When We Are Together...!! (Ami-p2 & Buddhinie-p5)

My dear Rose,

life always amused me with unexpected tosses and turns. At a turn, I found you. I saw you were alone. May be The One Above might have written your name with that of mine. I do believe I was born for you.

Every time I lost hope, your trust reminded I'm having it within. You made me confident and cross all seas. And without you, nothing was possible.

You are proud about me, you're happy with my little achievements. But I always saw, your happiness always curtained a deep sorrow behind. Even in your sleep, your pretty eyes had it behind those eyelids. Everything you do, always have an impression of your incomplete dream that has been nipped before it could flower. I want to nurse it again, I want it to be true. I want you to be true.I dont want you to be something others would love to invent in you. For that, I want your heart to speak. I want you yourself to tell me your dreams. Our togetherness always had created something more promising and beautiful. Then why are you afraid to let your dream speak? Dont you trust me as much as I trust you. Or do you feel I cannot understand your world and see your dreams as the way you see?Am I not the right one for you? Still I'm a stranger, aren't I?

I'm just a sweetmaker. A simple, common man. I don't know to dream big. What I know is I could support you with all power I have, my arms will carry you any far long, my shoulders can hold your head when you're broken and I will awake till every cloud in your life rain to end. Every haunted night finally has to diminish itself for a pristine dawn. And there I wait to brighten you as your sunshine.

I know its not easy for you. It is really very hard. But I want you to do it. We together will do it. Because I love you. I just simply love you without any reason.

My dear, with me, arise to the new dawn that has been waiting for you, where there are no you and I, we are only one together. As the dusk fades, when I sit beside you, I want you to keep your head on my shoulders, with no strings attached. I want to be with you, just only you, as real as you are, as free as you could be.

I loved you without knowing what or who you are. I love you with all my heart and soul. Like a flower and fragrance, we fell in love with each other despite our differences. What brightens our path is our togetherness, our trust in each other. Give me your hand, none of our dreams are far away with you and me together...

your loving sunshine..


EDIT---read wonderful replies by Ami on page 2 and Buddhinie on page 5...

Oye JAMi.. Tu aa gayi apne chhore kaa Haal-E-Dil bayaan karne..😆..

This is indeed sheers of brilliance writing.. I treasure each word you've written..👏 ⭐️ 👏..

It's really cleric, ecclesiastic, providential, delicate, soulful..As I say, Pure joy to read. You just made my night with this divine letter. Now I'll be able to sleep peacefully..😆(without bothering my brainwa about why n how's stuff)..

I particularly love following lines:-
I love you with all my heart and soul. Like a flower and fragrance, we fell in love with each other despite our differences. What brightens our path is our togetherness, our trust in each other.

Sorry to go out of topic:- Yeh exam near time itnaa emotional hathoda kyon maraa re?? kya meri bimaari lag gayi?? 🤪

wow...wt a soul touching words u written...👏

Brilliant piece of writing JAM. I am wonder struck at the depth of talent in the forum. Hats off to you..👏👏 You have brought out the soulful connection between our Diya aur Bati so well. They are indeed unique.Despite stark differences in their backgrounds the connection they have been able to establish touches our heart. They are a couple made in heaven.The pain of Suraj in Sandhya hiding her dreams and the prodding and pushing gently from his side to make her reveal it is well brought out. I often wonder whether such depth of emotion and the emotional connect exist between two people in the real world or is it just an illusion to be watched and enjoyed not experienced. I am sure in the coming weeks this depth of his love for his Beendani will give him the courage to stand up against Bhabo and fight for what is right. Once again accept my compliments over a wonderfully written poem.The play of words leave me awestruck.

Wonderful piece of writing, poetic version of Suraj's thoughts.

jami this is really heart touching😭 ..kudos to the writer in u ..👏
nothing more to add u said it all ..
just thought of this song after reading ur post and after seeing the epi ..
the last stanza is so apt for the situation ..
song by
BLUE RODEO - KNOW WHERE YOU GO/TELL ME YOUR DREAM



Nothing can compare
To how I feel
When I'm by your side
And nothing can compare
To the world
I see in your eyes

'Cause I know where you go
Love how you know
How to take me there
Yea I know where you go
Love how you know
How to take me there

You fill my head
With colours
Of wonder and delight
You move across my mind
Like the dance
Of the Northern Lights

'Cause I know where you go
Love how you know
How to take me there
Yea I know where you go
Love how you know
How to take me there

As we sat in front of that August moon
You said the clouds they look like angel wings
Sometimes I wonder if you can read my mind
'Cause I was thinking the very same thing

When I'm with you all the stars shine through
My heart opens up like a morning flower
You know I'd leave it all behind
'Cause my only peace of mind
Is when I'm here with you

So tell me your dream
Lay your head on my pillow
Tell me the things that you hide away
Your pain
Your pleasure
Your sorrow
Tell me the things that you hide away
Your pain
your pleasure
your sorrow

I am trying to write something to comment for a while...!!! I dont know what to write...!!! May be this called speechless...!!! Brilliant Jam di..!!!👏 👏 👏

Dear Sunshine,

You're the aura that I breathe, the very precise that I indigence, my heart, my soul, my all. The most cloying of my memories arrive when I think of you. The euphony of your voice exceeds that of the biggest orchestra whizzing out its very best composition. Words alone restrain me to explaining precisely how I feel about you

I can say you're the only reliever to me, the only one who ever took the ache to empathize me. You dry every tear that descends my cheeks. Loving you is the most graceful thing that ever occurred to me and I'll eternally treasure the moments we've spent together.

You're the one I want to share everything with - my persuasions, promises and dreams. I understand that you want me to pour out my ambition to you. I'm at present trap in between my dad's dream and Bhabho's expectation as a Daughter in Law. For me to fulfill Bhabho's expectation is more poignant than my own ambition. She's my mother and her love for me is like a Rose – always blossoming, forever caring, always giving and always sharing.

You've makes my heart feel full. You're such a reservoir of aspiration for me. I love you more than you could perhaps know and my love continues growing every time I see you fighting to make me happy. You're a Gift from Almighty. You made me conceive in true love in my grimmest moments. Meeting you is like a source of alight that riddles through the end of a dark tunnel. I love you so much forever through eternity.

This is sheer brilliance Jami!! Brilliant stuff.. really touched my heart!😊 Thanks for such beautiful words!!😊