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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Edited.

Finally I am editing comment today. This delay only because I was not sure what to right about in this comment. It was as usual perfectly written and was quite enjoyable read. But that's something I will write in each update. Now coming to the other portion of the update which you have dealt with - You and Sudha were complaing about boys later on but I would say more than boys or in this case more than Swayam's or Vicky's character its the complexities of girls i.e. Sharon and Kriya that was presented in engaging manner. Comparatively to them Vicky and Swayam are saint in this SS.

Not that I understand why they would break over something so silly and childish 😆 but any way nicley written update. Swayam and Sharon's conversation was written in quite a polished manner and made an interesting read. Similarly Swayam's and Vicky was conversation was amusing and as real as it could get. Apart from the two conversation the pov's of both Sharon and Kriya was thrown in nice manner. Lets wait and see what more is in store for their equation in this SS.

Edited by marauder - 13 years ago

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

It is pedestrian, two friends fighting over a guy, so pedestrian I won't be able to live with myself if I let it be what it seems to you right now. 😆 And thanks!

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Crazy4AshVik

@Crazy4AshVik

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Finally! Thankyou for updating!! Awesome update as always😊

Please,please,please update asap and thnx for the pm😊

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lavu

@....vula_kv....

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

kankshitha amazing

thank u so much for ur pm😳

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

RES

*Edited*

I know its better not to talk about few things which you promised to clear in the next update, so lets not even go their.

Loved how you started this update, and the description for guitar by far the most apt and different 😳

"Thought love was dead, but now you're changing my mind!"
Loved the above lines and what followed after, who better then Swayam will Sharon sing and refer to for those lines. She tried stopping at his sight but the music got the better of her, well music does that to you and she was enjoying her lil performance.
Vicky trying his best with Swayam and working on miss Sharon and Swayam and Swayam on the other hand trying to patch up two ex -friends Sharon and Kriya has sure got these kids on my good books 😳
Swayam trying to clear his stand and trying to figure out what went wrong between them and eventually loosing his temper and regretting doing so makes me think about his feelings for Sharon but then again he is a 18 year old boy and its better not to guess or expect anything at all.
Now the reason we all are going to beg you for the next update, what did Sharon hide from Swayam and thought that it was better of keeping that away.

Half-truths were a whole new level of complication, by the way.
And the last lines of your update so true - sometimes the half truth are more complicated and dangerous then a lie.
P.S - Thanks to the erratic IF server, i lost everything i initially typed for the comment and I had to retype my comment again...i hope it makes sense..IF not bottom line
Loved this update - it was a pleasure read.