a poem that suits a completely.plz read!!

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Posted: 21 years ago
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A poem that suits angad completely.i m open to all suggestions!


Once there was a time,
When luv was just a myth
It just wasn't for real,
For me it didn't exist
Till the day u came into my life
And forced me to think twice
Your angelic smile and innocence did tricks
When we were separated,it made me sick

I got a new life when u said u too love me
U opened my eyes so that I could see,
What real beauty could be like
Though u weren't my type.
We spent many happy moments together,
I wanted just to be with u forever
But god had thought something else
And my own family conspired a plan,
To make me think that u were after my wealth

After many protests,I finally gave in
And believed that your luv was not love but a sin,
After knowng the so called truth ,I hurt u purposefully
And agreed to marry some1 who could never mean what u were to me.
Some days before my marriage,I found out u are pregnant
I became so happy,I thought the sign was heaven-sent
But I ended up hurting u again
And myself stood drinking in the rain.

Finally my sister helped me kno the truth
And when I heard it,my whole world shook.
But when I reached u,it was too late,
And u had nothing left for me except for hate
For our child was no longer in the world
And I didn't even get to ask if it was a boy or a girl.
U told me u would not be happy till u destroyed me,
I cried silently and said, "I would get destroyed endless times,
If it makes u happy"

So I started working to boost your carrier and life,
Caring little of what happened to mine.
But I have had enough,
I want this to end
U and I are meant to be together
And this is how it should end!

Hope u guys liked it!
Luv
geet

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divya_123 thumbnail
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Posted: 21 years ago
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wow it exactly suits angad alot thanks for sharring dear 👏
OnlyHope thumbnail
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Posted: 21 years ago
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WOW.. excellent job geet..every single line I read, I got flashbacks of KYPH from the beginning till now..its awesome!

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Posted: 21 years ago
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Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. Awsome👏

Have u written it on ur own??????

Angad's angel thumbnail
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Posted: 21 years ago
#5
that really suits angad thanx for sharing
Selina thumbnail
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Posted: 21 years ago
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Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, this it totally made for Angad. 👏
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Posted: 21 years ago
#7
WOWWW! 👏👏 sum talent u got there! it's so cute 😊 GREAT WORK!!
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Posted: 21 years ago
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WOW!!👏 That is totally made for Angad, thanx for sharing...

geet thumbnail
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Posted: 21 years ago
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thx. n yes,i have written it on my own
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Posted: 21 years ago
#10
woww!! very nice...keep it up👏👏👏

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