Virmaan OS - virats first gift after marriage - 2 parts.

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Its just thought.. Im boring now.. So i thought some fun...
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:it is in 2 part...
Part 1
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AFTER PAGPHERA VIRAT REACHED RIHSHIKESH TO PICK MAANVI... HE CAN NOT GO WITH HER DUE TO HIS MUSIC AUDITION ... ALL CHOUDHRYS PROBLEM ARE SOLVED...
VIRIKA AND VIRMAAN COME OUT FROM HOUSE...
VIRAT- BHAI AAP BHABHI K SAATH CHALIYE MEIN AUR MAANVI DUSARI CAR ME AATE HAI...
M- KYU? ALAG ALAG KYU? HUM SAATH MEIN JA SAKTE HAI..
VIRAT-maanvi.. Virat try to give her sign..
M- kya maanvi?
Virika understand ...
Viren- thik hai bhai hum chalte hai... Tum baad mein aa jana..
Viren winked to him... Virat smiled and nodded ... Jeevika also smile and left with viren...
Maanvi- Di... Jiju... Virat ye kya kiya hum saath chalte to pure raste bore nahi hote...
Virat hugged her from back ...
V- hum saath hi to hai... Aur mein tumhe bore bhi nahi hone dunga...
Maanvi smile... Hit him on hand...
Maanvi- hum ghar k bahar khade hai kuch to sarm karo...
Virat turned her... Placed his hand on her neck...
V- bivi ho meri ...
Virat try to romance... Maanvi pussed him..
M- virat beeji...
Virat suddenly turned and maanvi runs and set in car...
Virat looked at her... Beeji ki bachchi.. Jana to mere sath hi hai...
In car... Virat drive the car... Maanvi injoyed out view...
V- maanvi mein tumhe itne time baad mil raha hu aur tum mujhe chod k baki sab mein intrese dikha rahi ho...
Maanvi turned and hugged his shoulder...virat smiled...
M- mene tumhe bahot miss kiya...
Virat smiled...
After few hours...
Virat stopped his car...
M- kya hua virat gaadi kyu roki?
V- batata hu ...
Virat opened car door for her..
Maanvi come out from car...
Virat close door and plased ribbon on her eyes..
M- virat ye kya kar rahe ho..
V- mujh pe bharosa hai?
Maanvi nodded...
Virat take her hand...
V- chalo...
Virat take manvi in beautiful place...
M- virat hum kaha hai...
V- ek minit...
Virat opened her blind fold from her eyes...
Maanvi opened her eyes... She is surprise ...to see beautiful plase... She slowly turned around and looked ...
Ek chhota sa zarna... Pahad se pani girraha tha...jiski ek alag hi dhun si baj rahi thi ... Samne green vadiya... Zarne k aas paas colour ful flowers... Titliyo ki awaz... Aas paas gulmohor k trees... Puri jami orange aur yellow petals se saji hui thi... Tree k niche rabbit khel rahe the... Ek ajib shi madhoshi si thi us mahol me...
At the end maanvi stop at virat who continuesly staring at her... With smile... Maanvi runs towards him and hugged...
V- gift kesa laga?
M- bahot bahot bahot achcha..
V- mein janta tha... Meri sherni ko ballons se jyada titliya... Aur 5 star hotel se jyada ye pasand aayega...
M- tum ne ye jagah dhundhi kese...
V- bas mil gai...
M- i love u...
V- i love u to...
After few minit...
V- ped ke niche chale...
Maanvi nodded...
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part 2 on the way... Its not real gift ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART ---2
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VIRMAAN SET IN EACHOTHERS ARMS...MAANVIS HEAD PLASED ON VIRATS CHEST FROM BACK... VIRAT SET WITH THE HELP OF BEHIND TREE... VIRATS HAND COVERED HER WAIST FROM BACK...MAANVI CLOSED HER EYES... VIRAT LOOKED AT HER HAND... HIS NAME...
ONE MAGICAL SMILE PRESENT ON THEIR LIPS...SUN STARRED TO ESCAPES IN HILLS... ATMOSPHERE BECOME LITTLE COLD... AIR PASSED FROM THEM...
AFTER FEW MINIT...
MAANVI OPEN HER EYES AND SAW VIRATS FINGER PLAY WITH HER CHUDA... SHE SMILE...
M-VIRAT...
V-HUMM...
M-HUME GHAR CHALNA CHAHIYE.. DI AUR JIJU GHAR PAHOCH CHUKE HONGE...
V-THODI DER RUKTE HAI...
HE RUBBED HIS FACE IN HER HAIR...

