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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Dear Lucy as I mention earlier your writing has something special. It spell bound the readers.
👏👏👏.Keep it up.
And now I got it. It was Anu aka Neeranjana who killed Suryasree and made some illusion so that everybody were fored to think that Surya was killed by someone else and Anu was trying to save her as well as her child. Poor Vikrant aka Hrithvik couldn't able to find the truth. And I like Shekhar's dialougue-Stepfather or son-in-law. Most probably Neera did so that Little Karthik had a possitive impact on his mind about her.
But I wonder how will she be destroy?By whom?My prediction is either Hrithvik or Karthik.😉

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Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr
Dear Lucy as I mention earlier your writing has something special. It spell bound the readers.
👏👏👏.Keep it up.
And now I got it. It was Anu aka Neeranjana who killed Suryasree and made some illusion so that everybody were fored to think that Surya was killed by someone else and Anu was trying to save her as well as her child. Poor Vikrant aka Hrithvik couldn't able to find the truth. And I like Shekhar's dialougue-Stepfather or son-in-law. Most probably Neera did so that Little Karthik had a possitive impact on his mind about her.
But I wonder how will she be destroy?By whom?My prediction is either Hrithvik or Karthik.😉

omg why you think neera killed suryashree?

i know i wrote that she wanted to kill her but if she would have killed her it could her hrithvik.

i can assure you that neera didn't killed surya at all.thanks for your comment.

and surya and nupur from the beginning knew that she wants to kill her but there was something that was condemning her.

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#273

ancestors part 2

shekhar-why?why she is playing with other people lives?even after reviving.

nupur-i know you are distressed,shocked and angry.

shekhar-these are understatements.

nupur-i have given up now.i am tired of all this myself.shekhar,i will reveal to you about her intentions.to everyone here so that you guys are no more in dark.

shekhar-what do you mean?don't i know what kind of bitch she is?she killed my father,my professor(professor vishnu)...

nupur-stop it shekhar,she saved you.

shekhar-oh really for what?so that she could come again for more killings.and by the way why you take her side so much?she separated you from me or is it that you never loved me.

nupur-what are you saying?i loved you thats why i allowed it.

shekhar-oh really,so what was coming on me?why i have to be saved?tell me.

nupur-this time not you,i will tell everybody.i am determined now.

hrithvik-i am tired of this.

neera was in her room.

neera-what honey?

hrithvik came and hugged her.

neera-what?

hrithvik-you can read my mind.

neera-that is something i don't want to do.

hrithvik-don't worry,don't be afraid from all this.i don't want to lose my family again.

neera 😭

hrithvik-i will take you guys far away from here where you can be safe forever.

from telepathy..

ashish-killing will never give you peace.

neera-peace was never an option.

hrithvik-we are going away from here.

neera shocked.😲

hrithvik touched her pretty face and kissed her gently.

hrithvik-i am tired of all this.

neera hugged him-me too,she started crying-i am tired of always dwelling in this hell.i wanna escape far away so nothing could ever come between us.

hrithvik hugged her tightly.

hrithvik and neera decided to pack their bags and leave.

yuuvi and mohit in library.

mohit-what a cool book.

yuuvi-yeah,hey shall we read it,it seems rather interesting.

they opened the page.for three hours they read of egyptian ancestors of mutants.

mohit-oh no way..

mohit-agar aisa hain to..

nupur telepathically-you have no idea,you have no ideal what is upon us now.

mohit scared-she will rise again

nupur-she already did.

yuuvi and mohit scared.

mohit-master,but what we have to do with this?why are you scared?

nupur-come back immediately,i have to reveal somethings to you.

shekhar was standing behind her.

shekhar-so you are gonna do it as a get together for us.

nupur-i want my every beloved person to know the truth of me and VALKYRIE.

shekhar-valkyrie?

nupur-a place where they cry.

shekhar-who?

mohit and yuuvi in helicopter.

mohit-yuuvi,god amun ke descendants kise ke bhe bodies ke tukde kar sakte hain.can you believe it?

yuuvi-obviously,after all they are direct descendants of god amun,the sacred god of mutants.

mohit-and this power,which is called akhnamun(its a name of power like shakti in mahadeva,its not some person,its just power).a person that possess akhnamun is the most powerful mutant on the universe.

yuuvi-yes...but i don't think anyone possess akhnamun in today's world.

mohit-when we arrive at home,we will read the entire book and then we will know hey but why master said she already revived again.

yuuvi-yes why master was scared?😕 does nephitiri revived in this world.

read this update again for reminding nephitiri...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/64953840

mohit-are yaar nephitiri nahe,uske descendants.

yuuvi-you didn't read it quite well,when nephitiri daughter was killed by rumasha and her daughter,she became mad and started killing people,to fuel the fire rumasha casted a spell on her which made her insane.then due to guilt she made an infinite loop.she after killing herself will revive again and again until the life where she can break rumasha's spell and become sane again and finally stop killing people.

in next update read whole story of nephitiri and rumasha.

next update title-where it all began

and after this

chapter-10-the place where they cry(get ready valkyrie to be revealed)😃

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#274

she was sweet,she was cute,she was possessive,she was cruel.

i guess its just me and my sadness

such an innocent face,such cruel intentions

the touch of your hand makes me free from all worries.

