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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part.
I feel bad about Jhanvi.
WTH does Rumasha want from Jhanvi now?
What is in that book's last chapter?
Waiting eagerly for the next part.
Take care!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lucykaede



omg radhi,i never thought it that way.i don't consider myself famous.when you said it was a shock for me and to be frank i felt like what?😕

actually you are being too kind to me.

thanks for the comment.



Whatever (I'm Not Being Too Kind, It's The Truth)...But Best Of Luck For Ur Exams...Please Do Not Waste Ur Precious Time After Us...U Could Do With The Replying After Ur Exams Also..It's A Good Thing That I'll Not Miss It Too Terribly..As I'm Not Gonna Be In Town...I Hope U'll Be Back Till I Come...Again A Hearty best Of Luck !!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lucykaede


thank you so much though i am wondering why not anyone commenting on king tut thing,don't you guys know this famous pharaoh?😕



Well, I Really Had My Bad Times With Him In The Battlefield Of Class 3, So I Prefer Not To Think Or Speak About Him...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Dear Loved The Previous Part !! Hope Jhanvi Can Find Out Nupur And The Book And The Clue...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani



Whatever (I'm Not Being Too Kind, It's The Truth)...But Best Of Luck For Ur Exams...Please Do Not Waste Ur Precious Time After Us...U Could Do With The Replying After Ur Exams Also..It's A Good Thing That I'll Not Miss It Too Terribly..As I'm Not Gonna Be In Town...I Hope U'll Be Back Till I Come...Again A Hearty best Of Luck !!!


don't worry radhi,i know what i have to do with my exams and its preparations.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
very important note::

there is no chance for me to update now.😭

still not abandoning the ff but this ff's future is in doubts now.

if i update next chapter then it will continue,if i don't then think that this ff is stopped now.

i am repeating i haven't abandoned it yet but.😭

reason-i have to start my upsc coachings now.sry so sry for this.real life is afterall more imp than virtual life.😭
Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woww! Nice part lucy...Moharika are my fav. too 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
I luved dis Update 2 d core...
It ws totally outstanding...
i cn imagine Karthik...
n hritvik n neera part ws obviously icing on d cake..
n d last part whre Karthik shouted...
Hahaha...
that ws really nice!
try to update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Another nice update lucy. Just love it.But again I request you in same manner please don't abandon this ff please.😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter-2-it will begin again
hrithvik and neera came to their room again.tomorrow was sunday.
neera was on bed,hrithvik joined her.
neera-hrithvik,can i ask you something?
hrithivik kissed her neck-anything.
neera-you surely don't remember anything?
hrithvik-what?
neera-i mean your family,your parents,your...ah ...sister...
flashback of neera-a boy-no stop it...
hrithvik-yeah,last time i remember being in a forest with my dad and sister then i fainted and when i got up i saw myself with surya.
neera-hmmm...and what happened to your family?
hrithvik-surya told me that they were attacked by a tiger and i was saved by my father in cost of his life.
neera started crying.
hrithvik-hey,neera,don't cry.he hugged her-you have so much compassion for people,you are truly a flower.
neera-a flower of hell.she touched his face and gently kissed his eyes.
hrithvik took neera in his arms and kissed her neck.
next day..
nandini was cleaning her room,neera was cooking food.
outside there was a basket ball court.
hrithvik-no jhanvi,thats not how you dribble,see i teach you.hrithvik and jhanvi both used to play basket ball.karthik was as usual studying.
neera-honey food is ready.come in.
jhanvi-just a minute.
hrithvik-yeah we are almost done.okay jhanvi now start.they both started playing basket ball.after 5 minutes when jhanvi was hrithvik won she suddenly became angry.
hrithvik-jhanvi?😕
jhanvi-huh...😲
hrithvik-what?
jhanvi started crying.
hrithvik-jhanvi,what happened to you?
jhanvi-i am sry,i am so sry.
hrithvik-what?
she hugged him.
jhanvi-i am so sry daddy,i was right now thinking of killing you.
hrithvik-what?you were thinking of killing me.😕 😆 jhanvi stop fooling around,lets go.
jhanvi was very scared by herself,she couldn't understand why she had such feelings to torn people apart.
nandini went to neera's room.she started cleaning it.
nandini as was cleaning opened her mother's cupboard.she found a cute box there.
nandini opened it-a beautiful music started playing.http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o_SChDmSedM
nandini-wow its such a sad music.
she came out.the music was still on.neera heard the music,so does hrithvik and jhanvi.karthik also came out.
neera came to nandini-nandini,where did you find it?
hrithvik-wow,its such a beautiful melody.hey give it to me.hrithvik took that box in his hand.huh...
neera-wh..what?
hrithvik-ah...i feel i have heard this melody before,i have a feeling.
jhanvi-hey mother,can i take it please?
neera-ah..
nandini-no mother,i want to have it.i found it first.
jhanvi-no,i will have it.
nandini-no..i will.
karthik-hey daddy,look at this sea shell.they all sat around.
hrithvik-oh yes this sea shell,it was a gift from your mother because she broke a very precious sea shell of my sister.
neera sad.😭
karthik-your sister?
hrithvik-yes...it was decades ago,my sister gifted me a beautiful purple coloured sea shell.last time i remind i was very angry at her because she said something which hurt me.
neera-huh...😲
she reminds..
a boy slapping a cute young girl.
boy-say sorry to my friend or i will hate you.
girl-no...no brother,don't hate me.not for her...
hrithvik-yes..i lost my chance to say sry to her.
neera got up and shouted-i am sorry.
hrithvik-huh..
neera-i am so sry.
hrithvik-what?why are you...
jhanvi-huh..
nandini-what?
jhanvi-i guess i sensed something very scary in mother.
nandini-oh you have such creepy power of imagination.😆
jhanvi thinking-just now i felt that mother faded and someone really scary came in her.huh...why i am feeling very scared now?Can i sense something which others can't.
neera ran outside to home crying.
hrithvik-hey neera.
neera came outside,she was crying like nothing.
hrithvik-kya hua?
hrithvik found out that neera cut her hair with scissors.her was very short now.even above her shoulders.
neera-i am so sry.
hrithvik hugged her.
hrithvik-i don't know why but i always felt i knew you from start of my life.
neera sobs...huh..huh...😭

nandini and jhanvi came outside.
nandini-aww look at them.😃
jhanvi-yeah...
neera saw jhanvi looking at her strangely.
neera-jhanvi that music box is your's now.
jhanvi-really?
nandini-mother this is not fair.
jhanvi-its is pretty much.😈
neera-😭










neera and jhanvi..



Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago

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