Pt1/2'MG Jatt and Juliette'pg32/50'New thread add

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Hi all
well I am Noorie her, to torture again with my work. so here I am with another concept. I dont know what it is mean if it is an FF/SS/OS. will decide later 😃.
ok why this FF/SS

1: I am fed up of reading rude, arrogant and businessman Maan. I want some simple one. A simple fun loving guy. Typical Punjabi munda.
2: I am here in punjab and I am loving it. My veer g told me abt panga's he and his gand usually do and It motivated me to gave u a Maan like that. and believe me half of the incident here are real life incidents. Yes Maan's character is inspired with my Veer g. he is like what maan is here. A typical Punjabi guy

3: Name I knw a lot of u are thinking what kind of name is this. Well I recently watched this movie and I loved it so thought to make this title of my FF/SS.

P.S. May b there is a bit or more punjabi words. cant help myself as I am in punjab and this story has a punjabi back ground so bear it plzzz
and hit like if u like it

P.S.S Its a cute story not like my previous one ISHQ THE PURE LOVE. and Fai its for u 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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prologue below



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Jutt and Juliette

Prologue

The whole house was illuminated with lights and flowers. There was a great hustle and bustle, a typical Punjabi wedding scene. Children were running here and there playing hide and seek. Women were busy in gossiping typical women talk. They are less bothered abt the surroundings busy in talking about other ladies who were not present there. Men as usual were busy discussing politics and cricket matches, talking abt patrol prices and India's chances of winning world cup. The board outside the house was showing as "balveet kaur weds villait singh". Barat had arrived and now ppl from both bride and groom sides were organizing themselves. Family of bride with their other relatives was ready to welcome the groom and his family. Girls were standing in a row with flower baskets in their hands to welcome the Baarat with flower petals. Here on Groom side, brothers and friends of groom were there helping him to set his Sherwani, Pagri and Sehra. One of them was holding a heavy sword which groom will hold throughout the wedding ceremony. Groom was an ordinary man not so handsome but over all a gud looking guy and it looks like he is bit nervous. men who have to play band were setting theit instruments and organizing them.

A little far from all this a group of 4 or 5 young boys were standing in a circle. It seems like they are planning something. A handsome guy of his early twenties was giving some instruction when one of the boys interrupted him. "Don, what abt if someone caught us." Don who seems to be the leader of the gang gave him a scary glare so that the boy gulped hard "no one will doubt us until you do something stupid. Now listen guys if someone from bride side questions you tell them you are from groom side and same will go if someone from groom side does it. We have the last chance so no mistake. Its now or never fo us. We will go with our plan 1. I hope everything will go according to our plan but if by chance we fail then plan 2. Ok. So everyone put on ur Bluetooth and its time to show some action." He grinned and the other two guys standing beside him laughed loudly. Suddenly the band sound brought them out of their discussion. He looked at the Barat procession and then the boys there "ok boys its time to action. Good luck. AJ and Rishi come on guys. Lets do it.." he stopped and the other two boys he called AJ and Rishi said unison "before dying" and then laughed out loudly. Soon all of them were a part of marriage procession. Doing bhangra in front of Groom's horse like this is the wedding of their beloved friend but no one knows that they are here to ruin it.

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Finally all the baaraties settled down and refreshment cold drinks start to be served. There were noises and voices of chattering people were echoing the wedding hall but away from this some boys were inside the house peeping in different rooms. It looks like they are looking for something or someone. One of them opened a door and his eyes glinted in joy as he found what he was looking for. He entered the room and closed the door behind him. On the noise of shutting door Girl who was in the room looked up. She was in a red bridal dress sitting in front of the mirror. She was shocked to saw intruder like she was not expecting him there. She stood up in horror and said pointing at him "You??? What are you doing here??" "I am here to take u away from all this. Come lets go" saying this he held her hand and dragged her towards the door but girl did not show any movement. He looked at her with confused eyes. She said "Its over now. There is nothing left to save. No use of this now. I am not coming. Go before my family see u." but the boy was adamant "how everything finished" he demanded, "Will u be able to forget your past??? Anyway I am not here to listen any of ur excuse. Come lets go" he pulled her towards her again but bride pushed him again. "Don't you understand damn it. Its my wedding today and here you come from nowhere to remind me abt past. Go away I don't want any shadow of my past on my present. So leave." Suddenly someone entered the room in such a hurry that she did not notice the boy. Boy looked up to see girl in green and blue suit she has some boxes in her hand that her face was covered. She put the boxes on the bed and then looked at the bride "Good Pareet u r not ready yet?? Baarat arrived and I think they will call u in abt 15 minuts and here u r not ready yet." She did not noticed the boy and went to Pareet to help her with her heavy duppata, then she noticed bride staring somewhere. She followed her gaze and saw the boy standing there. "Hey who are u and what are you doing here in bride's room" she asked but seems boy did not listened her. She marched towards the boy who was awed by her beauty and watching her with amazing expressions on his face. she waved her hand infront of his face "Hey mister I am talking to u?? Hello any body home??? What is ur name" "beautiful" he uttered still lost in her. "What??? your name is beautiful???" she burst in laughter "oh God how can a boy has a name beautiful. Are you kidding?? Tell me the name???" "Gorgeous" he was still lost in her. "What I think its high time u wake up." She nudged him and this brought him back from his gaga land. "so Mr. beautiful will u plz tell me what are u doing here" "what the hell who is this beautiful" he snapped and extended his hand towards her "Hi I am don and I am here to kidnap the Bride" she again burst out in laughter "Nice joke now will u plz leave. Pareet needs to be on the Mandap in abt 15 minutes" saying this she tried to push him but he did not move an inch. "I think its u who need to move because I am serious and no need to worry abt her she is not going to marry any XYZ now. She is coming with me" saying this he held bride's hand and start moving towards the exit but Girl stop her "look Mr. if it is a joke then a very bad joke. Leave her" she tried to pull bride towards her who was continuously struggling to free herself from his grip. He pushed her aside and threw the struggling bride on his shoulder and moved towards the door then turned and said "stay where u r" but girl rushed behind him and and start shouting "veer g uncle g look some one is kidnapping Pareet" Boy turned around angrily. He put bride down and glared her "u idiot. What the hell are u doing." But suddenly there were running footsteps coming nearer. He again pick the uncurious bride and start moving but girl hold him tight. He pushed her back and she collided with wall and fell down. There was blood on her forehead. Someone shouted "Geet" from a distance. He turned around to see but when he saw bride's family coming there he started running. " I am bringing her. Bring the car to the back entrance of the house" he spoke on the blue tooth and run towards the backyard. The girl was still lying there uncurious.


My words with u

hi so here it is. plz tell me u like it or not. Thanks

Edited by LonelyPlannet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey here is it
a very light and romantic story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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would love to read this new maan...but there are lot of ss / ff in which Maan is not that typical arrogant business maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wohaa loved it Noorie
nice one
again somthing unique
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zeal-DD

would love to read this new maan...but there are lot of ss / ff in which Maan is not that typical arrogant business maan

I know it dear well I am talking abt most of
and no offense. I know there are a lot of FF with different character but I just want to show some Punjabi type
U knw what I am here in India enjoying in Punjab so I am bewitched with the love I got 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey Noorie
one of my friend made this for u

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Posted: 12 years ago
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the boy is Maan I guess and he kidnapped bride...

I guess for his friend...because I don't think that Maan will love any preet...
and if he loves preet then why he ogling at Geet...

very interesting...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is nice and different.
Continue soon.
And please Pm me when you update next.
Thanks :D

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