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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello everybody
I know that i am supposed to update Wrong number but I am having this idea for more than a month

So i thought of penning it down

This is a perfect OS,
By this I mean that it has only one part and no continuation is planned by me

Some of you might have read my other works. For new readers , pls read my others works if you are interested

1.Those pair of eyes (OS) - Completed

2. In love with you ...forever (OS) - Completed

3. That's Another Love Story(SS) - Completed

4. Wrong Number (SS) - Ongoing

This is my fifth work and this is a contemporary one 😛

Note : This is not a copy of any other work .Any similarities you come across is purely unintentional . If any complaints please pm me 😛


Please Ignore errors .I'm in a rush to my FIIT class . Hope u'll enjoy

Happy reading !!!

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Ms.Mechanic

"Holy crap …………." Maan muttered in frustration banging the wheel with his foot and then yelped in pain .

"Ouch "

"On all the 365 days , should my car stop working only today , in this weather , Tough luck " he cursed moving his wet hair from his forehead .

It was raining cats and dogs and his car was stuck in the middle of the streets in Mumbai at eleven in the night . He pulled his phone and found that it was dead .

"Worst day of my life , ever " He muttered

He looked around to find a shop . To his bad luck there were only few ones around him and all of them were locked . Just then , a light glowing just a few metres away caught his eye.

He rushed towards and saw the board above . G Mechanic s.

He read further - A-Z , All kinds of repairs will be fixed .

He looked inside with great hope only to find a girl , with her back facing him fiddling with the tools . She was dressed in a baggy tracks , a loose T-shirt and a black coat over it . Her hair was tied in a very high pony with few strands out

Sensing some one , the girl turned . Her face has several marks of grease but yet she managed to look cute .

"May I help you sir ??????????"

"Urm………..yeah …………Actually my car isn't starting .Some major problem , I guess ………..Could you tell me where the mechanic is ???????"

"Sir , I am the Mechanic of this shop "

"What ???? You ?????? I mean , a girl ????? "

"What do you mean by a girl … y cant a girl work in a mechanic shop ????"

"Listen Miss or Mistress …………..I think you are working in this shop . I want to meet your boss . Could you guide me to him ???????"

"I am the boss here ……………."

"What ??????? you must be joking …………………….."

" I am damn serious …………. I am the boss and the employee here , In short I run this shop single handed "

"okay , okay hands up …………. Could you tell me if there is any other mechanic shop which will be open around "

"You wont find any garage open 3 miles around , this is the only mechanic shop which will be open till 1 in the mid night in this area "

"Crap !!!!!I don't have any way out "

"Nope you have one way , You can get fixed ur car here !!!!!!!!!!"

"What !!!!!!! its impossible ……………………… You can't fix my car , I mean I have tried to fix it for the past half an hour but it wont budge a bit "

"I guess , you are in a mechanic shop as you were not able to fix it …why do you need a mechanic if u can fix the car by ur own "

"I did not mean it ………………..I was telling that , I being a man could not fix it …….how can a girl fix it "

"What do u mean ???? That girls cant fix a car !!!!!!!!! We can do everything u can do …………..Do you think girls to be a chit of fashion who keeps wearing pen heels and is worth of handling just a make-up brush and not a spanner ????"She asked in one breathe

"Hey relax ……….I was not telling that ……………..I was just telling that you wont be able to do it "

"Exactly !!!!!!!! Why wont I be able to do it ????? Apne College ki topper hoon !!!!!!! Why cant I ???"

"You are a graduate ?????"Maan asked shocked

"Ofcourse , I am Geet Handa , B.E (Mechanical Engineering ) "

"Mechanical Engineering ?????????!!!!!!! I thought girls dot choose that …………….they are not strong and confident enough to study this course " He told and then realized he made a wrong move

"That's your thought Mister ………………………….. "

"Hey hey no offence , why are u working as a mechanic when u are a graduate "

"When a person who knows nothing about cars and who has neither completed any course can fix a car , why cant a graduate who had learnt in detail about machines do it …………"

Maan did not know what to reply , "Why didn't you apply in any company "

"I had applied , but those pathetic silly pigs rejected me just because I am a girl "

Maan laughed at her choice of words - Pathetic Silly Pigs

"Why didn't you opt for civil or computer ………………Why did you opt for mechanical "

"I want to be different , No girl chooses Mechanical Engineering …………..So I opted for it "

"I think you love to challenge the world "

"Nope , I love to be challenged by the world , I am a fighter "She told proudly .

"And I would love to fight with your car "She added and winked

"Do you still have any problem with me fixing your car "

"No not at all…………."

"Good ……………… even if u have a problem you have to come to me only ….You don't have a choice "

Telling this she pulled out her kit and dumped on his hands .

"Carry them to your car "

She pulled out a plastic sheet and few rods . Maan could not understand what she was actually doing .

"Shall we ????"She asked draping the hood of her coat on her head .

"Hmmm…….yeah "

They walked to his car in the heavy downpour and the very next second he saw geet tying the plastic sheet to a branch in the tree . She climbed the tree and tied one side of the sheet pulling the rope with all her might .

