SS+KR FF Dancing Stars - Page 6

Awesome concept
continue soon n thnx for pm.

Hello guys' thank you very much for the love and support you all have shown to this story... I am very glad to see number of likes hit on the concept...I have written on SwaRon so far as I enjoy watching SwaRon but KriyAnsh is something that seems exciting to me so I have made this story in 4 persons...and for all those my friends and sisters who are KriyAnsh fans thought why I never give a try writing KriyAnsh so here I am trying my best to write on both... As SwaRon are integral part of my writings because SwaRon is the reason I have actually tried writing and I am actually happy with the support I have got for my idiotic writings from all friends, so this story is dedicated to all who have supported me and my stupid writings all the way even for once...I hope no SwaRon fans or KriyAnsh fans will be offended by this story as this story goes in the balance with 4 different individuals and their passion for dance... Now I really am not able to respond to comments individually as I am really very short of time as My exams are heading close and this one is written just because I was sick and I was told to sleep and have rest and take a break from studies for one day...so this one update was written ready so I am posting it because many of you are eager to read first part...but after this no more updates will be posted till 19^th November... After I come back all the update will be given to this one as well as my other FF on SwaRon...Thanks again to all for showing so much support and appreciation for the concept...

Pratik

DANCING STARS Part - 1

There is very huge add in the Paper & also ad hoardings were put up in the city and advertisements on TV saying:

"DANCE INSTRUCTORS REQUIRED WHO CAN TEACH VARIOUS DANCE FORMS TO UPCOMING TALENTS... THE INSTRUCTORS WILL BE JUDGED ON THE MERIT OF THEIR DANCING ABILITIES AS WELL AS ABILITY TO CHOREOGRAPH AND KNOWLEDGE OF BEATS...

IF YOU THINK YOU HAVE GOT TALENT THAT CAN CROSS ALL IMAGINATION BOUNDRIES THAN DO GIVE A SHOT BECAUSE WE CAN GURANTEE A BEST CARRIER IN DANCING FOR YOU WITH US...

CONTACT D VIRUS DANCE ACADAMY DEANS SUMIT WADHVA AND VINOD SINGH..."

There were two persons sitting in a room which was surrounded by a mirror wall in one side...the other side contained pictures of two persons with various personalities and performers...than one side had this huge picture of both of them inaugurating some place...and one side had this luxurious sitting of around 12 people...they were sitting there and discussing something... (They both are Sumit ' Vinod basic rulers of this story)

Vinod: Sumit yar this is mess we are in now... I mean how they both can leave us in the last minute...what about the bookings we have for the shows and what about the dance styles they were teaching to our juniors...

Sumit: Vinod I know this situation is really taking a tall out of us right now...

Vinod: I don't know whether it's practically possible to find a replacement for Ganesh and Geeta...they were one terrific duo as one was at the peak of his western dance and other was at her Indian and freestyle...it's not good Sumit what about our show in Goa in next three months...

Sumit: I know Vinod we cannot replace Ganesh and Geeta but we have to think something and we have to prepare two dancers for Goa...and we have to allow them sometime to get in sync with other dancers also...but we cannot make this a public statement that D Virus Dance Group is lacking their best dancer...

Vinod: Exactly we have to prove we are the ones who create this stars and I am dam sure there will be somebody who has this dying passion for dance...

Sumit: Ya there should be somebody who has this killing dance passion...

Vinod: ya and we have to make sure we have options also so this time we will rope in four stand by dancers and out of those four two will go in the main dance group and the remaining two will be used when needed...

Sumit: Ya nice idea but where will we find 4-5 dancers for whom dance is passion and can do anything for dance...

The situation Sumit ' Vinod were in was really unbearable for them as they have booked a grand show in the international arts meet in Goa...and now just on the time their two most popular and lead dancers have backed out form the group and academy saying they think they can do better with others and they cannot afford losing their creativity insight of two jerks...so both of them were equally desperate to prove that they can create more stars and they have this neck of picking best talent...but the guys and girls they have met for this place were not just up to the level they wanted and this has made question themselves whether they have done terrible mess by not stopping the lead dancers...

But as they say there is always a better person meant to do the work that has been left by someone...in this story there are 4 dancers who shockingly are more than what Sumit ' Vinod want...But it's their bad luck that they haven't come across these 4 individuals...

So the scene shifts to an auditorium where a boy is performing on a Michal Jackson style on one of biggest hits of Michal Jackson Dangerous... He was moving flawlessly...it was like this guy was meant to dance on this song only...girls were drooling over him..his friends were cheering for him...and his performance ended...he went backstage and his friends congratulated him...(well he was none other than Reyansh Singhania)

Boy 1: great job yar you smocked the stage...