DUE TO THE WIND.. MAANVIS ONE SIDE HAIRS MOVED ON VIRATS FACE... VIRAT INJOYED IT... HE TRY TO PLASED HER HAIR BEHIND HER EAR... VIRAT MOVED HER HAIR FROM HER SHOULDER TO HER BACK... VIRATS FINGER TOUCHED MAANVIS SKIN... MAANVI SMILED .. SHE FEEL VIRATS BREATH ON HER NECK AND HIS FINGER PLAY WITH HER DORI...
MAANVI HIT VIRAT ON HIS CHEST THROUGH HER BACK AND TRY TO RUN... BUT VIRAT PULLED HER TOWARDS HIM... MAANVI TOP ON HIM...
M- VIRAT... HUME GHAR CHALNA CHAHIYE...
VIRAT NODDED NEGATIVELY ...
VIRAT TRY TO CLOSE HIM... BUT MAANVI PUSSED HIM BACK.. AND RUNS AROUND... TREE..
V- MAANVI... RUKO...MAANVI...
M- KYA HUA VIRAT... HA...
MAANVI NOT FEEL SHY BUT SHE CHECK HIS PATIENCE ...
FINALLY VIRAT GRABBED HER AND PINNED IN TREE... MAANVI TRY TO ESCAPES BUT VIRAT BLOCKED HER WAY... BOTH BREATHING FAST... VIRAT COME CLOSE TO HER...
MAANVI LOOKED IN HIS EYES...
VIRAT SMILE MISCHIEFLY...
VIRAT KISSED ON HER FOREHEAD ...MAANVI CLOSED HER EYES... VIRAT MOVED TO HER EYES... THEN VIRAT PLASED SOFT KISS ON HER BOTH CHEEKS...HIS HAND MOVED TOWARDS HER WAIST TO HER BACK... VIRAT CAME CLOSE TO HER LIPS... HERE MAANVI FEEL LITTLE SHY... SHE LITTLE PUSSED HIM AND TURNED HER FACE...
VIRAT FEEL LITTLE ANGRY AND HE TURNED HIS FACE ANGRILY ... MAANVI FEEL GUILTY...
MAANVI TURNED HIS FACE WITH HER HAND... BUT VIRAT LOOKED AWAY... MAANVI SMILE.. BCZ SHE KNOW HOW TO MELT HIM... MAANVI CAME CLOSE TO HIM AND PLASED SOFT KISS ON HIS CHEEKS... VIRAT SMILE... MAANVI LOOKED DOWN... THEN HIM... VIRAT COME CLOSE TO HER... NO GAP BETWEEN THEM... VIRATS LIPS MOVED TOWARDS HER... MAANVI MOVED HER HANDS AROUND HIS NECK... SHE CLOSED HER EYES...MAANVI FEEL HIS BREATH ON HER FACE... MAANVIS HEARTBEAT BECOME LITTLE FAST... VIRAT PLASED SOFT KISS ON HER LIPS...
VIRAT PULLED AWAY AND LOOKED AT HER... HE SLOWLY WHISPER THANK U...
MAANVI OPEN HER EYES AND LOOKED IN HIS EYES... SHE SMILED... VIRAT TOOK HER IN HIS ARM...
V- AB GHAR JA SAKTE HAI...
STILL THEY LOOKED IN EACHOTHERS EYES...
VIRAT SET HER IN CAR...
VIRAT STAR DRIVING ... MAANVI PLASED HER HEAD ON HIS SHOULDER... VIRAT PLASED HIS ONE HAND AROUND HER SHOULDER...
M- THANK U FOR GIFT... I LOVE U...
V- I LOVE U TOO...
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guys its not a long one... Im just bore with present track of virmaan so i try little fun...
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry for any grammaticaly mistakes ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome story dear:) 👍🏼
they r really adorable:)
loooved ur two shot story:)👏
plsss write more on them:):):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shilpa09

<font color="#ff3300">awesome story dear:) 👍🏼</font>

<font color="#ff3300">they r really adorable:)</font>

<font color="#ff3300">loooved ur two shot story:)👏</font>

<font color="#ff3300">plsss write more on them:):):)</font>


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sorry its not storys type ... I m bored with present virmaan track so i try to just fun... Im very bed in romenting part so... Hope u understand ...;)
By the way thanks..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice...cntinue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Again
i posted bcz i cannot send a links...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MeghaluvsKushal

nice...cntinue soon😊<div></div>


thanks... Its OS...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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where thsi stories continution??????? can u plzz tell me,,,,, ??????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: maclean

where thsi stories continution??????? can u plzz tell me,,,,, ??????


this was OS dear...
Just two parts...
She wrote when she is get bore...
Hahahha.. I also confused first when i raed it...

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