ArHi FF:1: The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES - Page 99

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Posted: 12 years ago

My dear friend told u i won't sleep now and will keep visiting the inn ... love absolutely love all ur updates and love the symbolism of shadow withdrawing from khushi's touch...

Though you think I'm not nice

Please pause and think twice

Though you may fail to see,

A heart still beats deep inside me,

Though you anger me,

Your one tear drains all my energy

Though I lie when I say the contrary,

Yet your touch thrills me

Though I pretend to hate you in daylight

Dreams of you keep me awake at night

Though I ask you to flee

Yet to my flower you are the bee.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shakethebiscuit

i love your FF, in this life of mine many things are not going smooth... doctor telling us we cant have our own child.. my mother loosing her job and my father too (he got a new job just last month)...our in laws depend on us for even their basic...and we having big part of our savings gone to docs for surgery trying to find even minimal chances of having our own baby...this ff is one of the things keep me out of stress...or say help me think something out of it...

please dont mention stoping it...please

i may sound silly...but still


Dear Shakethebiscuit,
hope u wont mind me replying to ur comment..altho v dnt knw/talked to eachothr,evr,bt i cudnt help reply to u.. its indeed vry heart breaking to hear wts goin on in ur life..bt dearest i hope u dnt lose hope n keep fighting n paving a way fr urslf n ur loved ones.. sumtmz, God tends to test our faith in Him,n lyf fills wth pain..bt He's watching ovr us n smiling all along.. u hang in there n dnt let nethg shake ur belief in Him..miracles happen, humans cnt fore tell ne ones lyf/future.. i hv seen it happen all da time!! science cnt explain miracles..it doesnt hv dat kinda knowledge..miracles r God's gift,His blessing! they're all around us,v jst fail to acknowledge thm.. let time decide da best fr u..ur hardshps vl pay off..sumdy u'll luk back n none of dis vl matter,coz u'll b vry happy in ur life! alws remember;
''EVERY DARK CLOUD HAS A SILVER LINING'' ..let da rain pour hard..let ur faith guide u thru it..n thn u'll see ur silver lining n da rainbow too.. all my prayers r wth u alws..
❤️🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shass


Dear Shakethebiscuit,
hope u wont mind me replying to ur comment..altho v dnt knw/talked to eachothr,evr,bt i cudnt help reply to u.. its indeed vry heart breaking to hear wts goin on in ur life..bt dearest i hope u dnt lose hope n keep fighting n paving a way fr urslf n ur loved ones.. sumtmz, God tends to test our faith in Him,n lyf fills wth pain..bt He's watching ovr us n smiling all along.. u hang in there n dnt let nethg shake ur belief in Him..miracles happen, humans cnt fore tell ne ones lyf/future.. i hv seen it happen all da time!! science cnt explain miracles..it doesnt hv dat kinda knowledge..miracles r God's gift,His blessing! they're all around us,v jst fail to acknowledge thm.. let time decide da best fr u..ur hardshps vl pay off..sumdy u'll luk back n none of dis vl matter,coz u'll b vry happy in ur life! alws remember;
''EVERY DARK CLOUD HAS A SILVER LINING'' ..let da rain pour hard..let ur faith guide u thru it..n thn u'll see ur silver lining n da rainbow too.. all my prayers r wth u alws..
❤️🤗


I could not help replying to ur comment either, I hope u wont mind!! It is very sad to know about the problems u are going through...Please be strong and God cant be that cruel... keep ur hopes high dear... Everything will be fine and some day u will look back take this as one of ur tough times which taught u something or the other... Good luck and all the best!!! 👍🏼
However I am glad, even in the midst of all you found this FF as a stress reliever..
And coming to the FF, on behalf of the writer and all the readers I would like to welcome you to our world of Arhi!! we all look forward to see you... 😃 Welcome dear...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kushipugly

hi, its me again😃

in the show, they can't even manage the role of a single pet Laxmi & i guess shaym has cooked its biryani for being laxmi close to kushi🤢😆
& here you are managing & potraying 2 lovely pets fortune & shadow👏
Shadow, i can't even deescribe how much i m in love with this pet, a dark masculine , tough, brave , intelligent , a reserved nature ,loving & a loyal horse just like his master.
i think i m having a huge crush on shadow🤪🤪😆
yes, shass is right😆 how will lordy lord react when he will find shadow hovering around kushi😆


HHhmmm u got me thinking here!! Shadow and Lord Arnav...
Dark- for sure "names says it all"😆 (shadow is dark 😉)
Masculine- no doubt about it... who would not, after all the hard work and running around carrying his lord!!
Brave- hats off... if it wasnt for shadow they would have survived the bear attack
Tough- Indeed!! he has survived with Lordy lord for so long... we have to give this to him... he is tough man!! 😉
Reserved- ya even he does not give away his feelings that well
Loving- "thinking" both needs to work on that...
Loyal- No doubt about that... one command all it needs!!