Boy 2: did you see how girls were drooling over you?

Boy 3: the crowd was going crazy when you were performing dude... I think you will win in spite of tough competition we have here...

Rey: hey there is no competition when Reyansh is dancing with somewhere...because when I am in the competition that means I will win and rest have to blame their luck because I am the best you can get to see anywhere...

Boy 1: this attitude Is not good yar it will harm you one day

Rey: Dream on boy there is nothing that can harm Rey ok...

Boy 2: the results are announced and you have won..

Rey: what is so new in this I had to win otherwise they would have paid for their blunder...

Rey goes on the stage and picks up his award and gives a thank you gesture to himself for his hard work...

Now all they are having party and boys are discussing about what next...

Boy 1: you know what D Virus wants instructors for their academy..

Boy 2: no it's not just a instructor but I am sure that person is going to be the part of dance group as there is a inside news that Ganesh and Geeta are no more part of the Dance Group now...

Rey: Oh is it so...they need a dancer and I need fame...it looks like good combination to me...

Boy 3: so you are going for that interview...

Rey: hey I am Rey and I am answer of their findings I am going there just to make them realise that I can save them and moreover when I am going there will be no scope for any other dancer...because I am the best...

On the other side here was a guy who was dancing with a girl on the song called desert rose by sting... and he was doing some Latin moves...they were in the rehearsal hall and preparing for some dance...the guy was extremely focused on the music beats and was coming with one after another perfect steps to counter his own steps... (That boy was our very own Swayam Shekhawat)

The song ended and the girl asked him about the satisfaction with the season that they had...

Girl: I think we have done a good job and we can pull of the main prize today...

Swayam: Are you kidding me this is just 10% of what we are capable of...

Girl: But this is my 100% and I think we can catch the prize with this one...

Swayam: sweetheart you are dancing with Swayam Shekhawat har to tum waise bhi nahi sakti agar tum chaho to bhi...

Girl: Hey this is over confidence...

Swayam: hahahaha you are kidding me...I am Swayam Shekhawat and I can just make the judges go awestruck by the quality of dance moves I present... harte vo log hai jinhe apne moves pe confidence nahi hota...and baby mai to born winner hu...

Girl: Par waha pe Kisi bade dancer ka beta dance karne wala hai and he will get the benefit of his paa...

Swayam: No way humara dance aisa hoga ki UN logo ke pas humien jita hua declare karne ke alava koi option hi nahi rahega...agar koi cheating Hui to public ke bich mein judges ko answer karna padega iske liye...

Girl: agar tumhe apne moves pe itna confidence hai toh Mumbai jake kyu nahi try karte...

Swayam: look whoever you are muje mat sikhao muje kaha pe try karni hai... I know muje kya karna hai...mai Mumbai jaa raha hu...

But try karne nahin apni right position lene in the D Virus Dance Group and Dance Academy...

Mai Unhe instructor ke sath muje dance group mein lene ke liye sochne pe force kar dunga apni dance techniques ke through...

Well these were the two boys who are getting ready to face each other for the Place in Sumit ' Vinod D Virus Dance Group...

Now about girls we have this girl who is enjoying a dance performance of a classical dancer in the auditorium filled with people across and blowing whistles for her mother... (Yes this girl is Kriya)

She is called up on the stage to show some of her dancing skills by her mom after her performance to introduce to the crowd the rising star...and Kriya danced off on a classical tune with just impeccable grace... Everybody in the audience was stunned to see the mixture of classical moves with Belly Dancing an Arabic form...she was one of her kind...her performance was cherished by everybody...

After the dance Kriya was in talk with her mom...

Mom: Now this was a good performance and nice way to introduce to everybody that my daughter is going to take forward my legacy...

Kriya: Mom no ways I am not doing this thing...I want to be a professional western dancer and a dancing star like D Virus Group girl Geeta...

Mom: But why do you need to do go to that group when we have this inbuilt huge following...

Kriya: classical is not something I enjoy doing...I love western styles of dancing...and I have decided that I will get my chances on D virus academy and group because they are looking for a instructor and this is the best opportunity I can get to go into this group...

Mom: oh so finally they are searching for dancers...honey you don't know something Geeta and Ganesh have already opted out from their group and are starting their own group for which I have been invited to be at...

Kriya: oh that's fantastic news this means I have got the chance to get in the dance group and I can fulfil my dream...

Mom: But beta vaha pe bahot sare dancer honge iske liye how you would be able to make it?

