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Part 2

A week has been passed since the marriage event but Geet was still in dilemma whether all that what happened there was a dream or reality. She was thinking whether a person name Don ever exists or all were right that it was her illusion. All especially her parents were saying that it was the side effect of watching action movies that she was hallucinating movie characters everywhere now but her heart and mind said that it was not a dream and a person name don was there and Pareet was kidnapped but one question was still there then how come she returned and even got married too??? And for now this was the deadlock for her. She was not able to shrug these thoughts away and was helpless.

Right now she was sitting beside the window staring at the palm tree outside still thinking about that unknown person Don when her mother entered in her room. Her parents were hell worried about her. So her mother was here to talk with her now. She called her softly "Geet" but she was so engrossed in her thoughts that she did not pay attention to her. Rano shook her and that bring her out of her thoughts "Yes mom. When and why you came???". Rano shook her head "Geet I am here for last 15 minutes but you were lost in your thoughts. Why don't you forget that incident??? Forget that bacha. Forget it as it was an illusion" She lovingly caressed her hair. "but that was not Ma. That was a reality. How many times I have told u guys that I was not hallucinating. A person name don was there. I saw him kidnapping Pareet" but her mother raised her hand to stop her, "enough, we had enough of your silly talks". Geet opened her mouth to say something but her mother stopped her again, "No more arguments. This chapter is closed forever. We don't want to listen anything abt it now. I hope you will understand it". She stood up to leave but Geet stopped her "You did not tell me reason of your being here??" Rano hit her forehead with her hand "look, you made me to forget everything. I was here to tell you that pack your luggage we are going to Rasool Pur. We have to attend a marriage there. Its 2 week long trip so keep all the necessary things. Don't make any fuss that you forgot this or that here. So do your packing now. We have to leave early in the morning. So be ready, we are leaving around 5:30 Am,",saying this Rano truned to leave when she heard a shocking voice of Geet. "mom". Rano turned to meet her daughter but she too was shocked to see Geet's expressions but she knows her daughter well so waited patiently for her to speak. "What are you saying mom??? Where are we going???? She asked demandingly but rano was her mother "I don't think you have a hearing problem Geet??? I told you we are going to Rasool pur to attend a marriage that to for two weeks. now if u get it. Will you please finish your packing quickly". "But mom Why Rasool pur That too to attend a marriage. Don't you think one marriage experience is enough for me to get a lesson of my life???? And most important It was your and dad's plan na?? both of you were goin there to attend that stupid marriage??? Then why are you dragging me in this now????" "Yes it was me and your dad who has to attend that marriage but your dad think that Pareet's marriage left a bad impact on you and you need distraction. So he decided to take you with us so you can enjoy" but Geet was more shocked now "enjoy that too in that village. I am happy here mom. Please tell dad I don't want to go. Please please." But Rano was determined " No mean no Geet. You are coming and that's an order." She put her hand on the door knob but then turn towards Geet who was still standing there "and I want you downstairs sharp at 5:30 am with your luggage" saying this she left shutting the door behind. Geet self thought "Chal Geet puttar be ready to attend another marriage. If you exist then I will kill you Don." She did not know fate decided to give her another opportunity to meet DON and to fulfill her promise of killing him.

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This is the scene of a room a typical bachelor's room. A group of boys were there in the room. The room had a single bed in the corner which was full of dirty cloths, books, tennis rackets, bat, cricket kit and much more things like this. A boy was sitting no actually hiding in the stuff trying to sort it out. Another boy was sitting in corner trying to flirt with a girl on FB. On his right side a boy was sitting beside the wall he was reading a magazine. Should I have to explain what kind of magazine???? To his left another boy was busy texting someone from his mobile. He was lying on the carpet keeping his head on a pile of ironed cloths. The hymning voice from the washroom said that it is occupied and the owner is in a very good mood, singing and taking his time to take a shower. But one person was there who did not like it so he was continuously banging the wash room door but it seems like it is useless as no one including the person in the washroom was paying any attention to him. The room was echoed with the sound of tv and computer and radio and Chikni chameli was dancing on the Tv and shakira was shouting hips don't lie through computer speakers and a Punjabi FM channel was playing Punjabi munnde. So it was difficult to tell what exactly was playing on the Tv. And a BOY was sleeping peacefully in all this mess.


Suddenly the mobile of the boy who was lying on the carpet rang. He lazily took the mobile and see the caller but then straightened himself like he touched some electric wire. By the way the name showing the caller ID was "Danger 440 volts". He said "Silence guys," but no one listened him. He shouted again "shut up all. Be quite. Its Baybay's call" and the word baybay did the magic as within a second there was a pin drop silence in the room. He answered the call the conversation was "sat sri akal baybay. G baybay. But baybay. I want to stay' as u wish G. and finally ok bayabay. We will be there." saying this he cut the call. He looked at the boys who were staring him. "Guys baybay called three of us. She wants us to be there by this afternoon. So we have to leave now. AJ and Rishi come on guys. Lets move." Saying this he went to cupboard and picked 3 back packs. He stuffed some shirts and jeans which were lying on bed in the bag and moved towards the boy who was busy with his laptop. He was now all ready to leave. He banged the washroom door and said "its enough Aj. Hurry up we have to leave for the PIND(Village)". Wash room door opened and a boy came out. He was handsome and muscular guy. "Lets go guru. I am ready". three of them left for the village unknown to the fact why baybay actually called them there????

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Edited by LonelyPlannet - 12 years ago

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