Now the Bottom Line...
Shadow is the animal version of our Lordy Lord Arnav... buuhahahaha... 😉😆😃
I really hope he does not fall for Khusi... that wont be good for him!! 😆😉 who will save him from his lord's wrath!!! hahahahahaha...
Great post Khusipugly!! I enjoyed replying... 👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: khusiarnav


HHhmmm u got me thinking here!! Shadow and Lord Arnav...
Dark- for sure "names says it all"😆 (shadow is dark 😉)
Masculine- no doubt about it... who would not, after all the hard work and running around carrying his lord!!
Brave- hats off... if it wasnt for shadow they would have survived the bear attack
Tough- Indeed!! he has survived with Lordy lord for so long... we have to give this to him... he is tough man!! 😉
Reserved- ya even he does not give away his feelings that well
Loving- "thinking" both needs to work on that...
Loyal- No doubt about that... one command all it needs!!

Now the Bottom Line...
Shadow is the animal version of our Lordy Lord Arnav... buuhahahaha... 😉😆😃
I really hope he does not fall for Khusi... that wont be good for him!! 😆😉 who will save him from his lord's wrath!!! hahahahahaha...
Great post Khusipugly!! I enjoyed replying... 👍🏼

animal version of Arnav😆😆
yes, he indeed is just like his masterDay Dreaming
shadow can't dare to flirt with kushi but just like his master he will soon fall in love with a crazy neighing horsy😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shass


Khushipugly first thg 1st..u'll b my sunshine frm dis day onwrds..hope u wont mind me calling u dat.. 2nd, what? u thnk i decode da FF well? u knw,i hv been in constant argument wth Lin,ovr my comments..i alws preferred being a silent reader bt lyk u lin's work hs inspired me to scribble a few words,dat i keep struggling wth.. i'm being jst me! i dnt undrstnd a thg abt symbolism, i kp to thgs i get dats all.. u too do da same..u try to b you..write ur heart out.. spread smiles.. i dnt undrstnd hw dat mks me better thn u?😲 u r indeed a sweet heart n there's no denying dat n u write well equally.. evry1 hs his/her own strengths..n well,altho writing isnt our forte, v atlst hv a good taste😉..[ Lin r u listening?].. so nvr under estimate da power of a beautiful heart,it has da ability to touch othr's heart n change their life.. n u r dat, sunshine!! may God bless u alws !!

P'S; i nvr lykd horses..bt i thnk i hv a crush on Shadow too😉.. lets see wt happens nxt..am all excited.😃

P.P.S; u thnk lin vl mind,us talking lyk dis? she said she wntd to hv da thread fr hr FF only..bt she also said v cud use it as ours,so i'm taking da liberty of going a li'l out of da way.. hope u forgv me lin..



thankyou😊🤗 OMGShockedyou know aquiline , have u met herShockedShocked OMG, i will be honoured & privilaged even if i get a chance to get a glimpse of such an awosome writer when i see some ff being top of hall of fame voted top by readers, i m actually amazed of their taste. Yes, aquline ff is epic, this story is not written anywhere in IF & we are lucky to find this story & become its reader😊 our taste is indeed good😉😆
aquiline, plz don't mind. Plz believe us, believe me i never act this crazy on other ffs. Its all yr ff fault that we are crossing th boundry of sanity😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
book markng to read. will comment later. i dont know a better way to bookmark.

I have read 40 chapters and must convey that you are a fabulous writer. 👍🏼 I loved every update till now. You have weaved the reel characters very well in your story and I could see how it is somewhat parallel to the plot of ipkknd uptil now although it so much different.

I very much liked your style of descriptive story telling, the minute details of the appearance of the location and the characters their surroundings etc. that it gets so easy to visualise the entire scene.

Your story has got me totally hooked ...

Is the lady in the hood Arnav's mother? just a vague idea, ofcourse i will know once i catch up with the remaining story..


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Posted: 12 years ago

Hasty thanks to a few dear ones: I am honoured by Keerthi's excitement at being first and at liking the chapter and AngelDream's frequent visits despite my failure to PM her, dear indiavizion, incessantly-hovering-around-the-inn saomom, rockingsoni, dearest Vrinda, sweet Sonia, dear farha, sakadafi, purplelove (for whose comments I await eagerly), casker, Shalve, dear allzwell, sariarshi, sweet darya, hatelove……..

Breeze's unexpected visit to the Inn……. and, yes dear, you have touched quite cleverly on the points of Nani's "flower tale" and of Kushi's address to the "Heart of Shadow" and a little more digging and you will have unearthed the answer to the hints! You are a smart one and a very dear one to me!

