Arrange Marriage (VM) IMP Note Pg 62 Must Read - Page 13

Originally posted by: virman-fan

the way f writing was awesome
liked d starting n loved d concept
also loved d characters
plz pm
waiting 4 next part

Originally posted by: cukky

good starting pls cont soon 😊

Originally posted by: atthi

Awesome Jas.. add me to ur PM list!😊

Originally posted by: jessiekarthik

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sorry i took along time time come here . i read it thrice or more than that because of beautiful way u have portrayed Maanvi!!! Its Okay! Aaaww! That's soo sweet of you <3

i am in love with the character Maanvi and so with this MAanvi !!! same here, I love Maanvi in the show and that reflects in my writings!

😃Manvi in this young age of 20 has taken over so many responsibility of looking after siblings and GM of the company .well portrayed character of Independence and determined woman 👏. i salute u for giving such a character. *Bows down* :p Thank you dear!

😃

her duties , responsible, her determination is seen clearly.

the ending gave me skip a heart beat as you said meeting of two different persons . 😳

perfect and only perfect way of writing.

i ll wait for next 😳

Originally posted by: zinai

👍🏼 hie Jasmine...

i read the 1st chap...its really amazing❤️ ...the way u explained manvi's character...n how she is the only support to her family...also liked the way u introduced the 27 yr old guy (groom)...its really wonderful...loved the start...waiting for the rest chapters...please pm me...continue soon...thanx😊

Originally posted by: swetharao

I cant believe this !! MAN !! u finally...😉

finally updated it :) love ya.. 😊

haaa.. the update was awwwesssoome. 👏

pls do pm me :(

So sorry for not updating it as i had promised, got struck with Class Tests and thankfully i have done well in them. Just wanted to tell you that I am overwhelmed at the response and i wish to continue till this FF lasts. so please don't stop giving your constructive criticism, it really helps me a lot!

And i read a few people telling me that the characters remind them of KHNH, guys its the BEST compliment i have ever got so a very big *hug* to all of you!

Secondly, Get ready for a few surprises this week ;) I am sure you'll love them!

Over to the Update now

There, in the living room, a handsome guy aged 27 with a muscular build up, nicely dressed up in a formal suit is admiring the numerous awards kept in the showcase! He moves backwards and bumps into a pretty girl who looks at him angrily!

Maanvi:- Excuse me Mr whoever you are, Can't you look around before taking a step backward? You've just ruined my dress, Idiot. Now what are you looking at me? Help me pick up my things which you very happily have thrown on the floor. Maanvi glances at the boy, snatches her things and stomps off towards her room.

What does he think of himself? Sitting in our house and trying to play smart with ME, Maanvi Chaudhary? Oh! boy, you have no idea, how much this will cost you!

Maanvi, annoyingly starts planning a revenge when Jia comes running in the room and tells her about the guests.

Jia:- Maanvi Di, A few guests have come to meet you and Mom is calling you in the kitchen, please hurry up.. Oh, and she has asked me to select a dress for you, so please give me the keys to your cupboard and i will select a dress for my adorable sis!

Maanvi:- Jia, please go away , I am in no mood of getting ready. Please let me me stay alone for a while.

Jia:- Di, Stop being a meanie and become my princess NOW! I am counting till 5 else I''l call Ankur to irritate you!

Maanvi:- Oh! you little munchkin, Okay.. I'd be ready in 5 minutes and help Mom in the kitchen work, Happy?
Jia:- Very.

Maanvi and Jia hug while Sunaina kept herself busy in making different cuisines and decorating the table.

Wearing a blue anarkali suit with a subtle make-up, Maanvi looked like an angel dropped on Earth. Jia couldnt resist but murmur praises for her sister.

Jia:- Di, Is it really you, or has some angel dropped in here?? God! You are so pretty and this blue suits you really well!

Maanvi:- Thank You Jia baby, now lets go down before Mom shouts on us!

Going down, Maanvi bumps in to a boy and gets annoyed after looking at him.
YOU?

Di, This is our guest, he has come to meet you.

Understanding the intensity of the situation, Maanvi runs in the kitchen whle Jia keeps blabbering.

OMG, This is the guy mom has selected for me? Maanvi he ain't a perfect match! He is a hooligan and you hate such boys. Tell your Mom about it else you'd suffer later! Go tell your Mom!

Maanvi, don't judge a person on the first meeting, Go talk to him, find out more about him and then decide!

Maanvi you love an independent life, How'd you adjust?

You always wanted your Mom to select a groom for you, now you cant back out!

Many thoughts tried creating a confusion in Maanvi's mind.. She could feel her heart beat fast, she could feel anxiety, something was attracting her, something was telling her to just go ahead and accept the proposal!

Hushing away all these thoughts, Maanvi went in the hall and greeted every body, including the guy whom she had thought as a hooligan.

Questions poured in, Answers found their way out of Maanvi's mouth, while she was busy checking out the family and their behaviour. when,

"So, Maanvi What have you studied? "Asked the boy's Mother

Aunty, I have finished my Architectural courses and now, I am handling Dad's business

Least bothered about the questions, Maanvi now was admiring the boy sitting next to her when

Sunaina ji, I would love it if you could allow Maanvi and Viraat to have a separate talk outside?

Sunaina glanced at Maanvi and hesitantly agreed.

Maanvi glared at her and Viraat got up excitedly

Both of them head out

Aint I evil?? ROFL. I know, I once again stopped at a very lame point but I wanted to keep the first conversation as a separate chapter so i had no choice but to cut this chapter a bit short!

You know the drill :) Comment, like the update BUT please DONT write short comments!