tarey confession...os (part 5 in page 8)

zila thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#1
hello frnz m writing an os of tarey for the first tym...hope u guyz wil lyk it...😊 n yea 1 more thing my english is very bad so plz ignore if i hv done any mistake and dnt get heartattacks after reading dis😆..

part 1-

in the dance camp rey gets 2 know dat taani and shivam r nt togethr...he gets confused dt y did taani hs dne dis n he remembers the momont when shivam tries to come close to taani n touching her n gets irritate n also very angry and says 2 himself dat 2day i want my all answers from taani..n goes 2 find taani...

he sees dat taani is standing near a pool..he goes there and shout at taani...

rey: y taani?y did u do dis?y u were telling lie dt u n shivam r 2gether?

taani: she got scared n dn try 2 move from there bt rey didn't let her go...he catches her by her wrist n pulled her back...n holds her waist n make her pull vry close...taani got scared as wel as nervous(as her prince charming is so close 2 her)...

ok guys nw tel me hwz it??if u loved it dn plz do cmnt...dn only i'll start the next part...i know itz very short bt as m new so i want 2 know dt u guyz loved my post or not...so plz plz do comnt...😊

part 2- page 2
part 3- page 3
part 4- page 5
part 5- page 8
Edited by zila - 13 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

79

Views

22.4k

Users

34

Likes

214

Frequent Posters

...Natasha... thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#2
Hey Divya nice start, plz continue
Edited by Natasha. - 13 years ago
Asha_Tacker thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#3
excited fr next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz do continue.😃
raj-guria-kriti thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#4
nice start divya... liked it... 🤗
FieryLioness thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 13 years ago
#5
nice start 😊
do conti. soon
and this time a biggg update...
Edited by -meet- - 13 years ago
Ayesha05 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#6
plz continue it dear...it very nice
Zuna4Taarey thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#7
wow interestng😛...thaani standing near pool aehh!!!,and push n pull me dhonom pool me gir jayegi eehh?😉...fir '''bheegi bheegi raathom me...'' bg tune.😉..he he he😆...kya hoga...waitng😊
zila thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#8
part-2

taani- plz rey chodiye mujhe...plz lemme go..

rey-nowayz taani..aaj tumhe mere har ques ka ans dena hi padega aur jab tak mujhe mere sawalo ka jawab nhi mil jata tb tak i wont let u go

taani- mere paas apke kisi v sawal ka jawab nhi hai rey...so plz leave me

rey- oh really?(he pulls her more closer n now dey r 1 inch away from each other...dey both can feel their breath nw)

taani- haa realy...aur agar mere paas apke sawalo ka jawab hai v to v mai apko q batau?aap ho kaun mere?

rey gets angry after hearing dis n says- mai tumhara kya lagta hu wo tumhe kuch hi der me pata chal jayega...ab baato ko ghumao mat n tel me y did u do al dis?y didn't u tel me dt u n shivam r nt 2gethr?

taani- pehle aap mujhe chodiye...agar aap mujhe aise pakadke rakhenge to mai kuch v nhi bataungi..

then rey leaves her...and says now tell

taani was about to tel everythng when sumthng strucks 2 her mind...

she thought of the day when she proposed rey n he told her dt she is just swayam's sister 4 him n nothng else...nothng can hapn betwen dem...

taani- in her mind *rey ne mujhe us din itna daanta,mere itne kehne par v unhone mere pyar ko ek mauka tak nhi diya...wo mujhe sirf apna bestfrnd ki sis mante hai na to fir thik hai..mai v unko apne dil aur dimaag se nikal dungi,,,bhula dungi unhe...*

rey- wt hpnd?taani m askng u sumthng answer me damn it...😡

taani- q du mai apko jawab?aap hote kaun ho mujhse ye sab sawal puchne k liye?mai apko batana jaruri nhi samajhti...
n she agn tries 2 go frm there bt now rey gets very angry n grabs her waist tightly n pulled her very forcely dt her back gets collided wid his chest...

rey- dnt u dare 2 talk wid me lyk dis taani..n dnt u dare 2 ignore me...(he said angrily in her ears)

taani- she was very shockd n confused too...(as she dnt knw y rey is behavng lyk dis n dt he lvs her) *bt we taarians knw dt very wel*😆😉

her heart start beatng fast...she was angry bt 4m inside she was feeling little happy also as she was so close 2 her prince charming...n nw she was loosing her control...

taani- rey plz mujhe jaane dijiye...koi dekh lega...(in a nervous tone)

rey understood dt his closeness is affectng her vry much so he moves his hand 4m her waist 2 stomach....taani tries 2 pull back back bt didn't let her go as he holds her vry tight...she agn tries 2 escape 4m him by her left hand bt he holds her left hand by his left hand...(his right hand was holdng her waist)

rey- mere choone se tumhe itna affect q hota hai taani?bolo taani...

taani- qki wo...wo ma...mai,, mai wo...(den suddenly taani hears a sound who was searching 4 rey n dat was swayum...)

taani- rey leave me...bhai aa rhe hai n she pushed him hardly and ran away from there...

rey thinks yaar ye swayam ko v avi bulana tha...jaisi behan waisa bhai...

rey- haa swayam bol kya hua?

swa- are tu kaha tha?hum sab tujhe waha andar dhundh rahe the...yaha kya kar rha hai?

rey- nothng dude...wo bas yaha thandi hawa khane aaya tha...

swa- *mischieviously* q tujhe kuch khaane ko nhi mil raha tha kya??😆

rey- swayam tu v na...n dn both started laughing...n dn goes back 2 the tent..

all the boys dn says good night 2 every 1...n dn goes 2 sleep...bt rey cudn't sleep as he was thinking about taani...

rey- *talks 2 himself* mujhe avi taani se milna hai bt kaise milu?girls cottage to ja v nhi skta...dude ab kya karega tu?no rey tujhe jana hi hoga...tu ab aur intezar nhi kar skta...

he dn goes 2 girls cottage n sees dt taani is standing outside the girls cottage(as she also cudn't sleep as she was also thinking abt rey)

rey- taani?

taani- rey aap yaha?aap yaha kya kr rhe hai?aap plz jayiye yaha se...koi dkh lega to pblm ho jayegi...

rey- sshhh...mai jaunga bt tumhe saath lekar hi jaunga...tumhe avi mere saat chalna hoga nhi to mai yaha se nhi jaunga...





ok so guyz i'll stop it here only..i know itz nt good...i m sorry if it is too bad...bt if u lyk it dn plz cmnt...dn i'll start the next part...thnku...😊
Edited by zila - 13 years ago
BARUNILU_Arshi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#9
hey guyz dis is divya aka zila only...i hv made a new a/c due 2 some issues..dis a/c named zila wil b closed within 2 dayz...n the new a/c name is Div_taarey...thnxx 😊
PreciousHeart thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#10
Hey dear 🤗 FIRSTLY ZILA WELCOME TO THE TAAREY's CRAZY FANS GROUP!!! THE WHO SAID IT IS NOT GOOD IT IS AMAZING TAAREY R PERFECT !!! N SOOO MUCH OF ROMMANCE!! HAYYEE do continue !!! 😳 👏

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".