Arshy4ever deserves a separate mention for actually "decoding," in a most literary manner, the essence of the entire FF through a single word mentioned in the chapter. By picking on Nani's remark of "fools with reasons," arshy4ever attempted to deconstruct the entire FF's very foundation as based on that one word "reason". I have no words to thank you by, dear…..my eyes are misty and I must not let my voice be affected by tears for I have a chapter to narrate here.

Lady Sophie with the gentle heart and the sad eyes, who always understands Lady Anjali in a deeper way, is someone I am willing to listen to enlighten my moulding of characters in their richness!

Jammy dear who is on a marathon to read up to my latest chapters has reached up to chapter 30 and has been kind enough to pick out what she liked the best in each chapter and wishes to ponder over. Thank you also, dear, for liking my FF cover image and its tagline……I shall reply to you in detail when I find time.

Dingle has also been struggling to catch up and I am pretty pleased to know she has succeeded so far! Waiting for you to show up at the Inn, dear Dingle!!

Kushipugly, my most enthusiastic reader (and the sunshine of this FF in the words of Shas), a separate mention to you for your extreme devotion to my tale and my creation of Arhasia. Your query whether Lord Arnav knows Kushi is the reason behind so many changes will be revealed soon in one of the chapters to come…….and I especially loved how, apart from everyone else, you loved the subtle scene of Nani caressing Kushi's hair, showing your eye for details that matter! I love your description of Shadow in parallel with Lord Arnav and, yes, *chuckle* your crush on the horse now! It is not language or knowledge that I look for in my readers. Like Shas said, what I want is the words of love from your heart for me and my tale…..You give that to me, dear, and that is enough and more for me! And no, Shas has not seen me but our conversations do make it feel like we have! The only person in the Forum who has seen me is Aura (who updated a few chapters when I could not) and arshy4ever had come close enough to meeting me but we didn't.

Kushiarnav: Your stalking skills are vastly making me feel so valued and let me tell you, I could never be more happier than when you assure me my tale matters a lot to you! And sheesh! You need to stop praising me a lot! Sometimes you and Shas and kushipugly go so overboard with all the admiration that I need to stand apart and admire "this Aquiline" as though she is someone else!! I so loved the way you explained in detail kushipugly's amazing pick of words for Shadow and I am proud to tell you, you are so better in understanding Shadow than me! Animal version of Arnav!!! Let me chuckle with joy with kushipugly!

Shas: Your world is in my FF thread and you are so taking advantage, aren't you? *wink* I love it actually because you are there when I cannot be, appreciating and consoling when I personally cannot……And above all……do you know how happy I was when Sona quoted your words and found it worth replying to! I love everything you write and it makes me proud to see another pat your back because your timid-tiny-comments need to be patted upon!!

Sona: Thank you for delving into others' comments as well and providing them with the backing of your insight! And yes, your appreciation for Kushi and Shadow in the last chapter is clearly lovely! Looking forward to more happy days with you in the Cave!

ASRandKKGSRFan: You're a Senior Member now! Congrats! I love the depth in which you decipher character psychologies and relationship equations. You always make me look at my characters in a different way. Would love to reply to you in detail when I get time….

Hellgirl: You actually blended the tag of our show into the plot of Arhasia? Which is undeniably fitting too for it is the same tale in a different twist! I also love, dearly, how you keep yourself active in the Inn and I hope a Comrade or two did have a snack with you before leaving! I would have loved to join you but I was snacking away with my own Chotey!

Hoopoe: You always amaze me with the thoughts you present. Yes, the first-time-pleasure-reading and the second-time-deep-reading does have its own inclinations. And I am thrilled by the points you have put out this time for they are very vital with concern to the coming chapters and the plot and I was more amazed that you had actually gone and quoted lines from the Pointer in the Plot I had given long back! Indeed, your dedication and eye for things amazes me!

Medharees: The music of your words always calm and excite me at the same time, Poetess of Arhasia! The paradoxical truths in your latest poem had me so affected that my brother stood at the door, frowning at me, and asked, "Are you crying?"

Kushipugly, Kushiarnav, Sona, Shas: You guys have totally been all over the FF thread and I am only happy to say that if it is for our Ahrahsia and for the sake of our Arhasian Comrades in need of words…..carry on my beauties!

On behalf of all my friends, welcoming Varshapan and bablio, in advance to our happy little gathering in the Cave!

Chapter Eighty Six: On Lightning

The war was in its heightened climax and the enemies were losing. The contending officer did not like the look of how things were and how triumph was fast slipping through his fingers. He yelled his battle-cry aloud and, on his horseback, raced into the mob of fighting soldiers, scattering the lot, and then he struck his sword through hearts that did not belong under his commandership. His wrathful 'last resort' to not be defeated, however, was short lived.