Kriya: Chill mom you know right that your daughter knows how when and whom to use to get success... I have learnt this things very well mom and now that place is surely mine don't worry...

On the other hand a girl is doing kathhak in the rehearsal hall and everybody Is applauding it...suddenly the classical moves change in the hip hop beats and the girls just catches every eye on her with her sexy dance moves...she is moving like water here and there on the music which is instrumental fusion of classical Indian and western pop beats... (You got it right it's Sharon Rai Prakash)

After the girl finishes the dance... A boy comes to her and offers her towel and water and is trying to talk to her...

Boy: Madam you are really very awesome dancer...

Sharon: ya I know that...tell me something new...

Boy: Madam you can do wonders if you go Mumbai and join some big dance group because people will die to watch you perform...

Sharon: Ya I know people can pay any amount to see me as I am daughter of India's best dancer...and where will they get someone who knows classical and western in one go...

Boy: Madam Do you know D Virus Dance Academy has called for dancers who can instruct their juniors in the academy...

Sharon's father over hears this convo and calls Sharon in to talk...

Dad: do you want to go to D Virus?

Sharon: Ya I mean with D Virus I can earn a name whole over the place as they are famous and I can use their name to go international...

Dad: If you are sure you want to be there than this is the best time to hit the jackpot as Ganesh and her partner Geeta have left the Group and with this instructor thing you can make them consider you in the group for vacancy...

Sharon: oh dad that's great news and don't worry they will have to consider me for the empty place...because I want that place and I have decided that I will get it...

You don't worry dad I know I will make them shortlist me by hook or by crook but that empty Geeta spot belongs to Sharon Rai Prakash and nobody can get to that except me...

So here I come D Virus...

So these were the girls who are ready in there in their respective ways to face off each other for the empty place...

So guys this was the first part for you all as you all were curious to know what will be there in the start... as you all can see how arrogant they all are and how they have decided to use their respective ideologies to get success...now what happens and how they reach to D Virus Academy is for the coming parts...I have tried to introduce you to the main part of story and characters as how they will approach to this opportunity that is lying in their hands...sorry last night I had power failure and I had to sleep early so that I couldn't post the part at night as I had promised to K...I hope you all like this part...

Thank you for your time to read this one... I hope you did not feel boarded after reading this... and if you liked it wait for the next part after 19^th November...

Pratik...

I have tried my best to write something that can be interesting... I hope you doesn't get boarded and I have tried to send as many pm's as i can for this one...so if anyone doesn't get please forgive me this time...as i am really short of time,,,enjoy the day...

Pratik

WOW...just WOW...so u r back with a BANG ...I can see this FF to be the most AMAZING FF EVER ...because of the elements u have kept in it ...SWARON...KRIYANSH...DANCE ...ROMANCE...well romance hoga hi ...when our terrific four are there ...LOVED the 1st chapter ...full of attitude ...sumit-vinod's problem...our terrific four will be their saviors...no doubts about that ...


The characterization is just brilliant...Rey ,Swayam,Kriya,Sharon...loved the way you introduced them...REYAM doing western...KRISHA doing Indian fusion with belly dance and hip hop ...WOW...all full of attitude...all have the confidence to conquer the world ...someone by merit...someone by family name...someone by hook or crook...fantastic ...the attitude was BANG ON...i could visualize them in front of me...now that all of them headed to Mumbai ...can't wait for the next part...next parts will be full of dance,drama,action,fights ,cat-fights & romance...thats my guess ..this FF is going to be GRAND...with the kind of detailing u give...it will be absolutely pleasure reading it ...



P.S. do well in ur exams..study well...take care of ur health ...will be waiting for ur exams to get over for ur next updates

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Pratik bhai you updated 😲 wow foursome all with attitudes, OMG swayam ko be nai choda😉 Wow I really wanted to see sharon doing kathak dancing and swayam watching her well pratik hope my wish will come true in your FF.Pratik it is super cool update, i have always told you na you take into consideration even the teeny weeny details into consideration👍🏼 the detailing is really superb. Each character has its own pros and cons, reyam and kriya and sharon character is so well defined but their goodness se zyada the attitude are prominant. Well bhai aap ne tho kamal kardiya yaar, this is def going to be the best FF ever, dekna and pata nai jaldi update karo batana ya nai aap exams jo hai.

So 1st part is out...:)
Woo looks like they all r full of attitude n confident.I wonder what will happen when they come together.I m sure something dhamakedar things going to be happen...:D
Waiting for next part eagerly

Awesome update...luved their arrogance...n wnt to know how they r gone melt towards each other...n who is going to take geeta n ganesh place...n thnx for pm.

All the best for ur exams.