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Part 1

He put the bride carefully in the car and turned towards his gang who has worried expressions on their faces. "What happened" he asked them while moving to the driving seat Where AJ and Rishi were standing, waiting for him. He give them a high five and said "Mission accomplished. in car boys we have to move away from here" one of his friends try to say something but AJ pushed him in the car "we will listen all ur Important talks but first have to move otherwise all her brother will wash us in such a way that after that You will fear from the name of wedding." Saying this he pushed Punnu in car and car went towards an unknown destination.

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Here Geet is still unconscious. All the bride family was gathered around her with worried faces. All the people present there were wondering that what exactly happened to Geet. A doctor was called who was checking her now andd all the family members including Geet's mama papa were there around her bed.


Geet's Monologue

When I entered in the pareet's room I did not notice anyone there as I was in a genuine hurry as Baraat was arrived and aunty, Pareet's mother asked me to check whether pareet was ready or not. Pareet is the daughter of one of my mom's close friend and that was the sole reason of my presence here. Otherwise I don't like this kind of functions much. I think marriage is a very personal matter of two ppl so whats the idea of inviting a hundred of ppl???? And I personally think I could utilize this time in a better way than wasting it here. I could do my assignments and more important I think my studies are more important than this stupid marriage. so as I entered in bride's room I was surprised to see her standing there like a statue. She was staring at something. On following her gaze, I saw a boy in her early twenties standing there. No doubt he was a handsome guy with strong and well toned body but the thing irritated me was his gaze. I hate boys who stare girls like hungry dogs as they want to eat them up through eyes. I asked him who is he and what is he doing here? But he was still lost in me and this added fuel to my anger. On asking abt his name his reply was enough for me to blast. He said "Beautiful". First I was shocked how come a boy has a name like this but then I realized that he is giving compliment to me. I decided to play long and nudged him hard. It brought him out of his lalala land. And to my surprised he talked with a strange confidence and attitude as he told me that he is here to kidnap Pareet. I thought it as some prank played by some of groom's stupid friends. But he gave me another shock as he pulled bride towards him, through her on his shoulder and moved towards the door. I tried to stop him but he asked me to keep quit but how can I??? I have to act fast. I ran behind and started shouting loudly for help. It made him angry. He rushed towards me and tried to keep my mouth shut. He was hell angry but my shouting and his anger gave me some time to ask for help and the same was my purpose. I heard some running footsteps and he noticed it too. So he again picked unconscious Pareet in his arms and started moving towards exit. I once again ran behind him and tried to pull his shirt to stop him. But this time he did not stop but pushed me hard to free himself. I fell back with a powerful thrush of his and hit the wall behind and next I remember is darkness overtaking me.

I felt like the darkness around me started to vanish. I could hear very feeble voice of ppl. Seem like a group of ppl was talking far away. I tried to open my eyes but my eyelids were very heavy and refused to open. The voices were clear now. I felt like someone is calling me from the top of a hill. I tried to open my eyes again and this time I succeed to open them. It took me some time to adjust my eyes with the light. I was in a in a room totally stranger for me. A group of people were there watching me with worried eyes. I recognized my mom dad there. What I am doing here, I thought then reality hit me. Oh my God I was here to attend pareet's wedding and Pareet is kidnapped by some Goon name Don. I tried to get up but mom insisted me to lay down. I jerked myself and Shouted "Pareet she is kidnapped".

End of Monologue

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"She is gaining conscious" doc said when he noticed a very slight movement her eyelids. Everyone in the room sighed in relief and looked at her who was struggling to open her eyes and finally she opened her eyes. She looked around it looks like she is trying to recollect what happened and then suddenly jerked up saying "Parett she is kidnapped" "What" was the first reaction from everyone present there. "Yes some Don was here and he took Pareet with her." Geet's mother tried to hold her back but she was nowhere to stop. She screamed again "why all of you are still standing here. Go get her. He kidnapped the bride". Geet's Father moved to doctor who himself was astonished with her weird behavior "Are you sure doctor that she did not got a head injury or something like that." "relax Mr. handa everything is fine. I think she is still in shock" doctor patted his shoulder but Mr handa was panicked "then why she is behaving like this" Doctor smiled "Trust me nothing to worry. She will be fine." here Geet's mother was trying to console her "Geet putter relax. Everything will be fine. Relax calm down mera bacha" but she wriggled again "Mama Don kidnapped the bride" Rano patted her "Relax putter" "how can I mama. Pareet is kidnapped and u are asking me to relax". Rano again held her "nothing happened Bacha. Everything is fine" "but Pareet" Geet again said. "I am fine Geet look I am here safe and sound. Someone put a hand on her shoulder she looked at the owner of the hand and and got the shock of her life. Pareet was standing there smiling. varmala vermin and Mangal sutaar were telling that she is married. A boy was standing next to her look like he is the Groom. Geet pointed at bride as she saw some ghost "Pareet". "yes I am pareet. How are you now. You missed the marriage. I told you be careful while walking. Look now what you have done to yourself." Pareet was caressing her hair while speaking nonstop. " but You were kidnapped. That don kidnapped you. He was here. He took you with him" Geet blabbered again. Pareet just put her hand on her shoulder "Geet I think you had a nightmare. I told you not to watch Indian movies. I think it's their affect." But Geet jerked her hand "No he was here YOU were kidnapped. I saw him kidnapping you." But she did not speak further as she felt dizzy and very next moment she was fainted again.

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Precap: Geet still thinking was Don a dream or reality???? 😉 and Meet Luv guru of the village 😉


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Edited by LonelyPlannet - 12 years ago
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yes for u two
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