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Posted: 12 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
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ur update...😳
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when r u updating
Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Nice ff di. Pls pm me next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maaneet ff:- kaisa ye pyaar hai


part 50

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Part 50

Meera monologue

Kash dev tum smjh pate

Meri unkahein baateion ko

Tumhe lagta hai mein sb kuch smjh jati hu

Par tumahre dil mein kya hai mere liye

Bs ye nhi jaan pati

Dev monologue

Tum sbko smjhti ho meera

Mujhe bhi''

Par mere dil mein kya hai tumhare liye

Ye kyun nhi smjhti'''

In Hospital Room

Maan : geet

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Geet: kuch chaiye maan

Maan: ha

Geet: kya

Maan: tum geet

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Geet: maan mein to apke pass hi hu

Maan: geet tum pass ho, par utani hi dur ho

Geet: maan ye aap kya kh rhe hai

Maan: geet tum mujhse kuch chupa rhi ho

Geet: maan asa kuch nhi hai

Jo aap nhi jante hai

Maan: geet kuch to huya hai in dino mein

Jo tum mujhe abhi nhi btana chahti

Geet: jab aap itna jante hai

To sawal kyun karte hai

Maan: geet

Geet: chup bilkul chup

Ek sabd aur nhi

He nodded.

Geet: so jaiye

Maan: tum kha jar hi ho

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Geet: Mr. Maan Singh Khurana

Sone

Maan: Mrs. Khurana, whi to mein kh rha hu, itna dur jane ki kya jaroorat hai

Geet: maan

Maan: geet soya to mere pass bhi ja sakta hai

Geet: maan ye hospital hai'hamara room nhi

He caught her dupatta'

Geet: maan chodiye na

He denied.

She came near to maan, and pleaded, but he ignored.

Geet(mummers): dust danav

Maan: geet mujhe sb sunai de rha hai

He held her wrist and pulled near, she loose the balance and fall on his chest.

He slides both hand on her waist'

Maan: maine to kha tha geet, tum yhi rhongi mere pass..

Bilkul pass

Both slept together'

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After 5 days

In khurana mension

Geet: Deepak, pooja ka saara samaan aaya ya nhi

Deepak: madam , sb aa gya hai

Geet: pandit ji, kb tk puchenge

Deepak: bs 1 hour mein puch jayenge

Geet: nakul bhaiya

Nakul: ji

Geet: Prasad maine bna diya hai

Aap baki sb dekh lena

Nakul : ji

Meera: geet tum subh se kaam mein lagi ho

Please thoda aaram krlo

Geet: meera mein thik hu

Meera: acha hua daadimaa

Aap aa gyi

Isse kuch smjaiye

Daadi: bte , meera thik kh rhi hai

Geet: daadi, I am fine, please don't take tension'

Daadi : bte acha aap juice pee lijiye

Geet: sorry daadimaa

Mein pooja ke baad hi kuch khayungi

Daadi: bte apne liye na shi

Apne hone wale bache ke liye hi shi

Geet: daadimaa, please

Deepak: geet madam

Geet: aayi

Daadimaa mein abhi aati hu

Meera: dekha daadimaa

Ye kissi kin hi sunti

Daadimaa: hum unhe bhi dekh rhe hai

Aur aap ko bhi

Meera: mujhe

Daadimaa: ha

Aap geet ka kitna dhayn rakhti hai

Aur is fikr mein mein''''..khud ko bhul jati hai

She cupped her face..

Daadi: bte..apne rishte pe dhyan dijiye

Wo phl nhi kr rhe

To khud kijiye

Meera: daadimaa

Daadi: bte hum bs naam ki daadi nhi hai

Aap apni har baat mujhse kh sakti hai

Bte, rishte mein kbhi bi is baat ka intzaar mt krna

Kaun phl karenga

Issi phl ke intzaar mein waqt gujr jata hai

Aur gujra huya waqt wapas nhi aata

Meera hugged her,,

Meera: thanks daadimaa

Daadi: ek kaam bhagwan ne bhut acha kiya

Meera: kya daadimaa

Daadi: humare dono poto ko bahu bhut achi mili hai

Nhi to ye dono waise to bde bante hai

Par dil ke mamle mein'inse kuch bola nhi jata

precap



Lag Ja Gale Ki Phir
ye Hasin Raat Ho Na Ho
shayad Phir Is Janam Mein
mulakat Ho Na Ho
lag Jaa Gale Se ...

hum Ko Mili Hai Aaj
ye Ghadiya Naseeb Se
je Bhar Ke Dekh Leejiye
hamako Kareeb Se
phir Apke Naseeb Mein
ye Raat Ho Na Ho
phir Is Janaam Mein
mulakaat Ho Na Ho

lag Ja Gale Ki Phir
ye Hasin Raat Ho Na Ho''

pas Aiye Ki Ham Nahin
ayenge Baar Baar
bahen Gale Mein Daal Ke
ham Ro Le Zaar-zaar
ankhoon Se Phir Ye
pyaar Ki Barsaat Ho Na Ho
shayad Phir Is Janam Mein
mulakat Ho Na Ho


lag Ja Gale Ki Phir
ye Hasin Raat Ho Na Ho
shayad Phir Is Janam Mein
mulakat Ho Na Ho
lag Jaa Gale Se ...

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part 51

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ek kaam acha kiya bahue



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Posted: 12 years ago
sach mein pyari bahuve hain :)
maan naughty geet pyari.
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Posted: 12 years ago
original posted by
love2_soma

wow...geet ne abhi tak batayi nehi ki woh pregnant hai...aur meera aur dev...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...



thanks dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
original posted by
seemamary

Awesome dear but when geet disclose to maan that she is pregnant.


next two update mein pta chl jayenga...

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