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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update

loved it so very much 👏

crazy update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Mind blowing update
loved it
the way u introduced each charcter was amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
A FF dedictated fully to dance. This is a pleasant surprise. I was eager to see how you were gonna write it and it was worth the wait. Awesome and captivatiing writing. I liked the way you introduced all the character whether the main four or duo of Sumit-Vinod. It was awesomely penned. And remaininf four - nicely done. Their attitude, aggression, talent everything was justified along with some look over story too. You have a winner plaot in your hand with dance as a main soul. Waiting to see how it goes.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Hey great beginning Pratik! Very interesting story I can't wait to read more 😃 Though I don't like Rey's character so much..he seems thoda over over confident types🤢 But I am very excited for this FF.

Best of luck for ur xams. M sure you'll do well 😊
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
it was an amazingg update...suprlyk👏👏

i m loving it...thnkx 4 pm😃😃

n al d vry bst 4ur xmz dear👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Hi pratik.. 😊
great start... 😊
this one has all the fab elements in it...swaron...kriyansh...and ..dance..very nice concept... 😊
looking forward to your next updates.. 😊

p.s-all the very best for your exams and get well soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Awesome update bro...
Nice start I must say...
I liked the way you portrayed the characters...
Everything was perfect their talent. their attitude and other things too...
It was nice...
Loved it...
Once again ALL THE BEST...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
good one,Bhai. this was an out of the box-update with SwaRon and KriYaansh at their bests. you took care of the minute details which need to be handled carefully in such situations. the start is great,looking forward to next. would love to read how it would turn out when the fires battle.
thanks for the PM.

P.S:all the best for your exams.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: dips098

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">WOW...just WOW...so u r back with a BANG ...I can see this FF to be the most AMAZING FF EVER ...because of the elements u have kept in it ...SWARON...KRIYANSH...DANCE ...ROMANCE...well romance hoga hi ...when our terrific four are there ...LOVED the 1st chapter ...full of attitude ...sumit-vinod's problem...our terrific four will be their saviors...no doubts about that ...


The characterization is just brilliant...Rey ,Swayam,Kriya,Sharon...loved the way you introduced them...REYAM doing western...KRISHA doing Indian fusion with belly dance and hip hop ...WOW...all full of attitude...all have the confidence to conquer the world ...someone by merit...someone by family name...someone by hook or crook...fantastic ...the attitude was BANG ON...i could visualize them in front of me...now that all of them headed to Mumbai ...can't wait for the next part...next parts will be full of dance,drama,action,fights ,cat-fights & romance...thats my guess ..this FF is going to be GRAND...with the kind of detailing u give...it will be absolutely pleasure reading it ...



P.S. do well in ur exams..study well...take care of ur health ...will be waiting for ur exams to get over for ur next updates
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thank you deepu...i dont know ye kaise develope hogi but i can assure i will try to make it entertaining from my side...there will be love...bitching...action...dance...dramma...full dose...so wait for update...but this comment made my day...comments like this make me believe that my efforts are atlist appreciated by someone...if you all were not there i would not be writing...you know i was to quit IF at one place but here just for you all this ff is just gor you all...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kuhu_Arsha

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hey it was amazingg update,,,,,suprlyk👏👏

i m loving it,,,,,thnkx 4 pm😃😃

n al d vry bst 4ur xmz👍🏼



thanks fir liking it...i have tried my best...i am sorry if you find rey on grey side but story is just like that but dont worry he is also a protoganist...thanx for your best wishes for exam...

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