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Posted: 12 years ago
hey plzz yar.. give us the reason na...???

dont ditch this... :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey plzz yar.. give us the reason na...???

dont ditch this... :(
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i haven't stopped it yaar.don't worry.some months include last month.i will update it in november.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely Update !!!!!!! And Don't Worry Di, Take Ur Time !
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chapter-3-cruel memories
in night..jhanvi was playing music box in her room.
jhanvi-what happened to mother?what i was feeling inside her?like she became totally different person.strange,very strange and the strangest thing is that it was only me who noticed it.why is that?
in valkyrie..
imhontep-aaa...
he was tied in a wooden bed with all hot iron belts.
rumasha stabbed him again...
imhontep-aaa...
rumasha in egyptian-tell me,tell me the secret of amun ra.what is he gonna do?the time is coming near.
imhontep had a smile now on his face,very sadistic smile.😭
a mutant-he haven't spoke since 3000 b.c.why are you wasting time?😕
that mutant got torn apart.
rumasha in egyptian-i know,i know that after these 3000 years amun ra is gonna do something but what?what is it?i can't even read this stupid man's thoughts.duh..
and she left.
imhontep reminding...
aknaten was sitting and imhontep was all scary.
amun ra-though i have given you this boon but after 2000(date variation is imp,rumasha said 3000 but i am writing 2000 😉)a person will born who will have the power to nullify my any curse.that chosen one will be the one who...
imhontep comes out of his thoughts-(in egyptian)-she has confined me for so long.you must be suffering.i am the only one who can ignite you back my liege.
nupur was in her room.
rathod entered-nupur you called me.
nupur-she showed you her memories,didn't she?
rathod-why are you asking me that like you didn't know it.
amrit entered too-mother you called me.
nupur-now we have no chance to survive.
amrit-what do you mean?
nupur-i am calling back neera.
amrit-what?but why?
nupur-because now we have danger on our heads.
rathod-what danger?
nupur-the curse,the curse that bitch has casted on her,that can break out any time and then even if probably hrithvik can nullify it,she will kill her children.we have to stop it.
rathod-but how we can stop it?
nupur-by killing it once for all.
amrit-ah killing neera?
nupur-no...we will attack valkyrie.
neera-huh..
hrithvik-neera,what?
neera-nothing...huh...huh...
neera reminding-
suhani was a runaway with that killed dog of hers.(remember flashback episode where suhani's dog was killed by some children of orphanage).
she was standing under a tree where she buried the dog.(the same tree where she went with sunil and found music box.)
suhani to the grave,there was a big stone where vikrant name wasn't inscribed.
suhani to grave-i am sry,why i am the one who have to endure so much sadness?why?just because i am little different.
suddenly that same music box tune stared playing.
suhani-huh..she turned.
she saw a beautiful handsome boy there of same age as hers.
he had that music box in his hand.
suhani-who are you?😡
boy-ah who are you and what are you doing in this deep dark forest?and this tree,its so beautiful.ah you like it?
suhani-what?
boy-this box,you were staring at it.
suhani-i thought it was a pretty tune,thats it.
boy get excited-really,thats so kind of you,you know my sister and my cousin were making fun of me because they thought it was a sad tune.
suhani's mind-kill him,kill everyone,scorn conceit,kill otherwise you will die a dog's death like this one.
suhani shouted-i hate all of you,her expressions suddenly became sad one,as she was about to kill that boy he came to her.suddenly a warmth flew in her heart.it was like she didn't want to kill the boy.
boy-hi my name is vikrant,do you wanna be friends with me?
girl-huh...i hate all of you.
vikrant-you hate all of us?huh?
girl-why you want to become friends with me?
vikrant-you seemed a lonely somehow.
suhani-huh i don't need your pity.
vikrant smiled-listen i have to go now but i will come back tomorrow or you can invite me to your house.ah where is your house?
suhani-ah my house,ah...that ,that wooden hut,that is my house.(on top)
vikrant-oh okay then,i will come back with my siblings tomorrow.bye...
suhani-ah bye...
as he went away she was smiling.
suhani-house...😡
she went to that hut type house.she rang door bell.
a kid opened it-who are ..suddenly his head came off...
his mother came-beta who ..ah...her head also came off..
suhani chuckled-this will be my house,for now.😡she went inside on ripped off bodies of those people.
in night..the owner of that house came.
man rang the door...
man-huh...door is open..
a shadow came..
man-hey raja is there you?
suhani came..
man-who are you?
suhani ripped of his head as well.
suhani-huh humans,they are worthless.😡
neera gets off...
neera-ah...
hrithvik-neera...
she started crying...
hrithvik-honey are you alright?
neera-sry...i am so sry...i don't deserve to be with you.she pushed away his hands and ran away.
hrithvik-neera...😕

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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh God. So sad. But Vikrant aka Hrithvik ko dekh ke lagta nahin woh 1000years ka hai😆. And Neera 😭 Deserves a fair, clean and sane life. Please Save her.😭
And Moni You are awesome🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr

Oh God. So sad. But Vikrant aka Hrithvik ko dekh ke lagta nahin woh 1000years ka hai😆. And Neera 😭 Deserves a fair, clean and sane life. Please Save her.😭
And Moni You are awesome🤗


thnks ..woah ooopsss...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
@moni Why will Neera kill her own children if Hrithvik nullify the curse which was casted by the pathetic insane widow???😕
And Why are you laughing dear?? Tell me mujhe v hasna hai😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr

@moni Why will Neera kill her own children if Hrithvik nullify the curse which was casted by the pathetic insane widow???😕
And Why are you laughing dear?? Tell me mujhe v hasna hai😆


because he has to cast his spell on her to completely nullify it and kill.he doesn't know that she is such a big danger to her kids but don't worry her kids are not some bhole people.they are too far than neera is.you will get to see it in coming updates.i am pretty much surprised that i updated after so long and only you commented till now.looks like people lost interest in this ff.😭
i wrote it in once upon why i was laughing>
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by lucykaede
because he has to cast his spell on her to completely nullify it and kill.he doesn't know that she is such a big danger to her kids but don't worry her kids are not some bhole people.they are too far than neera is.you will get to see it in coming updates.i am pretty much surprised that i updated after so long and only you commented till now.looks like people lost interest in this ff.😭
i wrote it in once upon why i was laughing>


I am here because I am free today and caught by flue and can't able to sleep. People will comment later.Don't worry. But Hrithvik will cast his spell to nullify the curse .Then how does the kill word arise??
And yeah I know her kids are very talented😉😆 .But they are sane and clean na😕.So why are they too far than Neera??

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