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Summer

@buttercup122

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

eagerly waiting for the second part

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Right when dadi said Garima hi voh aurat hain... i could feel a THUD!! the ball has dropped!!

Loved Khushi's excitement... Hospital?!?

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mentalist

@mentalist

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Something has happened. Has it not? The same reason for which Khushi is at the hospital, and isn't going to forgive him this time around. It seems to be related to her family, cause when it comes to them- this women ain't going to budge an inch.
Such a riveting start! :) Looking forward to the next part!

Edited by mentalist - 12 years ago

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

I am just loving different takes on the current situation of the show..
Loved the start.. I could only hope Arnav understand the truth completely. I know it ll not be easy for him to think rationally and choose but i just hope he does..
Continue soon..

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insanelycrazy

@insanelycrazy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

thank god its a 2 shot, cus if it was just one, id be all confused, and wouldn't know wat to expect or to not expect..

W*F happened?! i mean khushi the definition of selfless, is all mad, so must be something serious.. hospital? did something happen to garima??

i shall choke arnav to death if he did something again.. grrr..

lovely OS.. :) it was soo intriguing.. so im glad you're gonna finish it up :P :D

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

shit, arnav has to stand for khushi, she does not desrve all dis pain !!!!!

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Skye.

@Skye.

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Loved it!!!! Eager to know what happens next!!!

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newmoon2011

@newmoon2011

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Excellent start
Waiting for the next part

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

always a fan of your writing! a start where i am scared of the end...

cant wait!

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Of all the stories that I have read on the current track this one is the most gripping and the best written.

I'll try and stalk you but if possible please PM me part 2. Thanks :)

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago

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