Through the fog of gunpowder and loud cries of sword lashings, emerged a dark uniformed soldier on his white horse whose mane and sides were smeared with soot and dirt from the struggles of the war they had been fighting.

The contending officer had pierced his sword through the heart of an enemy soldier before him and was turning to attack another, when this 'rider on the white horse' rushed at him and, before the officer could react or fight back, the rider's sharp steel had made its way through the home of his heart, stopping its incessant heartbeat and killing him on the spot.

The rider watched as his war-wrought enemy slumped lifelessly onto the brown horseback and the alarmed horse raced into the mad fury of the fighting soldiers with the corpse upon his back.

The General leered through the blood splattered on his face, and lifting his sword into the air cried out to his battalion, "Victory! Victory is ours!"

The reviving slogan was picked up by his men and as they fought, they yelled it in the face of their enemy before slicing a sword through the other.

The war was soon over and the triumphant band of men retired to their campsite for the famished to be feed, the wounded to be healed and the dedicated dead to be buried ceremoniously.

General Jha was the only one who had not returned to the camp after the victory.

He was instead racing over the grassland, away from the war-ridden ground, on his white horse.

As the wind rushed at them, his sweat-doused hair fell upon his forehead and he leaned forward on his horse. "Go for the wind, Lightning!" he called over her loud hoofs, "Feel the freedom!"

The afternoon sun glinted over the land as the white horse careened over the grassland. As they raced on, he closed his eyes and his tired mind slipped into a muddle of thoughts at the end of which two faces stood out……

He opened his eyes and pulled at his horse's reins.

Lightning dug her hoofs into the ground, coming to a sudden standstill. He dismounted from her back and took a few tired steps forward before dropping to sit on the warm sunlit ground, cross-legged.

Lightning's snout nudged his shoulder and he looked at her from the corner of his eye, "I cannot help it, Lightning. I cannot do without her."

The horse leaned down and began to eat the grass beside him, passing her time in feeding herself for the next battle.

Her Master looked across the land before him, pulling the grass near his knee, and spoke as if in a daze, "She is a bewitching young girl, pulling at the fibres of my heart with just those wondrous eyes of hers."

He looked at his horse, who was eating away unconcernedly, "You saw her that day, didn't you? Didn't you feel yourself being awakened by her eyes?"

The horse looked up at him, munching on the mouthful grass, while some tufts fell from the side of her mouth as she chewed upon them.

The General grunted, "What do you know, Lightning? You only care for food, rides and freedom, right?"

He patted his horse's head that was still hovering above the ground in an attempt to resume her meal, "Ah, freedom, Lightning? You think we have it in this land of war? And what after the war? You think I can return back to that Castle in this state I am in? Do you know, Lightning? These wars are making my wretched nightly transformations worse."

He sighed, stood up and gazed into the sky, his hands on his hips, "I cannot return to the Castle, Lightning. Not until this curse of mine is done with."

Then he mounted on his horse and they rode off, over the land, to the enclosures of the campsite.

As they rode, the General felt the cool wind, rushing at him, dry the blood on his face. He cherished his rides on Lightning, whether he was riding on her through a war ground or over a pleasant grassland. Lightning was a horse willing to carry her master to any end he wanted to go, even to the moment of his death.

"You'll carry me to love too, Lightning………. to the end of this wretched curse," assured her rider, and the prophecy made upon the white horse lingered in the air, as the white horse flashed over the land, leaping in the bright light of the sunlight, its rider a dark silhouette upon her white form.

I know many of you like (some even having a crush!) on Arnav's Shadow. But the loyalty of the black horse to his Master and the Master's bond with his horse is the very same that the white horse and her accursed Master shares……Hope you will understand this. To all those who do, here is a picture I made for you to understand the characters better through their horses:

Why am I hurrying? Simply coz it's time we begin the second thread and as soon as you reach this ship to dock at the 149th page, you can wait for a pigeon to inform you of the unveiling of the second ship to voyage your through this tale that is dear to our hearts! *dancing happily* Excited to begin the new thread!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
R...yay, me first...*suddenly realizes that have missed out on the previous update and runs to read it first*

Chapter 85 was great..dunno how I missed it 😭 .. was nani khushi convo symbolic??? Love the name fortune, so analogous to laxmi...
khushi s pain seeing Arnav s and la s intimacy was such an awww moment, can just about hear the sad rabba ve in my head..I noticed that the first lord didn't seem to be returning la s moves.. 😉 ..

Chapter.86.. Didn't understand much, except that shyam is obsessed with khushi, and maybe that he will go down in the pursuit of khushi...
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