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#275

sneak peek...

this is an island where they cry

sneak peek of valkyrie..

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chapter-9-where it all began

yuuvi-are yaar,i can't wait to read it.lets read na.

mohit-okay lets start...

once upon a time there was a pharaoh named akhnaten.he used to worship god amun everyday.one day amun got happy and asked him to request for a wish.he will grant his one wish.akhnaten got happy and he asked him for a boon that his all descendants to be mutants.he granted him this boon.he said that a daughter will born in his family that will possess unique powers of possessing cosmic energy.pharaoh got happy.two daughters born to him.one was nephitiri

and other was rumasha

nephitiri was a kind hearted person but rumasha was very arrogant.she was very proud of her powers.their father didn't know who possessed cosmic energy so to test this he tried to sow seeds of hatred among them for each other so that powerful one could devour the other and become supreme strong.nephitiri being compassionate didn't came in evils of his father but rumasha developed extreme apathy towards nephitiri.to add fuel to the fire akhnaten married both of his daughter to another phraoh.

well..nephitiri was loved by the pharaoh and this made rumasha highly angry.she decided to become very strong.she killed her husband and nephitiri's daughter and imprisoned nephitiri at an island.she used to torcher him at that place.she torchered her in every possible way.she ripped her nails,she scared her face,she used to place her on a brick slab.she lost her voice.moreover rumasha used to keep her naked.

this was just a sneak peek of cruelity.she did more which i don't wanna write.

okay..but one day nephitiri felt a flame in her body,a huge flame,when one person came to torcher her she killed him instantly.she started walking,she with her powers got back her beauty and voice.rumasha became shocked,nephitiri tried to kill her but as she was very powerful as she injected nephitiri's blood in her body.rumasha casted a spell on her and nephitiri became insane.she started killing everybody.she used to everyone as her enemy,less from the spell,more from the emotional torcher she felt.she killed crores of people.then she came to india.here a king fell in love with her.she married him to kill more people.but his love made her stop for a while.one day she killed her own son in anger.being extreme guilty she killed herself but before it she made sure she will revive again.next time she revived as a normal girl in a poor family.they abandoned her as she was girl to an orphanage.orphanage's manger named her suhani.

yuuvi turned next page but...

yuuvi-are yaar aage to kuch likha nahe hain..

mohit-are dekh na ye neeche kya likha hain.

YUUVI-WAHE JO HAMNE PADHA THA PEHLE.

SHE WILL RISE AGAIN.

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here are all avatars of the daughter of akhnaten who possessed akhnamun(greates power of mutants)

1-nephitiri

2-suhani(Small neeranjana)

3-big neeranjana

4-anu/new neeranjana/neera

you don't have to get confused,the all are same soul and same person.they are not different from another.

NEPHITIRI/SUHANI/NEERANJANA/ANU/NEERA(THEY ALL ARE SAME PERSON)

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#278

next update title-a place where they cry

sry this update will be late but long.

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mahachapter theme song

nephitiri/neeranjana/neera vs rumasha/black widow

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rKV195eXg7I

lyrics...

Behind where I looked back; (Who's in the front?)
In the dark, I sank in my nails (and tore apart the night)

The raindrops turn into droplets of blood and travel down my cheeks
If there's no place for me to return to anywhere anymore

Take these fingers, my fingers
I'll take you away with all of your fingers
To the unopened forest where cicadas cry
I can't turn back anymore

Being extinguished one by one; (the blue flames)
Beyond the darkness, (the morning won't come anymore)

Inside the mirror, with countless wriggling hands reaching out
Come on, lure someone here

sister, come here, to where my hands clap
No matter how you flee, I'll capture you
From the animal trail where cicadas cry
The voice that I heard is no more

Take these fingers, my fingers
I'll take you away with all of your fingers
To the unopened forest where cicadas cry
I can't turn back anymore

sister, come here, to where my hands clap
No matter how you flee, I'll capture you
From the animal trail where cicadas cry
The voice that I heard is no more

lyrics are also in video on upper right.

oni san means dear brother but here it says dear sister.😉(nephitiri and rumasha)

Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago