to an unknown person, , don't know who wrote this one, , found it on net…)

"chalein geet?" asked maan again holding her by her waist lovingly… she nodded and they entered in hotel where the manager saw them and greeted them….. he personally took their order and told his serviceman for taking his extra care…. They ordered Indian food because geet wants to eat this….

Maan and geet left alone, , because they were sitting in his personal area, , it was his usual table at the corner , , when he come here with some really important person in family then he come here whether it is dadi or annie or his close friend in business world…. And now geet also added in the list…. Now he has accepted that geet is really important to him…. ..

Silence was disturbing them, , both were looking at each other, , geet placed her hand over maan's which was on the table…. Maan looked at the hand then at her face…. And knotted his brows asking to her what happen? She shook her head in denial and held his hand in hers…. Maan sensed something…. He saw she opened her mouth for saying something to him….

"maan, you must be thinking that as a joke which I said in car" told geet…

"what geet?" asked maan placing his hand over hers…

"which I said about you like handsome and all, , " she said to him placing her left hand over him…. now their hands completely joined with each other…..

"what happen geet?" asked maan sensing seriousness in her voice…

"maan, , don't take that as a joke, , I really mean it,,,, " there is no regretting or anything in her words… the simple confession she did to him…. maan silent for a while listening her,, her melodious voice

"it was not in jealousy, , it was my inner feelings which I have for you, , I really mean it maan, , but it is also true that I can't see you with anyone….pls don't ever leave me"

He brought her hand near his lips and placed a assurance kiss on her hand…. "never ever geet, , and this is msk's promise… but you have to promise also geet" asked maan to her still holding her hands near his lips…

"kya maan?" asked geet…

"promise me geet, , tum mujhe kabhi chhod kar nahi jaogi, , kuch bhi ho jaaye, , pls geet " asked maan, , he wants geet by his side at every moment of his life, , he wants to cherish every moment of his life with her, , he wants to share his life with her, , in these 2-3 days he got to know her importance in his life, , the small-2 things she did for him, , this is unforgettable, , the love she had for Vedanta, , unmatchable, , everything about her so good….. he don't want to loose her, , never ever…

"I promise maan, , I'll never leave you alone and this is mrs. Msk's promise… " geet replied back in his manner…. Maan smiled hearing her statement…. Just like him….

Na koi kisi se dur hota hai,

Na koi kisi ke kareeb hota hai,

Zindagi khud hi nazdeek la deti hai,

Jab koi kisi ke naseeb mein hota hai…

(credit goes to nishita25 aka my sweet shona nishi, , love you dear for sending this sms to me, , muah)

"thank you geet meri zindagi mein shaamil hone ke liye…. And thank you for telling me your feelings which you have for me…." Geet smiled….

"geet" maan called her….

"haan maan" she answered back…..

"I want to confess something, , " maan uttered finally, , he made up his mind today that he will tell her, , he will tell her that how he feel for her, , everything, ,

"kya maan?" asked geet…..

"geet, , I like you geet, , I really like you, , you must be thinking that this is because we are in relationship now, , but nothing is like that geet. Geet you know what, , I like you from the day 1 when you entered in Km, , the love you have for me, , the innocence inside you, , you never hate me for that I did with you, , the love you have for Vedanta, , the way you handle everything" maan was interrupted by geet in mid…

"maan, why are you saying all this now? I didn't want to hear anything about the past, ," told geet to him…

"no geet, , not today, , don't stop me, , tumne socha hoga ki I hate you that's why I didn't accept you but geet nothing was like that, , " told maan, ,

"to fir kaisa tha maan?" asked maan, , now she wants to know….

"because mai tumhe jhuti ummedein nahi dena chahta tha, , I never hate you geet, , I wanted to talk to you but you promised that you never show your face to me, , I was hurt that day because I hurt you, , apure innocent heart who deserves only happiness nothing else, , but what I gave you only pain…. But today I promise you geet, , aaj ke baad sirf khushiyaan hi hongi hamari zindagi mein, , sirf aur sirf khushiyaan…" told maan….

"sachi maan?" asked geet, , her face beamed with happiness, , a tear of happiness come out from her eyes…

"muchi geet" he replied back… he wiped her tears away from her eyes….

"aaj ke baad yeh aansu inn aankho mein nahi honge geet, ,I promise geet" maan told her and promised again…. He felt light after sharing this with her , , just then their sweet moment interrupted by the waiter, ,

"here is your order , sir" he placed everything on the table… "anything else sir?" waiter asked to him, , maan looked at geet for asking to her if she need something else, , she shook her head in no…

"no, , you go, , and don't disturb us till then we call you" maan said to him… he nodded….

Geet is about to serve him the food but maan stopped her holding her hand in mid…

"no geet, , today I'll serve you, , will you mind?" asked maan…. She shook her head…. Maan started serve her and himself too… maan took the chapati's bite and dipped it in the veg, , and placed it near her mouth, , she looked at morsel and at him, , ohh,, she loved this sweet gesture of his… she opened her mouth and ate , , maan smiled….

"now it's my turn" said maan, , behaving like a little kid who is happy like his mom will feed him food, , geet smiled at him and feed him , , maan again feed her, , turn by turn both are having their food…. It was best time of their till yet and they are cherishing it completely lost in each other….

Precap

"Geeettt" maan screamed, ,

Okay, now sorry, , I was supposed to give you shock na, , so sorry yaar, , ye sweet-2 si maaneet moments finish hi nahi hoti…..whole part aise hi chala gaya….. chalo koi na…. agle part mein shock le lena….hehehe, , arey don't worry, shock hoga but aagey jakar sweet ho jayega, , arey lovey dovey updates jo milenge... hehehe... long part na...???

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

update maneet romance and teasing and confession and promise to each other love it do next soon