She made a jump from the tree and repeated the same with the other side of the tree . Maan was shocked to see a girl jumping like a monkey .

Geet came to maan and stood before him with attitude .

She put her hand in front of him .

Maan dug his pockets and placed the keys on her hand . Geet jogged to the driver seat and inserted the key into the keyhole and tried starting the car .

"I told that its not working ………..then why are u trying to start the car ?????"

"I just wanted to assure myself that u inserted the key before igniting the engine " She told and smiled cheesily .

"Oh please !!!! I know I am a better driver than you . You need not test me …………….I am sure you wont be able to fix the car "

"We'll see ????????"

"We'll see " Man replied

"Halla bol " Geet told raising her arm in the air .

She brought her arm forward and pointed her finger to his chest and then pointed to the plastic sheet which she tied to the trees .

"Stand under the shed .You may catch cold if you stand here " She told sensing that he was feeling very cold .

Maan did not argue back and stood under the shed . He looked at her opening the bonnet of the car. She inspected the cables and tanks in it for a long time .

Geet turned and saw maan under the shed . She saw that he was shivering due to cold and he needed something warm . She went near him bent down and took a kettle which she had brought with her from the garage .

She poured some hot tea into a cup and gave him .

"Have this , You will feel better ……………………….."

"Thanks " he told and took the cup .

Geet just smiled and continues with her work . Half an hour passed with geet trying to fix the car and Maan staring at what she was doing .

Geet crawled under the car and started to fix . She put her hands outside and yelled "Torch"

Maan passed her the torch . After 15 mins she figured out the worn part and started to fix it .

The clock struck 12 in the midnight but geet was no where stopping . After almost half an hour geet came out of the car . She dusted her hands and hopped into the driver seat .

She started the engine and zoomed out within a second .Maan stood there shocked .

My Car he muttered within his breathe .

He waited for 10 mins but geet was nowhere to be seen .

I bet this girl did not repair it properly . It must have got stuck somewhere . I am sure I am gonna win the challenge .

He waited for her to come walking . It would be a treat to see her grumpy face . Maan smirked to himself .

Suddenly something bright flashed before his eyes . Maan immediately closed his eyes and rubbed it and then saw in the direction of the light . It was a car with geet inside .

The car approached him in a fast pace and maan was rooted to his place. Geet hit the brakes and the car stopped just a few inches before him . Maan hopped backwards in order to save himself from being struck . Geet raised an eyebrow and got out of the car .

"Nice car …….."She said

"I just went for a test ride ……. "

Maan did not know what to reply . Silence prevailed for a few seconds

"Thanks ………………"Maan told

"Nah nah , its okay ……………………..BTW I won "She told and winked

Maan made a grumpy face .

"Two thousand and five hundred " geet told

"For what …..?????"

"Ofcourse , They are the charges for fixing the car ……….. you expect me to be a dhaan prabhu ????? Never ……………………….."

Maan dug to his pockets and pulled out his wallet . He took a few crisp notes and handed them to her .

"What's for the bet ??"

"What ??? We did not make any agreement for money ………"

"I don't want any money .Just tell :-

Geet Madam , you are great ……..Girls are great ……………Girls can do anything and everything in this world .They are definitely no lesser than boys.

"No ways .Im not gonna repeat what u told "

"I have the keys with me ……….Forget your car if u don't want to repeat . "

Maan sighed and told

"Geet madam , you are great ……..girls are great …..Girls can do anything and everything in this world and they are definitely no lesser than boys …………………….. Now keys please !!!!!!!!!"

"Salute "

"What "

"I told salute , else no keys "

"Fine " and he made a perfect salute

"Much better " she told and threw the keys to him

Maan caught it .

"Good morning " Geet told and started to collect her things . She unties the shed and folded it neatly and left towards her garage . Maan hopped into the driver seat and started driving . The car was moving smoothly .

On the way he saw geet's workshop and peeped out to see that she was working with a car. He smiled and drove towards his home .

10 MONTHS LATER

Maan was driving from his office .

"Yes, Boss …I will be there at the site tomorrow …" he told and cut the call .

His car suddenly stopped and it was not starting . He glanced at his watch and saw that it was 10 in the night .

He peeped outside and saw that all the shops were closed .He realized that it was the same place where Geet's garage was situated . He started walking towards it and saw that the lights were on .

"Time to meet Miss.Mechanic , again " He told smiling to himself and walked towards it .

-------------------------------THE END---------------------------------


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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Vey nice OS. Reminded me of my college days. I studied ME too. There were only 3girls in our class.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ossum i am a mechanical engineer too!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow!that was awesum and so different...
Maan's nite with a mechanic...cool...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
loved it...
awesome story line...
but why did you end it so soon...
it is like such two strangers meet... nice encounter...
i would be happy if you continue this story...
beautifully written...
do continue pls...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow just loved d OS...
super cool...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dat Was Awesome Man !! 😃 !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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a cute and sweet OS😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
man was this geet so cute and a mechanic cool
how could he say all this to geet
hello you would think she knew what she was doing other wise why would she have opebed a garage
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely story
So Maan meets a woman mechanic and believe it
But it would be nice if you continued it

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